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瓦房店三高中 半开放式作文指导 常斯强 2015年4月16日 1 半开放式书面表达导学案 瓦房店第三高级中学高三英语备课组 Learning Objectives 1. 找出一模考试作文中学生出现的典型错误 2. 学会半开放式作文的写作策略 3. 90%的同学课后能写出一篇符合要求的半开放式作文 Task 1 something about your handwriting 1. 不写连体字和花体字(“呆萌”的字体最好看) 2. 注意单词之间的距离 3. 注意字母的高度和密度 4. 每段的第一个单词缩进四个字母 5. 一个单词尽量不要分写在上下两行 6. 标点符号也是语言准确性的一个方面 7. 尽量避免在卷上修改 Task 2 Group work:Improvement (大连一模学生作文评析)

假定你是红星中学李华, 你校正在开展提高社会公德活动,请你根据下列要点,

用英语写一篇演讲稿。

1. 不守公德现象 2. 改进的方法 3. 呼吁

注意:1. 词数100 左右 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯3. 开头语已为你写好 Nowadays, we can still see some behaviours against public morals._______________

___________________________________________________________________________________ Group 1: Find out some spelling and grammatical mistakes if any and then correct them (改正拼写以及语法错误)

Sample1

…There are so many people throw rubbish everywhere…Besides, more and more people speak loud in public place which against the public morals…

Sample 2.

…The things that against public morals have influenced our healthy. So we should try our best to solve those problems. If we do some meaning things for our society, our society will become a beautiful heaven ….

Sample 3

…In a word, the public morals is not only influent personal quality, but also influent the whole society. That is to say, we should call on important our quality and build beautiful society together….

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Group 2: Find out which are not listed directly in the instructions and discuss with your group members whether these details are necessary. If the answer is “no”, explain it and provide us with some proper details.(讨论下面作文的添加细节是否合理,为什么?并改正)

Sample 4.

… In my opinion, since the environment has already been polluted by human being, our government should take some tough measures to deal with the environmental pollution. For example, some factories which cause severely pollution should be closed down at once. Besides, we should form a good living haibit …

Sample 5.

…Due to these situations, we should call on everyone to build a beautiful environment. That is to say, we should just do it now. In a word, we should protect our environment….

Group 3: Read the following two compositions in order to compare their different

Sample 6

Nowadays, we can still see some behaviours against public morals. For example, there are always people who throw rubbish away everywhere, or don ’t stand in line. Even some of them carve their names in the places of interest, as if they could stay there forever.

Those people who do this don’t care about others’ feelings. In other words, they are a bit selfish.

As far as I’m concerned, our mind is important. Our government should pay more attention to our social morals’ education. And we everyone must obey the rules.

As everyone knows, our society depends on ourselves. Let’s set off and do just a little things which can be good for our country. Because public morals should be around us! (111words )

Sample 7.

Nowadays, we can still see some behaviours against public morals. When waiting for a bus, we often see that many people don’t stand in line. What’s more, littering and spitting can be seen everywhere in public places. To our astonishment, some people break traffic rules regardless of their own safety.

Faced with these impolite phenomena, we must take measures to improve the situation. On the one hand, the government are supposed to make laws to make people behave properly. On the other hand, it’s high time that our TV programmes should start an effective educational campaign to popularize the significance of social morality.

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In my view, no matter what a small effort we make, it does make a difference. Only in this way can we live in a more pleasant world. (120 words )

Task 3 Sum up: Writing skills(总结技巧)

1. 认真审题并仔细阅读文字(图画)提示,涵盖所有要表达的信息。

2. 确定体裁,把握行文格式。

3. 罗列提纲,思考表达方式。(把半开放式变成熟悉的提纲式)

4. 组织语言,展开写作。(适当添加细节)

5. 认真检查,查漏补缺

Task 4 Polish the following composition(Group Work)

假设你是李华,你的一位美国笔友Robert 写E-mail 问及你高考后暑假的安排,请根据以下要点,写一封100词左右的email 回复他。

1. 学开车, 学英语

2. 旅游

3. 做志愿者

Dear Robert, How time flies! Next month, I will take the High exam and have freedom. To make my holiday interesting, I take a plan. First, I want to study driving. And then I will study English. It is very helpful. Travelling is also a good choice. I want to visit many countries in the world. In the end of the vacation, I will be a volunteer. I want to accompany lonely people. Tell me yours and I’ am looking forward to it.

Group 1.Replace some improper words and expressions.(替换不合适单词和短语)

Group 2. Try to use some attractive sentence patterns and some link words to make this composition better. (用较为复杂的句式润色句子,并在恰当的地方使用连词)

Group 3. Try to add some necessary details to the original composition. (添加必要细节)

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Task 5. Read the following two possible versions aloud and tell which one is from an English native speaker ?

Possible version 1

Dear Robert,

How time flies! I’m writing to tell you my plans of this summer vacation after the College Entrance Examination.

First of all, I intend to learn to drive and get a license because driving has been an essential skill for us nowadays. What's more, I plan to take some English courses to strengthen my English learning, which may benefit me a lot in the long run. I also want to visit some places of interest to relax myself and broaden my horizons. More importantly, I would like to be a volunteer to help those who are in need.

What's your plan? Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Possible version 2:

Dear Robert,

How time flies! Last time we spoke was a few months ago. I hope you’re well. I will take my college admission examination in two months and am now trying to plan my holiday.

I would like to learn to drive at some point and I really want to do some travelling, to the U.K. perhaps as that would help improve my English. Are you going to do any travelling in your break? The other plan I have is to do some charity work as I believe we ought to look after those worse off than ourselves.

What plans do you have for the holidays? I hope you have a nice break and I look forward to hearing from you.