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2016年安徽中考题预测

1. 人物描写 2.行为习惯3. 卫生与健康4. 科技热点(如网上写作业的利弊) 要重视的是安徽未考话题所能用到的相关句型和一些可套用在多种话题下的万能句型。

“人物描写”。

[2015黄冈市中考真题]

用微笑播撒阳光,用行动践行梦想,用一种无形的精神力量感染着身边的每一个人,为同学们树立了一个个积极向上的榜样——这就是“阳光少年”。

某中学自开展“向阳光少年学习”的活动以来,我们的身边涌现了许许多多的“阳光少年”,请你以“A Sunshine Teenager”为题写一篇英语短文,介绍一位你身边的“阳光少年”(假如这位阳光少年名叫XiaoHui )。

要点提示:

1. 诚实善良、团结友爱、乐于助人;

2. 热情、活泼、开朗、乐观向上;

3. 热爱劳动、不怕困难、心怀感恩,积极为父母、师长分忧;

4. 勤奋好学,积极参加各种文体活动。

参考词汇: friendly; be ready; warm-hearted ; outgoing; active; housework; be afraid; share; take an active part in;

写作要求:

1. 词数不少于90(开头已给出,不计入总数);

2. 内容完整,语言流畅,不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;

3. 短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。

写前思考

1. 审---时态+人称:一般现在时+第三人称为主;

2. 列---要点齐全:4+n (适当补充一点) ;

3. 写---完整的句子+连接词。

OK ,让我们看一下这道话题的范文1.0版本~~

普通版:

My school, No.1. Middle School, had an activity “Learn from Sunshine Teenagers”. So we found that there are many sunshine teenagers in our school.

Xiao Hui is one of them. He is honest, kind and always ready to help others. He is also very warm-hearted, outgoing and active. He loves doing all kinds of works. He

helps his parents do housework like cleaning and washing at home. At school, he is also helps his teachers. He is never afraid of difficulties and always faces them with courage and wisdom. He is not only good at study but also takes an active part in all kinds of activities.

He is a sunshine teenager and we all like him.

Now ,让我们看一下这道话题的范文2.0版本~~

进阶版:

Our school, No.1. Middle School, had an activity “Learn from

Sunshine Teenagers”. From then on, there are many sunshine teenagers around us. Also , he is

warm-hearted, active and outgoing. He always shares all kinds of his parents’ housework, like doing the dishes, sweeping the floor and

making dinner. He is never afraid of different difficulties. He works very hard and he likes reading. And he takes an active part in all kinds of

. He learns a lot from all these activities.

Xiao Hui is

普通版仅仅按照字面意思翻译,没有增加拓展的内容,且连接词缺乏。

进阶版中绿色为增加的内容,红色为连接词,黄色为增加文采分的词组。

【描写人物常用词汇分类】

外貌描写:tall 高的; medium size 中等身材;thin 瘦的;fat 胖的;beautiful, good-looking 美丽好看的;long straight hair with big eyes 长黑发,大眼睛;(介绍外貌时候可用上定语从句,开篇就亮点。)

性格描写:kind 善良的;patient 耐心的;strict 严厉的;friendly 友好的;clever but careless聪明但是粗心的;outgoing 外向的;quiet 安静的;honest 诚实的;humorous 幽默的;

描写爱好:be ready to do sth. 乐于做某事; be good at = do well in 擅长于; love/like doing sth. 喜爱做某事 enjoy doing, be fond of, be crazy about, be interested in , prefer to do/doing

评价:be popular with , be respected by, be honored as, be considered ad, be famous for, be regarded as, set a good example等。

小试牛刀

请以 My Real Friend 为题写一篇作文。

提示:朋友,是思想上值得依赖,情感上可以依托,学习上能得到帮助,生活上给予关照的人。请写一、两件事情来讲述你和朋友之间真挚的友情。 要求: 1、请根据所给题目,用英语写一篇短文,词数不少于60个;

2、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;

3、文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;

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参考范文 A Real Friend

Everyone needs friends. Friendship plays an important role in our lives. Friends can encourage us to be better and we can share our hopes and dreams. Amy is a real friend of mine who is like this.

When I became a middle school student, I don't do well in English or math. I fell behind others. I was worried and upset. At that time, Amy often lent me her notebooks and came to my house to help me after school. When I wanted to give up, she always encouraged me to hold on. Thanks to Amy, a month later I caught up with others. Now both of us are in Grade 9, we have the same

dreams - to be a student in a good university. I believe we can achieve our dreams.

A friend in need is a friend indeed. Amy is such a good friend who I will cherish forever.

“卫生与健康”。

你身边有人抽烟吗?请写一篇小短文说明抽烟的害处。要求80词左右。

提示:

1. 抽烟的坏处: 抽烟的人头发和衣服有难闻的气味; 他们的牙齿和手指会变黄;抽烟的人更可能患上心肺疾病;抽烟会危害到自己周围的人。2. 戒烟的好处: 有益身体健康;节省开支。

Smoking and Health ________________________________________________________________________________ ✎ 写前思考How to express them in English? 1. 危害健康 2. 浪费钱财 3. 头发和衣服会有难闻的气味 4. 引发心肺疾病的可能

5. 牙齿、手指会变黄

6. 危害自己周围的人

✍ 对照翻译

1. smoking is bad for health

2. a waste of money

3. terrible smell in one's hair and clothes

4. may cause heart and lung diseases

5. have bad/yellow teeth and fingers

6. smoking is bad for the people around you

OK ,让我们看一下这道话题的范文1.0版本~~

Smoking and Health

Everyone knows smoking is bad for health. It's also a waste of money. People who smoke too much may not live long. Many people die from smoking each year.

Smokers have bad teeth, yellow fingers . Their hair and clothes may smell terrible. A lot of people always cough because of smoking. Smoking can easily cause heart and lung diseases.

Smoking is bad for smokers, and it's also bad for the people around them, too. Giving up smoking is good for health, and can save a lot of money. I hope all the smokers can give up smoking.

有哪些地方还需要改进?

【关注标注的红色部分~】

Now ,让我们看一下这道话题的范文2.0版本~~

Smoking and Health —2.0加强版!!

Everyone knows die from smoking each year.

Smokers have their hair and clothesSmoking can easily cause heart and lung diseases.

Smoking is bad for smokers, and it's also bad for the people around them, too. Giving up smoking is good for health, and can save a lot of money. I hope all the smokers can give up smoking 之前的1.0文章句与句之间,缺少连接词,句子独立缺少联系。

2.0作文看蓝色的补充部分,润色作文。

重点短语+句型打包:

1. 做运动;锻炼身体 take some exercise

2. 对……有害 be harmful to; do harm to; be bad for

3. 身体好 be in good health

4. 健康的饮食 a healthy diet

5. 感冒 catch/have a cold(前者强调动作,后者强调状态)

喉咙痛 have a sore throat

肚子痛 have a stomachache

发烧 have a fever

牙痛 have a toothache

头痛 have a headache

6. 这是一种保持健康的好方法。It’s a good way to keep healthy.

7. 多吃水果蔬菜,少吃垃圾食品 eat more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food

8. 早睡早起,身体倍儿棒 go to bed early and get up early in order to be in good health

小试牛刀

健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢?请根据下面的信息提示写一篇短文,首句已给出。

信息提示:

1. 健康饮食;

2. 早睡早起,不熬夜;

3. 参加运动,强身健体。

要求: 1.根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。

2. 字数在80词左右。

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参考范文

I think healthy habits are very important for us. All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have

healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don't feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.

“科技热点”。

假设你校为了配合创建“文化校园高效课堂”活动,最近以" 学生做作业时是否应该在网上找答案?" 为题做了一个调查。调查发现一些学生赞成, 但许多学生反对这种做法。请你根据调查情况和下列表格中的要点提示,以“Think before you search online”

为题用英语写一篇短文。

注意:

1. 词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好, 不计入总词数;

2. 短文须包括所有要点,不要遂词翻译, 可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;

3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Think before you search online

Some students now have a new use for the Internet — helping them with their homework. But different people have different ideas about it.

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中考作文分为五档,而满分作文即在“第五档”文之列,那么问题来

了~~如何能达到五档文标准,冲击满分呢?我们需要做到以下几点:

要点齐全。(一个都不能少喔!)

语法正确。(不确定是否正确的句子,不!要!写!)

过渡自然。(行文有多流畅就要多流畅!但不是流水账。)

亮点突出。(阅卷老师的反应是:(*@ο@*) 哇~)

字迹工整。(字可以不漂亮,但必须工整!)

OK ,让我们看一下这道话题的范文1.0版本~~

Think before you search online

Some students now have a new use for the Internet — helping them with their homework. But different people have different ideas about it.

Some students agree with it. They don ’t know the answers of the problems, and they have to use the Internet. They think they can learn from other people. It’s easy and it saves time.

But not all the students agree with this. Many students think copying the answers won’t help them. It may make students stop thinking.

I think students should first think over the problems by themselves. If we use the Internet properly, it could be a good way to study. 思考:字数够吗?语法都对吗?过渡自然吗?有亮点吗?

Now ,让我们看一下这道话题的范文2.0版本~~

Think before you search online

Some students agree with it. They sometimes don’t know the answers to the problems. As a result, they have to turn to the Internet.They also think they can learn a lot from other people. At the same time,it’s easy and it saves time. However, not all the students welcome this.

In addition, it may make students stop thinking independently.

From my point of view, students should first think over the problems on their

绿色标记的为连接词,让行文过渡更加自然。

黄色标记的为亮点词汇,让文章用词实现多样化。

蓝色标记的为亮点句,赶紧好好学习吧~!

上面的作文,要点齐全,语法准确,过渡自然,亮点突出,为标准“五档”文,离满分还有一个前提就是:字迹工整!否则直接影响到作文的最终得分。

【热点写作常用词组】

表达利弊:

优点:advantage 具有利于:be good for

有重要性:be of importance 具有帮助:with great help

拓展视野知识:open up one’s eyes 节省时间:save time

获取知识:get knowledge 缺点:disadvantage 有害于:be bad for/ do harm to 浪费时间: waste time

表达心理问题:

高压:high pressure 放松,休息:relax

释放压力:release pressure

师生关系: 师生关系:relationship between teachers and students

减少,使变弱:reduce/ become weak 态度,看法:attitude

网络教育:

网络教育:online education 搜索,搜寻:search 网上冲浪:surf on the Internet 食品安全:food safety 食物中毒:food poisoning 紧急的,急迫的:urgent 其他:文明城市:civilized city

小试牛刀

费费老师给同学们延伸了一道话题——”缓解压力“,你会怎么写?

许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力, 为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分

享,内容包括:

(1) 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么;

(2) 我的压力是什么;

(3) 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。 注意: 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名,词数80~100。

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参考范文

Less Pressure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls!

Pre ssure is a serious problem in today’s world.Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get onwell with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.

In fact, I’m always under pressure, too. My parents always want m e to bethe top student in class. As a result, they send me to all kinds of after-school classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I toldher I was not lazy and I really felt tired. Most importantly, I needed time to relax myself. At last, my mother agreed with me. So I believe a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.

That’s all. Thank you!

“行为习惯”。

养成良好的生活习惯和学习习惯,对于我们每一位学生成长很有帮助。请根据提示要点用英语写一篇词数90左右的短文,发表在学校网站上。

提示要点:

(一)良好的生活和学习习惯包括:

1)在生活方面:①健康饮食 ②经常锻炼 ③利用好时间

2)在学习方面:①课前预习 ②认真听讲 ③独立作业

(二)良好习惯带来的益处包括

1)帮助我们更好的学习知识 2)使我们提高技能,学会自我控制。

(三) 谈谈你的感受

作文要求:

1、表达中必须包含所给提示要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。

2、词数90左右,开头已经写好,不计入总词数。

3、表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。

A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without

thinking,especially something that is hard to stop doing.

_____________________________________________________________________樱花们,思考片刻再下手:

一、审---时态+人称:一般现在时+第一人称为主;

二、 列---要点齐全:

2个方面---生活方面&学习方面

2个益处---帮助学习&自我控制

1个感受---(自我发挥)

三、写---完整的句子+连接词+字迹工整

OK ,让我们看一下这道话题的范文1.0版本~~

A Good Habit, A Successful School Life

In our daily life, we should eat healthy food, do exercise regularly and make full use of our time. In our school life,we should preview before class, listen to teachers and finish homework by ourselves. Good habits can help us gain knowledge easily, improve our skills and control ourselves. So, I think good habits are good for us.

思考:

1. 根据要点划分,分段了吗?2. 句式多变吗? 3. 有连接词吗?或者连接词用的合适吗?4. 有亮点句型或者词汇短语吗?5 你认为这篇能划到几档文?

Now ,让我们看一下这道话题的范文2.0版本~~

A Good Habit, A Successful School Life

绿色标记的为连接词,让行文过渡更加自然。

黄色标记的为亮点词汇,使文章内容丰富充实。

蓝色标记的为亮点句型,句式灵活多变,充分展示语言功底。

【行为习惯常用词汇】

养成好习惯: develop a habit / form a habit / fall into a hait

应该: should / ought to / be supposed to

不应该:shouldn’t / ought not to / be not supposed to

对... 有好处:be good for / benefit sb/

对... 有帮助:be helpful to / help sb/

做... 是必要的: It's necessary forsb to do

做... 是重要的: It’s important forsb to do

有规律的锻炼: excercise regularly / play sports regularly

在学习方面:in our school life

课前预习:preview before class

课后复习:review after class

按时独立完成作业:finish homework on our own on time

认真听讲:listen to teachers carefully

在生活方面: in our daily life

早睡早起: go to bed early and get up early

充足睡眠:enough sleep

小试牛刀

中考在即,同学们倍感学习任务重,压力大。一些同学争分夺秒甚至连课间十分钟休息时间也在学习。针对这一现象,请你以“A Ten-minute Break”为题,写一篇短文。

内容提示:. 十分钟的课间休息很有必要;2. 要注意适当的课间休息方式;

3. 你是怎样利用这十分钟来休息的。

注意:

1. 词数80-100;2. 请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;. 文中不能出现真实的校名和人名;4. 文章的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

A Ten-minute Break

As the high school entrance examination (中考) is coming nearer and nearer, we are having a lot of schoolwork to do and facing great pressure(压力).

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In a word, the ten-minute break is very important because it can make us learn better.

参考范文

A Ten-minute Break

力). As a Senior Three student, time seems much limited. As a result, more and more students try to study from early morning till late afternoon, even during the ten-minute break. In my opinion,to take a ten-minute break between classes is definitely necessary. Otherwise we will feel tired both physically and mentally.

During the ten-minute break, we do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. So doing nothing tiring in that period is really good for us.

My ten-minute break is always pleasing. Sometimes I do some simple exercises. Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside. When the next class begins, I feel fresh again.

【描写人物常用词汇分类】

外貌描写:tall 高的; medium size 中等身材;thin 瘦的;fat 胖的;beautiful, good-looking 美丽好看的;long straight hair with big eyes 长黑发,大眼睛;(介绍外貌时候可用上定语从句,开篇就亮点。)

性格描写:kind 善良的;patient 耐心的;strict 严厉的;friendly 友好的;clever but careless聪明但是粗心的;outgoing 外向的;quiet 安静的;honest 诚实的;humorous 幽默的;

描写爱好:be ready to do sth. 乐于做某事; be good at = do well in 擅长于; love/like doing sth. 喜爱做某事 enjoy doing, be fond of, be crazy about, be interested in , prefer to do/doing

评价:be popular with , be respected by, be honored as, be considered ad, be famous for, be regarded as, set a good example等。

【行为习惯常用词汇】

养成好习惯: develop a habit / form a habit / fall into a hait

应该: should / ought to / be supposed to

不应该:shouldn’t / ought not to / be not supposed to

对... 有好处:be good for / benefit sb/

对... 有帮助:be helpful to / help sb/

做... 是必要的: It's necessary forsb to do

做... 是重要的: It’s important forsb to do

有规律的锻炼: excercise regularly / play sports regularly

在学习方面:in our school life

课前预习:preview before class

课后复习:review after class

按时独立完成作业:finish homework on our own on time

认真听讲:listen to teachers carefully

在生活方面: in our daily life

早睡早起: go to bed early and get up early

充足睡眠:enough sleep

【热点写作常用词组】

表达利弊:

优点:advantage 具有利于:be good for

有重要性:be of importance 具有帮助:with great help

拓展视野知识:open up one’s eyes 节省时间:save time

获取知识:get knowledge 缺点:disadvantage

有害于:be bad for/ do harm to 浪费时间: waste time

表达心理问题:

高压:high pressure 放松,休息:relax

释放压力:release pressure

师生关系:

师生关系:relationship between teachers and students

减少,使变弱:reduce/ become weak 态度,看法:attitude

网络教育:

网络教育:online education 搜索,搜寻:search 网上冲浪:surf on the Internet 食品安全:food safety 食物中毒:food poisoning 紧急的,急迫的:urgent 其他:文明城市:civilized city

重点短语+句型打包:

1. 做运动;锻炼身体 take some exercise

2. 对……有害 be harmful to; do harm to; be bad for

3. 身体好 be in good health

4. 健康的饮食 a healthy diet

5. 感冒 catch/have a cold(前者强调动作,后者强调状态)

喉咙痛 have a sore throat

肚子痛 have a stomachache

发烧 have a fever

牙痛 have a toothache

头痛 have a headache

6. 这是一种保持健康的好方法。It’s a good way to keep healthy.

7. 多吃水果蔬菜,少吃垃圾食品 eat more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food

8. 早睡早起,身体倍儿棒 go to bed early and get up early in order to be in good health