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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art Classes? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.

1. 现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班

2. 对这种做法有人表示支持,也有人并不赞成

3. 我认为……

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Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art Classes?

With the hope of their kids the cream of the community , a growing number of parents send their children toart classes, where how to play the piano, dance, sing and play musical instruments is taught. 有关,关于this trend, some people hold a firm position that it is beneficial for kids to attend the classes, through which kids can have an all-round development by acquiring knowledge and skills (which are) not taught in their schools. Besides, kids can also make a lot of friends there, thus enhancing their communication skills. Others, hold an opposite opinion. Kids, in their eyes, should be given more flexible time to relax and do whatever they are interested in. They also list some figures achieving great fame with little school education, not to speak of attending art classes.

As far as I am concerned, children’s interests should be taken into serious before being sent to art classes. Children should be given enough develop by themselves. Whether parents should send their kids to art classes, it depends.

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父母应该送孩子上艺术班吗?

希望孩子成为社会精英,越来越多的父母将孩子送到各种艺术班。在那里,孩子们可以学习如何弹钢琴、跳舞、唱歌和使用一些乐器。

对于这种趋势,有人坚定地认为上艺术班对孩子有利,孩子可以学到知识和技能得到全面的发展。此外,孩子还可以交到许多朋友,交流技能因此也会有提高。然而,有人持相反的看法。在他们看来,孩子必须有充足的时间放松和做他们喜欢做的事情。他们也列出了一些名人,他们几乎没接受过学校教育,更别说上过艺术班了。

在我看来,把孩子送去上艺术班钱,我们必须充分考虑孩子的兴趣。孩子必须给予充足的时间以自我发展。孩子是否该上艺术班视情况而定。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Due Attention Should Be Given to the Study of Chinese. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:

1. 近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象

2. 出现这种现象的原因和后果

3. 我认为……

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Due Attention Should Be Given to The Study of Chinese

Currently, the Chinese 绝大部分individuals 在中国远远不显示出,反应出重视 elements have combined to trigger it. For one 加强语气under way, making the whole planet a village, and English has been in the driving position主导地位 错误的认为拥有an excellent command of Chinese, and further study of it will be of no value. Chinese courses are barely offered in contemporary colleges, which to some extent also compounds this headache .

Great efforts, ought to be made remedy this 应该重视 what we have learned only our splendid history, and only by commanding Chinese can we grasp the essence of our culture.

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应给予汉语学习应有的关注

如今,大部分中国人的汉语水平很一般,这反映出一个令人担忧的趋势:太多的人不重视学习我们的母语。毫无疑问,这个燃眉之急应该得到迫切的关注。

仔细探究,我们可以发现几个因素加起来导致了这个不太好的趋势。一方面,经济与文化全球化已经在深刻进行中,使得世界成为了一个全球村,英语成为了各种语言中的主导语言。因此,整个社会都在过分强调学好英语的极端重要性而汉语的学习几乎背忽略了。另一方面,很多人错误地认为,作为中国人我们已经很好地掌握了汉语,深入学习汉语没有多少价值了。除此以外,大学里很少开设汉语课程,这在某种程度上也加重了这个问题。

我认为,必须付出极大的努力来改善这个不良的趋势。涉及到这个问题的各方应该重视汉语的推广,以便各行各业的人们能够学习到更多自己的语言并以此为荣。而且我们应该意识到我们所学到的知识仅仅触及到了我们灿烂历史的表面,只有掌握好汉语才能够理解我们文化的精髓。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of My View on University Ranking . You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:

1. 目前高校排名相当盛行

2. 对于这种做法,人们看法不一

3. 我认为……

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My View on University Ranking

For the past year or two, college ranking has become immensely prevalent 在中国. A bewildering array of university ranking frequently emerge in various media, (ranging ) from newspapers to magazines to educational sites.concern currently.

of university ranking argue that it can able to be well aware of the gap between them and first-class ones. In this case, those middle or low-ranking institutions will the ranking and the overall academic enhanced. Plus , many college-students-would-be are capable of acquiring more useful information about their desired schools. However, university ranking a wealth of conditions, many college rankings are not objective and even positively 很大的 一小批,一些(贬义)schools with evil intentions fabricate伪造 college ranking in efforts to lure high school graduates.

, we should not overrate this kind of ranking because it cannot the sole criterion to appraise a certain campus. As far as the colleges and universities are concerned, they are supposed to put boosting comprehensive capabilities at the top of the agenda, say, academic fruits and teaching equipments and faculty. Only by doing so can we build first-rated universities progressively.

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大学排名之我见

过去的一两年里,大学排名在中国变得极其盛行。令人眼花缭乱的各种大学排名经常出现在报纸、杂志、教育网站等各种媒体上。可以毫不夸张地说大学排名最近受到了公众的广泛关注。

这个话题已经备受谈论,但是人们的观点迥然不同。很多人赞同大学排名,他们认为大学排名可以作为一种有效的渠道,排名较低的学校可以通过它更加清楚地认识到它们与一流大学之间的差距。在这种情况下,那些排名中等或较低的大学将会努力提升自己的排名,因此总体的学术水平必然会改善。另外,许多准大学生能够获得自己心仪大学的更多有用信息。然而,对于大学排名持有否定态度的人们认为受许多条件所限,许多大学排名很难做到客观,甚至有些是有很大误导性的。除此之外,一些带有不良目的的学校通过捏造相关排名以吸引高中毕业生。

我认为,我们不应该过度重视这种排名,因为它不能作为评价某所大学的唯一标准。就各个大学而言,他们应该将提高综合实力放在首位,比如学术成果、教学设备和师资。只有这样我们才能逐步建设一流大学。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Certificate Craze. Y ou should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.

1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试

2.其目的各不相同

3.在我看来……

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Certificate Craze various certificate among people at all levels. Indeed, obtaining a glittering array of certifications has emerged as According to one recent report conducted by Sina Weibo, one of China's leading Twitter-like services, up to 70 get certificates. As far as the college students are concerned, a wealth of graduates-to-be argue that a wide variety of certifications, especially those highly recognized ones by the whole society, will enormously sharpen their competitive edge compared with their peers in the talent market. From the perspective of white-collar employees, many professional certificates will prominent part when moving up the rigid social ladder.

Admittedly, whether a simple certificate can truly reflect one's real capabilities is widely questionable. Simply stated, we should keep a clear head when it comes to the certificate craze. stand a much better chance of staying ahead in this brutally competitive society.

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证书热

当前,各个阶层的人们参加各类证书考试的兴趣越来越浓厚,听到这样的报道已经很平常了。的确,获得各式各样的证书已经成为了一股“淘金热”。中国领先的类似推特服务的新浪微博最近一项报告显示,高达70%的受访者热衷于考取证书。

在努力获取证书时,人们的目的是显著不同的。就大学生而言,许多准毕业生认为各类证书,特别是那些全社会高度认可的证书,在就业市场与他们的同龄人相比将会极大地提高竞争力。从白领职员的角度来看,许多职业证书将大大影响他们能否升职的可能性。换句话说,在攀登等级森严的社会阶梯时,证书正在起到越来越重要的作用。

诚然,一张简单的证书是否能够反映一个人的真实能力是受到广泛质疑的。简单来说,我们应该对于证书热保持一个清醒的头脑。在我看来,尽最大努力磨练我们的实力和技能是当务之急。只有这样我们在这个竞争惨烈的社会中取得成功的可能性才会大得多。

Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Way to Success by commenting on Abraham Lincoln's famous remark, "Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four hours sharpening the axe." You should write at least words but no more than 【参考范文】

The Way to Success

To paraphrase the US former president Abraham Lincoln, a household name across the whole planet, "I will devote the first four hours to honing the axe if I am assigned a task to cut down a tree within six hours." This prominent comment, in my eyes, ought to trigger rounds of soul-searching over the long-standing issue on the way to success.

Undoubtedly, each individual aspires to taste success in their life. As a matter of fact, we will encounter a wealth of top-performers as well as low-achievers. What is the fundamental difference between them? Digging into this phenomenon, we may identify that those high-achievers have made adequate preparations before embarking upon new tasks. Take Steve Jobs, a great innovator who came up with a string of products having immeasurably transformed our life. We must be acutely aware that he has dedicated a considerable amount of time and effort to preparing for the launch of new items. Therefore, the past decade has witnessed his unprecedented success that no one else can rival.

From my own perspective, in an effort to get ahead, setting a well-defined objective is of crucial significance. More importantly, however, we are supposed to gear up for it sufficiently, both psychologically and physically, which can help us achieve our desired success smoothly.

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成功的道路

全世界家喻户晓的美国前总统亚伯拉罕·林肯曾经说过," 如果让我在六小时内砍到一棵树, 我将用前四个小时将斧子磨得锋利。" 在我看来, 这个著名的言论应该对一个长久的话题引起一轮又一轮的深刻反省:成功的道路。

毫无疑问, 在一生中每个人都渴望成功。事实上, 我们会遇到很多高成就者, 当然也有不少失败者。他们之间的根本差异是什么? 探究这个现象后, 我们会发现那些高成就者在开始新任务之前都已经做好了充分的准备。让我们以史蒂夫·乔布斯为例, 这个伟大的创新者发明了一系列极大地改变了我们生活的产品。我们必须清醒地认识到在新产品发布前, 他都会投入大量的时间和精力去准备。因此在过去的十年里, 他取得了无人匹敌并且史无前例的成功。

在我看来, 为了取得成功, 制定一个明确的目标是至关重要的。然而, 更为重要的是我们应该从身心两方面做好充分的准备, 这将有助于我们顺利获得我们想要的成功。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication

The advent of the Internet ushers in a new era of interpersonal communication. The picture features a compelling scene: a lovely little girl tells her father that he can gain a glimpse of what has happened at school today through her weblog. Along with the emergence of the web and a host of post-Internet products such as blogs, we are supposed to ponder the impacts they yield on interpersonal communication.

Few if any would deny this most transformative invention of the 20th century has hugely boosted interpersonal interaction. To name only one: thanks to the Internet, we now can keep in touch with each other through delivering emails or sending text messages instead of posting lengthy letters in the old days, enormously enhancing the efficiency and cementing the intimate ties among people. However, we should not turn a blind eye to the adverse effects. Currently, growing numbers of folks get hooked on the web and ultimately become socially isolated. Poor social life and feeling of loneliness are not uncommon for a wealth of heavy Internet users.

Admittedly, the net has fed immensely into interpersonal communication, both positively and negatively. Simply stated, what really needs to occur is to make full use of this extremely powerful tool to promote interpersonal communication and strive to reduce the unfavorable influences on us meanwhile. And I firmly believe that desirable interpersonal relationship is exceedingly rewarding for the on-going drive to build a highly civilized and more harmonious society.

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互联网对人际沟通的影响

互联网的到来揭开了人际沟通的新时代。图画描述了一幅有趣的情景:可爱的小女孩告诉父亲他可以通过博客了解今天学校发生的事情。随着网络及许多后互联网时代产物的出现,我们应该思考它们对于人际沟通产生的影响。

这个20世纪最具革新力的发明极大地促进了人们之间的交流, 对于这一点很少有人提出异议。仅举一例:互联网使得我们可以通过邮件或者短信息保持联系,而不是过去通过信件交流,这极大地提高了效率并且加强了人们之间的密切联系。然而,我们不应该对于其负面影响视若罔闻。现在,越来越多的人沉迷于网络,并且逐渐与社会疏离。糟糕的社交生活及空虚寂寞感在互联网过度使用者中屡见不鲜。

诚然,网络已经对于人际沟通产生了巨大的影响。简而言之,真正需要做的是充分利用这个极其强大的工具以促进人际沟通,并且同时减少其对我们产生的不利影响。我坚信,良好的人际关系对于我们正在进行的建设一个高度文明且更加和谐的社会的运动是大有裨益的。

写作经典替换词

1. individuals , characters, folks代替(people , persons)

2. positive, favorable , rosy(美好的) ,promising (有希望的) ,perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding 代替good

3. dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的) 代替bad

如果bad 做表语,可以有be less impressive代替

4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,many, if not most) 代替many.

注:用many, if not most 一定要小心,many 后一定要有词。

Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that…. 同理 用most, if not all ,代替most.

5. a slice of, quite a few , several代替some

6.harbor the idea that, take the attitude that; hold the view that, it is widely shared that,

it is universally acknowledged that)替think(因为是书面语,所以要加that)

7. affair ,business ,matter 代替thing

8.shared 代 common

9.reap huge fruits 代替get much benefit )

10.for my part ,from my own perspective 代替in my opinion

Increasing(ly)/growing 代替more and more( 注意没有growingly 这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly. !!!不要再用 more and more

A growing number of 越来越多的

Sth is increasingly popular 越来越受欢迎

12.little if anything, 或little or nothing代替hardly

13.benefitial rewarding代替helpful; be beneficial of

14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 代替customer

15.exceedingly, extremely 代替very

16.hardly unnecessary, hardly inevitable ... 代替 necessary, inevitable

17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 代替sb take interest in

18.capture one's attention代替attract one's attention.

19.facet,demension,sphere 代aspect

20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest,fear

21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 代替cause.

22.There are several reasons behind sth 代替..reasons for sth

23. desire 代替want.

24.pour attention into 代替pay attention to

25.bear in mind that 代替remember

26. enjoy , possess 代替have (注意process 是过程的意思)

27. interaction 代替communication

28.frown on sth代替 be against, disagree with sth

29. to name only a few, as an example代替 for example

30. next to/virtually impossible,代替nearly impossible

31. Mirror 代替reflect 32. A host of ,a wealth of 代替 a lot of

33. 我认为的表达 不要再用 i think ,in my opinion To my mind

On the part of sb (很好的用法)

In the eyes of sb

I would argue that

34. 重要 的表达 不要再用important !!!!

V ital ,crucial ,essential ,significant ,adj 重要的

Play a key part 重要的

35. 中国的代替用法

In this ancient land 在这个古老的国度

On the Chinese mainland

36. 在将来 in the future 可以换成in the foreseeable future 在课预见的将来

37. 如图所示的表达 as is manifested in the picture

38. Provided that 代替 if

39. In the wake of 代替 after 在..... 之后

40. 每件事物都有两面 everything cuts both ways

41. 其他人观点不一 others think otherwise = others see a different picture

42. 大学生的几种表达

College students

Y oung adults in the Ivory Tower

43. Thanks to 代替 due to 由于

44. 全国各地的表达 from four corners of the nation

from four corners of the globe 代替 all over the word

45. 发达国家 advanced societies