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交友信

写作指导

1.明确主旨,确定要点,谋划结构

此类信又分去信和回信两种。如属去信一般按三段式写作:开头问候并交代写作缘由,中间交代所想、所求、所感的内容,末尾表达期盼或祝愿。如属回信除应该对原信所提内容一一回应之外,还应该仔细推敲,认真分析原信内容,弄清写信人的目的、意图,从而模仿来信人对自己的介绍内容,以同样的方式对自己进行介绍。如来信使用I’m twenty years old. I’m 160 cm tall. I’m in good health. I like to collect stamps in my spare time. 等句子介绍自己时,回信人最好也应从年龄、身高、健康状况、业余爱好等角度介绍自己的情况。

2. 正确使用时态,提高语言准确性

写英文交友信时,写信人常介绍自己的年龄、性格、业余爱好及学习和生活有关情况,而对这些方面的介绍属现状介绍,因此应使用一般现在时表达文意。不能一会儿使用一般现在时,一会儿使用一般过去时,一会儿使用一般将来时,或将这些时态随意交替使用,造成时间概念混淆不清,大大降低语言表述的准确性。

3. 选择使用规律性语言,提高语言得体度

英文交友信的语言有一定的规律性。文章开头、交友的愿望、交友途径、人物年龄、人物业余爱好、人物健康状况、对友谊的祝福、期待对方来信等均有一些常见句型(见模板)。需要注意的是:介绍自己的年龄、健康状况、业余爱好、性格特点时不能受汉语习惯影响,例如:My age is twenty years old. My body is healthy. My character is alone. 等汉语式英语错误表达法,此类表达机械呆板,不合常理,应避免使用。

【常用句型】

1. I’m LiHua, a middle school student, from Henan. And I’d like to make friends with… 我是来自河南的李华, 一名中学生. 我想和……交朋友.

2. I’ve learned it from the Internet/newspaper/TV that you want to make a Chinese friend. 我从网络/报纸/电视上已经了解到你想交一个中国朋友.

3.I ’m glad to learn that… 我非常高兴知道……

4. I’m a student from…,and I’m glad to learn that you need a Chinese friend. I’m quite interested in it and I think I am fit for it.

我是来自……的一名学生, 我很高兴知道你需要一个中国朋友。我对这很感兴趣, 并且我认我很适合它。

5.I am too excited and delighted at your good news that…

我对你……. 的好消息非常激动和高兴。

6.First of all, I must thank you for your kindness and high attention to me.

首先, 我很感谢你对我的友好和高度重视.

7.In my mind/view/idea/opinion, my friend is someone who is interested in...

以我之见, 我的朋友是一个对……感兴趣的人。

8.It would be better for my friend to have an interest in…

我的朋友有一个……的兴趣会更好.

9.I wish to express my profound appreciation for becoming your friend.

我想表达对成为你的朋友的深深的喜爱/感激。

10.With great delight I have learnt from your letter of this Sunday that…

我非常高兴本周末从你的信中了解到……

11.With reference to your letter in…for a new friend, I offer myself for it.

关于你在…的信中提到的找个新朋友的事,我主动推荐自己。

12.I should be very glad if you would… 如果你会……我将非常高兴。

13.I think I can share with my friends our traveling experiences, taking care of…, or whatever we have in common. 我认为我能和我的朋友们共享我们的旅行经历、照顾……, 或者任何我们共有的东西。

14.I am an easygoing high school student who likes…

我是一个(性格) 外向的高中生, 我喜欢……

15.If there is anything I can do for you, please inform me. I would be more than glad to help you. 如果有我能为你做的什么事, 请告诉我。我将非常高兴地去帮助你。

16.Many thanks for your consideration and generous cooperation.

非常感谢你的考虑和慷慨合作。

17.And I believe we will become very good friends.

并且我相信, 我们会成为很好的朋友。

18.I believe that our friendship will have a brighter future.

我相信我们的友谊将会有一个更加美好的未来。

19.I will try my best to write to you as often as possible to introduce you the…

我会尽可能经常地给你写信, 并介绍给你……

20.Anyway, I am going to help you as much as I can.

无论如何/不管怎样, 我计划尽可能多地帮助你。

21.Best wishes/regards (to you and your families)!

最好的祝福送给你和你的家人!

22.Give my love/regards to…! 请把我的爱和祝愿送给……!

23.(I am) Looking forward to your early reply. (我在) 期待你的早点回信。

24.Hoping to hear from you soon. 希望很快收到你的信。

25.I hope to hear from you very soon. 我希望很快收到你的信。

写作模板 I’m very glad to have a chance to be your pen friend. You were introduced to me by International Friendship Club because I wanted to have a pen friend in your country. I hope we’ll be good friends forever. I hope our friendship will last forever. old boy / girl]. [I’mI’m really very interested in it.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. [I’m waiting for your early reply.]

Yours truly,

写作训练

假如你叫王芳,是南京二中学生,最近刚收到外国笔友玛丽寄给你的交友信。请阅读下面的来信,写一封回信,简要介绍自己的情况,并询问其所在城市的有关情况。

Dear Wang Fang,

I’m an American girl. I have learned about you from International Friendship Club and I want to be your pen friend very much. Now, I’d like to introduce something about myself to you.

I live in New York, the largest city in the world. I’m a student studying in a high school in our city. We go to school at nine o’clock in the morning and go home at three o’clock in the afternoon. In my spare time, I like to chat with my friends and enjoy music on the Internet. I live at a wide street in our city, which is very busy at any time. My family often take a holiday to relax ourselves at weekends, when we can enjoy our life. Do you also have a happy life at school and at home?

Waiting for your early reply.

Yours truly,

Mary

Dear Mary,

I‘m Wang Fang. I’m very glad to have a chance to make friends with you.

Like you, I‘m also a senior middle school student in a local middle school. We study a bit harder than you, going to school at seven o’clock in the morning and going home at six O‘clock in the afternoon. However, we are able to learn all kinds of knowledge, and we are also very happy at school. I live in a small village in the country, where there are many kinds of trees and flowers. We can always breathe fresh air here.New York is a very famous city but I don’t know it very well. Can you introduce something about it to me?

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours truly,

Wang Fang