丽江地点介绍作文评讲
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Lijiang (后面没必要加City)

Yunnan Province

the Naxi minority (group/nationality)

the Naxi ethnic minority

in the Ming and Qing dynasties (dynasty不大写,某些范文有大写)

Dongba culture

西北部(英文思维:先南北再东西)

Located/Situated in the northwest of Yunnan Province

Located/Situated in northwestern Yunnan Province

聚居地

Habitat/residency都不适合

若一定要用名词,habitation 比较适合,或living place,但不推荐

或者意译,用be home to ...= be the home of...:. 的家、故乡、栖息地; 推荐:

Lijiang is an ancient town where the Naxi minority group lives/settles/inhabits

Lijiang is an ancient town/the region/place/area inhabited by the Naxi minority group

土木结构房屋

House s made of earth and wood

(be made of/ be made up of/ be made by/ be made into/ be made from) Houses built of earth and wood

Houses of wooden structure

Houses built of earth on the wooden framework土木结构的房子

Cf. houses built of concrete on the steel framework钢铁水泥做的房子

Roads (which are) covered with/ made of pebbles

壁画

Religious wall-paintings

历史悠久

Have a long history/ with a long history

Be of historical significance

风格迥异

Be culturally/highly distinctive in style

Have/in a distinctive/unique style

最简单

Have their own different styles

适当并且符合语境和逻辑的增加细节可以让文章增色不少,比如:

What is worth mentioning is …

Come and explore the splendor and charm of profound memory of your life. (Jinyu)

fascinating religious wall paintings are well worth a visit.

Lijing is a place you have to visit and extraordinary view will make you unwilling to leave. There is no doubt that you will have a good time here. (Jiawei)

catch sight of many stone buildings and archways…(Kaining)

Besides, there are many highly skillful stone bridges and archways…(Yumeng)

Besides, you will see a number of magnificent stone bridges and archways built during the Ming and Qing dynasties, which enjoy a high reputation both at home and abroad. place well worth a visit.(Qiyao)

What will impress you most is that…(Jiaxin)

In addition to the old town buildings, stone bridges and archways dating back to the Ming and Qing dynasties complete the whole image of the peaceful life it once had.(Yuanqi)

When walking around the citymaking the city more attractive and special. (Yingshen)

反面教材:

The paths are made of pebbles, which are good for people’s feet 补充部分不符合语境,语言表达也没有亮点

That’s all. Have a good trip!没必要的东西省去

Not only are the houses mostly made of earth and wood but also the roads are covered with colorful pebbles.不能生硬地堆砌语法,要考虑意思是否说得通