书信类作文技巧
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第七种类型:书信作文

真题演示一

美国中学生jeff 将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文,经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华,请给Jeff 写一封信,按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。

注意:1. 信的开头已为你写好。2. 词数不少于100。

Dear Jeff,

I ’m Li Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you ’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing. While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.

If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We ’ll try our best to make your stay

here in Beijing a pleasant experience.

Best

wishses,

Li Hua 题目分析

根据题目我们可以用提供帮助的句型融入到生活安排中。

标准范文写作技巧剖析

此类文章是比较生活化的用语,一般没有特别的句型和规律可循,需要大家平时积累。根据题目我们可以判断以安排和提供帮助来界定表达方式。

①书信用语“听说„我非常高兴”I ’m very happy to learn that

②提供帮助句型we ’ll provide you…

If you have any questions or requests, please let me know.

③很简单实用的生活安排句型we could..At noon we’ll …You can…

④书信的客套用语We ’ll try our best to…

总 结:

在后面章节中我们会专门为大家介绍关于安排的句型。在此和大家总结提供帮助的句型。

1. We’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV.

2. We’ll supply a room with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV for you.

【专家课堂】

表示提供帮助的句型非常多,我们旨在抛砖引玉,只给出几个参考句型,希望同学们自己努力思考,平时留意积累相关的句型。

●1. Please let me know if you have any questions or requests.

●2. Just call me if there’s anything you need.

●3. (Please) let me know if there’s anything I can help you with.

●4. Don’t hesitate to ask for help if you have any questions or requests.

●5. I’ll be glad to help if you have any questions or requests.

●6. I’d be glad if I could help.

●7. I think this is a good chance for you to…

●8. I’d like to suggest you…

●9. I think you might like to…

●10. I was wondering if you’d like to…

表示尽力做某事的句型(以本题为例)

●1. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.

●2. We’ll do everything we can to help you enjoy your stay here in Beijing.

●3. We’ll do all we can to help you have a good time in Beijing.

●4. We’ll do our best to make your stay in Beijing a happy one!

真题演示二

假定你是李华,正在英国牛津参加短期语言培训,计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一

则广告引起了你的注意,但一些具体信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。请给该旅行社发一封电

子邮件,询问有关情况。

注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可根据适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3. 参考词汇:牛津Oxford

费用fee

Dear Sir/Madame,

I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.

As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for students.

As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What

about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?

How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day, I’d like to

know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the

big stores in London.

Y

ours,

L

i Hua

题目分析

通过题目可以确定本文是以询问问题为主展开的书信体。

标准范文写作技巧剖析

范文非常简单,没有什么长句难句,只是在叙述所问的问题。我们根据本文的情况做一

汇总。

①写信询问某事I’m writing for more information about

②询问信息的句型I’d like to know if you have…

Besides, is there any time for…

do I need to…

总 结:

1. 书信类文章在考试中大多是生活类,有很多方面集中在一起,一般表达都很简单、生活化。希望大家注意积累,别忘了我们以前学过的秘诀可以适当穿插进去哟。

2. 全文的问题收集

1. I’d like to know if you have any special prices for students.

2. What about time for shopping? Is it included in the schedule?

3. As for lunch, is it included in the price?

4. Can you tell me more details about the trip?

5. Please let me know the scheduled return time.

6. I wonder if you could tell me more about the trip.

7. I also want to know how long the tour will last.

8. I have one final question, is there any time scheduled for shopping?

【专家课堂】

别走开,为大家收集更多表示询问的句型。

●1. I was wondering if I could…

●2. I wonder if it is possible to…

●3. I want to know if I can…

●4. Could you please tell me if I could…

●5. I’d like to find out if I could…

特别奉送两篇标准的询问式书信

第一篇:

I am a Chinese student who wish to apply for admission into your prestigious university. My plan is to start my course next term, and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information.

First, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your university? I already have a bachelor's degree from Beijing University, but I wonder if there are any further academic requirements. Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting, I would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships available for international students. Third, what is the situation as regards accommodation?

I look forward to your reply, and to attend your esteemed institution.

第二篇:

I am organizing a group of students to pay a visit to the historical exhibition in your town. I am writing the letter in purpose of inquiring(/seeking/obtaining/requesting) information concerning(/regarding) the following aspects.

First of all, what is the size of the exhibition, what is its theme and what objects are on display? Secondly, what are the dates between which the exhibition will be held, and what are the daily opening hours?

I must point out that I hope to bring over students to the exhibition. So I would like to inquire if

there is any discount available on entrance tickets for students. I look forward to your reply.

真题演示三

假设你是新华中学的学生李华,得知某英文报招聘兼职记者,你有意应聘,请按下列要点给

报社写一封自荐信。

要求:1. 表示感兴趣;2. 说明优势:知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历;3. 希望得到

回复

注意:1. 词数:100以上;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm a student from Xinhua Middle School. I'm glad to learn that you want a few part-time English

reporters. I'm quite interested in it.

I think I'm fit for the job. As a student, I've read a lot and have much knowledge in many fields.

I'm fond of English and do well in both speaking and writing. Besides, I'm easy to get along with and

enjoy working together with others. Above all, I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting

station. So I'm sure I can do the job well if I get the position.

I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

投诉信模板 Dear_______,

(自我介绍) I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have

to make a complaint about_______.

The reason for my dissatisfaction is _________(总体介绍). In the first place,_______

(抱怨的第一个方面). In addition, _____________(抱怨的第二个方面). Under these

circumstances, I find it ______(感觉) to ____________(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果).

I appreciate it very much if you could____________(提出建议和请求), preferably

________(进一步的要求), and I would like to have this matter settled by ______(设定

解决事情最后期限).

Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

道歉信模板

Dear ___________,

I am truly sorry that_______________(道歉的原因).

The reason is that _______________(介绍原因) Once again, I am sorry for any

inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

感谢信模板 Dear______,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ____________(感谢的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in ___________(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been_____________(没有对方帮助时的后果).

Every one agrees that it was you who____________(给出细节).

Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. Yours sincerely

Li Ming

邀请信模板 Dear________,

There will a ________________(内容) at/in________________(地点) on___________(时间). We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at ___________(具体时间). This will be followed by a _______(进一步的安排). At around______(时间),____________________________(另一个安排)

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before ____________(通知你的最后期限) Yours sincerely