构思角度
初一 议论文 5525字 852人浏览 保健养生2014

Guided Writing( 25分)

Directions: Write an English composition in 100 - 120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛(group dancing competition), 班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。

你的文章必须包括以下内容:

〃你是否会参加比赛

〃你做出该决定的具体理由

【作文指导】

要写好作文(造人,先看长什么样子,骨骼,肌肉,检查眼睛鼻子)

1、审题:看清题目要求,确定话题

2、框架:写出简单的写作提纲,比如开头、结尾如何写,如何把正文的要点按照顺序用

常用的first, second, third等分清列出来。

3、成文:选择准确又地道的词汇,进行文字的编写,或者适当添加一些复合句,避免整

篇文章都是简单句的堆积。写作时,务必注意语法规则,注意句子的语气、时态、短语搭配、名词单复数、动词的第三人称单数、主谓一致等。

4、检查:写成作文后,马上进行阅读,检查存在的错误及时进行修改。但注意不要乱涂

乱画,清洁的卷面。记住:工整的书写是留给阅卷老师的第一印象。

议论文---构思---参加、理由

万能构思角度

1、 people (微观)self :study 、life 、interest 、development

others :family 、school

2、

things (主观)economy 、culture 、technology 、environment

高分策略:内容分(构思)

结构分(段落、多句式)

语言分(高级词汇)

reasons for extracurricular activities

主观:self

1、study : 参加:relax myself 、be good for study

enable [ɛˈneb əl ] me to study more efficiently [ɪˈf ɪʃəntl ɪ] 、

“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”

“只工作,不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。”

不参加:around the corner即将来临、 study is the top priority [praiˈɔriti ]

take me too much time

2、life : 参加: enrich life、strengthen body

cultivate(培养)interest 、 be more cooperative

develop a full personality, both physically and mentally.

不参加:without any experience of dancing、 good dancing partner.

3、 others :参加:enhance(提高;加强) relationship

make some contributions to the class

不参加:spoil(糟蹋;变坏) the performance of the whole class.

be a spectator [spekˈteitə](观众) cheering for my classmates.

十句话原则:

P1 S1话题 S2中心论点

P2 S3过渡句

S4 论据 S5细节支持

S6 论据 S7细节支持

S8 论据 S9细节支持

P3 S10结论

P1 S1话题

1)A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on (号召)everybody to take an active part in it.

2) I'm very glad that a class team will be organized to take part in the group dancing competition by our school and the monitor expects all to be active.

3)Today the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancing competition which will be held in a couple of days in our school.

S2中心论点

1)While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.

2) I've decided to join the team and win the top honour with my classmates.

3) But after some careful consideration, I have decided not to participate.

P2 S3过渡句

1)Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision.

2)There are a number of reasons for my decision.

S4 论据 S5细节支持

P3 S10结论 1)For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm [ɛnˈθuziˌæzəm ] on the group dancing competition.

2)With the reasons listed above,I'm looking forward to the day when our class team will win the first prize in the competition with our great efforts.

3)For these reasons, it seems more appropriate [əˈpropri ɪt ] (合适) for me to watch the competition than to dance myself.

Version 1:

A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it. While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.

Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision. First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, which clearly shows us the importance of relaxation. Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years. Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class.

For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition.

Version 2:

I'm very glad that a class team will be organized to take part in the group dancing competition by our school and the monitor expects all to be active. I've decided to join the team and win the top honour with my classmates.

First, in the past two years the group dancing has been introduced all over the campus with the adoption of a practical policy issued by the national educational authority. As well as other social activities such as charity contribution, touring

around the orphanages and nurseries and serving the public in the neighbourhood, the group dancing has become more and more popular among us.

Second, the group dancing,regarded as one of the most popular group activities,it helps us to learn to be more cooperative,more confident and more optimistic. It also serves to develop a full personality, both physically and mentally.

With the reasons listed above,I'm looking forward to the day when our class team will win the first prize in the competition with our great efforts.

Version 3:

Today the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancing competition which will be held in a couple of days in our school. But after some careful consideration, I have decided not to participate.

There are a number of reasons for my decision. First and foremost, as the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, study is the top priority for me. Participating in the group dancing competition has to give way because it might take me too much time. What’s more, without any experience of dancing, I don’t think I can be a good dancing partner. I am afraid my poor dancing skills will probably spoil the performance of the whole class. In this case, it’s better for me to be a spectator cheering for my classmates.

For these reasons, it seems more appropriate for me to watch the competition than to dance myself.