四级漫画作文
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图画作文

第一段:描述图画

1. What an enlightening (有启发的) an thought-provoking(发人深省的) cartoon it is! As is vividly (生动的)presented in the drawing, What the illustrator (作者)really aims(目的) to convey(传达) is quite simple and stark(明显), and it is so impressive(让人意想深刻) that anyone in front(前面) of it can not help(情不自禁) thinking deeply(深入), undoubtedly, 真正意图.

2. As is described in the picture, At the lower part of the picture, ". Obviously, the cartoonist is trying to show us that, 3. As is vividly depicted in the picture, 意图.

4. As is vividly depicted in the cartoon, with the speedy social and economic development, the number of people has dramatically increased/shrunk. In the picture, there is/are ". What the illustrator really aims to convey is quite simple and stark, and it is so impressive that anyone in front of it can not help thinking deeply, undoubtedly,

第二段:深度阐述

1. Why should this phenomenon take place? There are generally three factors accounting for it. To begin with... It is reported that Furthermore... Most importantly...(解释原因型)

2. Having taken everything into consideration, we may attribute the sharp change to two aspects. On the one hand... For example, On the other hand...(解释原因型)

3. It is no difficult job to come up with(提出)some possible factor(原因) to account for this phenomenon(现象). At the top of the list is that(原因一). According to a

recent survey(调查)conducted by(进行) a group of professors(教授) from Peking university, more than 80 percent of people has a similar feeling . Besides,we must admit (承认)that (原因二). Finally, what is responsible for the situation is that(原因三). As a consequence, we can see the phenomenon of the (标题)shown in the picture above is very popular.

4. The purpose of the cartoonist is to show us that On the one hand... On the other hand... Consequently, ...(分析讨论型)

5. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, It is reported To begin with, ______. In addition, According to a 陈述利弊型)

第三段:个人评论

1. What to do? To my best understanding, it is really high time that effective(有效的) measures (措施) were taken to reverse (改变)the trend (趋势). First ....... Second ........ As a result, I am confident enough that only when (只有。。。才)the whole society(社会) make substantial(巨大的)efforts (努力), can our future surely be better and more harmonious(和谐).

2. To crack this hard nut, it is crucial for us to take effective actions. Above all, relevant laws and regulations should be made to severely punish those who............. Furthermore, we should enhance the awareness of people that.............is of great significance to us. Only in this way can we curb the current phenomenon revealed in the picture.(解决问题型)

3. As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that ___. It is not only because ____, but also because _____. The more _______, the more ________. (本人支持的观点)

4. Numerous examples can be given, but these will suffice. A case in point is.............

Another illustration is closely related to us, the examinees. If we.........., we will........... On the whole, these examples effectively clarify the saying that...........(举例说明型)

5. To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.(陈述利弊型)