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大作文即三段:

第一段:描述图画+阐释寓意

第二段:原因分析/举例论证

第三段:解决措施/总结

第一段:

1、 描述图画(如图所示+描图)

1) According to the picture,

2) As can be seen from the cartoon,

3) As is vividly shown in the cartoon,

4) As is truly demonstrated in the photo above,

5)

It can be seen from the diagram that 描图公式:

次要动作1-ing +n+(介词+地点) ,人1 + is/are + 主要动作1-ing +n+介词+地点(+介词+方式+地点),while 次要动作2-ing +n+(介词+地点) ,人2 + is/are +主要动作2-ing +n+介词+地点(+介词+方式+介词……)

2、 图下文字

Under the picture , there is a thought-provoking word/phrase/sentence:对文字翻译

3、 阐释寓意

There is no doubt that the purpose of this picture is to show us a serious problem/an important phenomenon/truth:

反面主题的模板

第一段:用以上分析

第二段:原因分析

1、 过渡句:

Why can this phenomenon take place? As far as I am concerned, there are several reasons that can account for this phenomenon. 2句:① 人民群众意识不够 The primary reason is that, to some people, the consciousness of 主旨(正面)is still not so strong. They do not think it is a serious problem to 主旨(反面)。

②法律法规不健全 And the second cause is that the management of 主旨(正反面都可)is not satisfied. For example, in some regions, the rules of 主旨 are seldom performed effectively.

3句:„„„

第三段:

1、 结论句

For my part, it is imperative that we should take drastic and effective measures to solve the problem. 2句:措施1

In the first place, we should conduct more education in schools and communities in order to let more people realize

the importance of 主旨。

3句:措施2

In the second, more regulations should be enacted and performed by the government to restrain the act of 主旨(反面)

4句:展望未来

I am convinced that our future is bound to be better and better if we can 主旨(正面,用动词原形)

正面模板

第一段:1、描述图画

2、 图下文字(自己选择要不要写)

3、 阐释寓意:There is no doubt that the purpose of this picture is to show us an important truth/phenomenon: we should + 主旨

第二段:

第一句:过渡句

The picture is based on social reality.

第二句:从三个思路中选择

思路一:从小到大,同义复现

As we all known, every person should 主旨(动原)。 Indeed, one can easily go further to find out the implicit

meaning of this chart not only on personal level but also on social level that human beings need to 主旨(动原)。 In an ever-changing world, more and more global problems plague the planet. Any nation cannot solve these problems without 主旨。 To put another way, an individual needs 主旨 to succeed; a family needs 主旨 to be happy; a society needs 主旨 to be harmony; a nation needs 主旨 to be thriving; human need 主旨 to be prosperous.

思路二:举研究例子

According to a recently survey conducted by a world famous organization, the number of people who 主旨(过去式) has been increasing in these yeas. To put another way, more and more people start to know the importance of 主旨。

思路三:举“我”的例子

A case in point is me. In the past, I was a person who did not 主旨。But one day, I began to learn to 主旨。 And I felt satisfied with what I have done. This is part of what 主旨 can bring to us.

第三段:总阶段

1句:From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that + 主旨

2句:Accordingly, it is vital for us to provide the

youth/ourselves with more chance to 主旨/carry out the action of 主旨

3句:展望未来。(同反面模板的展望未来)

双面模板(如私家车、网购的利弊) 第一段:描述图片+引出话题

1句:描述图片

2句:图下文字(可写可不写)

3句:引出话题 This interesting picture provokes us to think about 对象

第二段:利弊分析

1句:不可或缺

对象 has become an indispensable part of the modern life

2句:讲优点

It bring us much convenience 、pleasure and many opportunities.+具体优点(人 钱 时间)

3句:讲缺点

However, the other side of the coin should not be ignored. + 具体缺点(人 钱 时间)

第三段:扬弃

Since 对象 is/are partly good and partly bad, abandoning it/this attempt will be an unwise, simplistic answer, which leads to missing opportunities as well as troubles. We should learn to protect ourselves from its evil part and make better use of its advantageous aspect. And I am convinced that our future is bound to be better and better If we can deal with 对象 properly.

人生价值观类

第一段:描述图画+引出话题

第二段:xxx 很难去定义 (以happiness 为例)

It is obvious that (happiness) is difficult to define. We all know people who have easy and comfortable life, and yet are essentially unhappy. And we may also have friends who have suffered a lot but remain happy. Therefore, happiness is actually one ’s own making. If you have a positive attitude and are determined to find the little happiness of life, you are destined to be happy, no matter what situation you are in„„

第三段:(happiness ) is an attitude, not a condition. It lies in the struggle to be (happy). People sometimes go to extremes and pursue money, power, high social status and so on, which are all symbols of success-but never (happiness). In my opinion, if everybody can enjoy the process of struggling, he or she would be much (happier).