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思路清晰

三四五原则

三:三段式 (主题句 + 扩展句) 四:四类写作模板

五:五大功能段落

CET 写作完美攻略之

--五大 功能段落

1. 现象描述

2. 原因分析

3. 利, 弊分析

4. 观点态度

5. 建议措施

CET 写作模板

1. 利弊对立型

2. 观点批驳型

3. 社会现象型

4. 问题解决型

CET 三段式作文

Paragraph 1 现象描述 (导出问题) Paragraph 2 原因分析 / 利, 弊分析 Paragraph 3 观点态度 / 建议措施

思路 – 怎么写

表达 – 写什么

新闻联播 三段式

国家领导都很忙

全国各族人民的生活都很幸福

世界各地人民都生活在水深火热之中 每段:主题句+ 拓展句

利弊对立型

现象描述

利弊分析

观点态度

批驳观点型

现象描述

建议措施

原因分析

社会现象型

现象描述

意义影响

建议措施

问题解决型

现象描述

意义作用

建议措施

新题型特点

全英文命题

引用他人言论

人生哲理为主题

第一段:直接引用,简要描述

“„„(引用原句) ” Y ou must have heard these words hundreds of times from sb.

2011-12

“Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. I’ve done it hundreds of times.” Y ou must have heard these words hundreds of times probably from your father, your friends, or even yourself.

第二段:内涵提炼,例证阐述

The saying / sentence aims at informing us of importance of „

a strong will

perseverance

diligence

honesty

第三段 结合实际,获得启发

Therefore, we shall „ In one word, where there is a will there is a way.

Therefore, we shall concentrate our energy , thought and mind on the business in which you are engaged, hang on in there and be patient. Just as an old saying goes, where there is a will there is a way.

图表类作文

描述图表内容

评论图表信息

阐明个人观点

遣词 -- Wording

广度--词汇选择

原则一:选词 扬长避短 (动,名) 原则二:措词 变化多端 (形,副)

深度--词汇替换

原则一:高级词替换低级词 原则二:名词替换形容词

正确优先

试用笼统词

二月

February

January

March

month

the second month of the year

试用相关词

向老师表达祝贺

to congratulate teachers

best wishes

to send best wishes to teachers 聚焦当前„

Now,

Nowadays,

These days,

Currently,

At present,

Presently,

Lately,

Recently,

More recently,

近年来

In recent years,

In modern times,

At the present time,

重温旧梦„

Y ears/ Decades ago

In the past few years

In the old days

At one time

once

一次性塑料袋曾被广泛使用 2008-12

Disposable plastic bags were once widely used.

自古到今

From ancient times to present day

down through the ages

展望未来

在将来

in the future

在不远的将来

in the near future

下周 / 下月 / 明年

next + 时间词

next week / month / year

在接下来的一周/月/年

following

in the following week

in the following month

in the following year

在即将到来的一年

in the year to come

in years to come

in the coming year

校学生会将组织暑假志愿者活动,现招募志愿者

Students ’ Union is planning a voluntary program in the coming summer vacation. in the summer vacation to come

in the year ahead

在新一年里

How time flies!

时光飞逝

Light travels like an arrow,

and time like a shuttle.

光阴似箭,日月如梭

Time and tide waits for no man!

岁月不饶人

Time and tide – 岁月,时光

地点

在现代社会

In our modern society,

In our current society,

In our contemporary society

在世界各地

throughout the world

在全国

throughout China

在国内外

at home and abroad

各种“人们”

the public

individuals

characters

population

generation

old generation

young generation

different generations

大多数人

most people

→ the majority of the population 各行各业的人

all kinds of people

→ all kinds of individuals

→ individuals from all walks of life

数量众多

many

many a + 单数可数名词

许多, 大量

Many students have passed the examination. Many a student has passed the examination. 许多同学都通过了考试。

as many as„+ 具体数字

和„一样多;多达,不下于

He has seventy younger sisters. 他有七十个妹妹。

He has as many as seventy younger sisters. 他的妹妹多达 七十人。

a great many许多, 很多, 大量

There are many college students.

There are a great many college students.

a good many

There are a good many college students.

那里有很多大学生。

很多人认为„„

Many individuals think that„

插入语

Many individuals, if not most, think that„.

很多人,即使不是大多数,都认为„.

大多数人认为„„

Most individuals think that„

插入语

Most individuals, if not all, think that„.

大多数人,即使不是全部,都认为„.

很多人认为„„

Many people think that„

Many individuals harbor the idea that„.

很多人都怀有„的想法

Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that„.

很多人,即使不是大多数,都怀有„的想法

Most individuals harbor the idea that„.

多数人都怀有„的想法

Most individuals, if not all, harbor the idea that„.

多数人,即使不是全部,都怀有„的想法

数量众多

quite a lot of..

plenty of...

a host of„

an army of„

a sea of„

an ocean of„

Recently, I’m interested in going up net very much because I look a lot of good information, a lot of good films, and a lot of good music there.

Recently, I find myself greatly interested in surfing on the Internet, for there are an army of useful information, a sea of famous films and an ocean of classic music.

普通版:

I can’t forget the day when my mother bought a computer to me as birthday present. I was very interested in it and I indulged myself in looking for a lot of useful information, and enjoying lots of classic music.

加强版:

I never forget the day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which greatly interested me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information, and enjoying a sea of classic music.

程度标志词

V ery

greatly

unbelievably

incredibly

exceedingly

extremely

extraordinarily

频率标志词

often

Usually

Generally

Normally

Commonly

Frequently

否定标志词

not

I can not agree with you.

I can hardly agree with you.

barely

rarely

Seldom

I can not agree with you.

我不支持你.

I can not agree with you more.

我太支持你了.

I can not agree with you any more.

我不能再支持你了.

It is impossible

It is not possible

It is hardly possible

It is hardly possible for sb. to do sth.

第一段:现象描述

点明主题 引出话题

略作描述 举例说明

话题引出

hot

heated

hotly-debated

heatedly-argued

各种“话题”

problem

issue

phenomenon

Discussion

开篇万能句型一

如今, „已成为社会热点问题.

Nowadays, „ has become a hotly-debated social problem.

2011-06

Online Shopping

Nowadays, Online shopping has become a hotly-debated social problem.

Currently, „ has become a heatedly-debated social problem we have to face.

如今, „已成为我们不得不面对的热点问题了

2008-06

Recreational Activities

Nowadays, various recreational activities has become a heatedly-debated social problem we have to face.

开篇万能句型二

近来,对„(现象)的关注日益增加

concern

growing concern

Currently, there is a growing concern over the issue of „

开篇万能句型三

最近, „问题已引起人们的广泛关注

Recently, the problem of „ has aroused people’s wide concern.

最近, „现象已引起人们的广泛兴趣

Recently, the phenomenon of „ has aroused people’s wide interests.

开篇万能句型四

最近, „问题/现象已引起大众聚焦.

focus

Presently, the phenomenon of „ has been brought into public focus.

At present, the problem of „ has been brought into public focus.

开篇万能句型五

近年来,„ 问题吸引了公众注意力

attention

In recent years, the problem of „ has attracted public attention.

In recent years, the problem of „ has claimed public attention.

开篇万能句型六

特定人群:college students

Presently, there has appeared a heated discussion among sb. as to whether they should .... 最近,„(现象)在„中引发了热烈讨论。

Nowadays, there has appeared a heated discussion among the college students as to whether they should get to know the world outside the campus.

开篇万能句型七

The past few years have witnessed dramatic increase in „

The past few years have witnessed dramatic changes in „

借他人之口„

有人说„ /人们说„

People say that ...

Someone say that „

Some people say that„

据说 „

It is said that „

各种“据说„”

It is held that„

It is argued that„

It is thought that„

It is believed that..

It is reported that„

It is expected that„

It is supposed that„

It is maintained that„

常言道„

It is often said that „

It is often

said that a strong will is the first secret to success.

各种“ 常言道„”

It is often said that „

usually

widely

broadly

normally

generally

commonly

Frequently

“据说”句型盘点

People say that„

It is said that„

It is said that honesty is the best policy. (2003-01) It is said that thirteen is an unlucky number. (1998-06) It is said that creating a green campus is vital. (2009-12) sb / sth is said to be„ „被认为/视作„

Honesty is said to be the best policy.

Thirteen is said to be an unlucky number.

Creating a green campus is said to be vital.

被认为/视作„

sth. is said to be„

consider

Creating a green campus is considered to be vital. regard

Spelling is regarded to be incredibly important. deem

Creational activities are deemed to be beneficial.

As we all know,

As everybody knows,

As is known to all,

It is known to all that„

众所周知„

It is well known that„

It is generally known that„

It is commonly known that„

it is normally known that„

升级版“众所周知”

It ’s a known fact that

Internet plays a crucial role in modern society. (2002-06)

It has come to light that

where there is a will, there is a way. (2011-12)

It is general knowledge that

practice makes perfect. (1997-01)

举世公认„

acknowledge

It is universally acknowledged that„

It is universally accepted that„

Nothing succeeds without a strong will

It is universally acknowledged/accepted that people cannot succeed without a strong will.

举世公认„

admit

It is universally admitted that„

usually

commonly

generally

broadly

Widely

Admittedly,

诚然,无可否认

Admittedly, God helps those who help themselves.

诚然,自助者天助

Admittedly, he didn't know that at the time.

无可否认,他当时并不知道。

不可否认的是„

否认

deny

开篇经典句之:不可否认的是„

There is no denying that

practice is the key to success. (1997-01)

There is no denying the fact that

online shopping is getting more and more popular.

(2011-06)

Nobody can deny the fact that

God helps those who help themselves.

不容忽视的是„

neglect

We cannot neglect the fact that the students who graduate from college are much better paid than

those who graduate from secondary school or high school. (2012-12)

ignore

We cannot ignore the fact that

due attention should be paid to spelling. (2010-06)

ignore

turn a blind eye to

对„视而不见

turn a deaf ear to

对„置若罔闻

不容忽视是„

We cannot ignore the fact that „

We cannot turn a blind eye to the fact that „

We cannot turn a deaf ear to the fact that „

开篇经典句之:毫无疑问的是„

doubt

There is no doubt that „

毫无疑问的是„

There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.

毫无疑问的我们的教育制度尚令人不满。

leave something to be desired

令人不满

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