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作文专题

审题过程

1. 时态:主要考虑四种时态:一般现在时,一般过去时,一般将来时,现在进行时。要根据题意判断正确的时态。

11年大联盟作文:my dream

注意:一篇作文可以不止一种时态。

2. 人称:主要有第一人称和第三人称。审题时根据题意用正确的人称写。

1) 如使用第三人称, 需注意三单在一般现在时的用法,动词后需加s 或es 。如:She likes playing ping-pong.

2) 写作过程中注意代词的格式。

如: He (主格) feels tired. I like him. (宾格)

This is his (形代) bike. That’s not your book, It’s mine. (名代)

复数形式:Their English teacher is very funny. They often play football together.

3. 结构:使文章有条理的方法

1) 开头点题,结尾呼应。

例如:my favourite season is summer. …… I like summer best.

2) 中间部分使用时间词语或一些表示顺序的词衔接:

如写过去时的作文:Last Sunday; Last Weekend; My Holiday等

4. 容易出错的句型:

1) be 动词和行为动词: 同一个句子只能出现一种(现在进行时除外) 错误: I was went to the park last Sunday. (把was 去掉)

2) like + 动词ing 形式。

I like going shopping. (注意like 后面紧跟的动词一定要加ing)

3) 三单句子: She goes to school on foot every day. 动词后加s(或es) !

4) There be句型

There is a bird and two monkeys in the tree. (用there is 而不是there are)

范文:

1. 过去时:(动词用过去式)

Last Weekend

I was

chess with my father. I was very happy last weekend.

2. 将来时: (be going to +动词原形 或 will + 动词原形)be going to=will Sunday Plan

I am going to have a busy Sunday. I am going to the park

with my grandparents. We will go fishing there. , I am going to play ping-pong with my friends. we will go to the cinema. I am going to read books and do my homework at home. I will play chess with my father. It will be a funny day!

3. 一般现在时: (第一人称:动词用原形)

My Sunday

I have a busy Sunday. I often go the park with my

grandparents. Sometimes we go fishing there. , I often play ping-pong with my friends. Then we go to the cinema. I often read books and do my homework at home. I often play chess with my father. Sunday is fun!

4. 一般现在时: (三单:注意人称、动词+S)

My family

There are three people in my family. My father is a doctor. He likes playing football. He is very kind. My mother is a teacher. She often reads books in the evening. I am a student. I like playing computer games and do sports with my friends. I often go hiking with my parents on the weekend. I love my family very much.

Writing:

Carmen 是一名时装模特,今年20岁。她身材苗条,饮食习惯和生活习惯健康,酷爱游泳运动,平时喜欢购物、交友、看电影等等。请你根据她的职业特点和爱好,发挥你的想象力,综合考虑住所的四周环境,为她选择一处理想的住所,并简要说明理由。60字左右。(10%) Carmen’s ideal home