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Given is a simple but thought-provoking cartoon: an aged grandma sits in front of mirror, looking at “herself” in the mirror and saying to herself, “I feel rather lonely when my son goes to work and my grandson studies in school.”

Obviously, this cartoon can be naturally associated with the significance of children‟s company for aged parents: if elderly people intend to enjoy happiness, it is advisable for their children to spend more time in parents. In contemporary society, it has become a trend for young people to be busy with their work and study. Meanwhile, an increasing number of youngsters find it difficult to have spare time to accompany lonely parents. However, it is adult children‟s accompany that enables aged parents to build up adequate hope, love and enthusiasm for life. As a matter of fact, young people in large numbers have not come to realize the loneliness of aged people.

As a youngster, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for us to accompany aged parents, no matter how busy we are. Accordingly, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to love, respect and care all elderly people.

Physical Training

1. 保持健康非常重要;

2. 据调查显示,大学生身体素质逐年在降低;

3. 谈谈在大学校园里进行体育锻炼的重要性。 Physical Training

As the saying goes, happiness lies first of all in health. It is certain that health is more valuable than wealth and wisdom. Only with good health a person can achieve and realize his goals.

Recently, surveys showed that physical quality of college students declines year by year. In order to better serve for socialist construction, college studens should realize the importance of physical training. Firstly, physical training helps to improve and maintain health as movement is the source of life. Facing with heavy burden of study, the students without strong physique could not gain success. Secondly, it enables college students to form good habits . What‟s more, it can strengthen psychological quality . All in all , physical training will not only guarantee college students to live longer, but also let them enjoy the years they do live.

Free Passage on Highway

1. 目前,高速公路节假日免费通行;

2. 有人叫好,认为减少了出行费用;有人反对,认为会导致节假日高速路拥堵;

3. 谈谈你的看法。

【范文】

Free Passage on Highway It is said that highway can be toll-free on the important holidays. Minibuses and motor vehicles with up to 7 seats can enjoy this privilege from 00:00 on the first day to 24:00 on the last during days in the Spring Festival, Tomb-sweeping Day, International Labor Day and National Day .

Some favor this rule because it will reduce traveling expenses by about 40 percent or even more. Meanwhile , some oppose it as it may cause traffic jams and other side effects.

As far as I am concerned , I think it is a piece of good news for private car owners. Not only does it undoubtedly make travelling easier during holidays, but also helps to stimulate economic growth. But it still needs improving. Local governments need to make out more detailed plans while taking everything into consideration. With improvements, the policy can be more sustainable.

My Views on Manners of Charity

1. 慈善事业可以通过很多渠道表现,有人说“陈光标式慈善”是慈善的倒退,有人则表示他让慈善在创新中飞得更高、更远;

2. 谈谈你对慈善方式的看法。

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My Views on Manners of Charity

Chen Guangbiao, a well-known Chinese entrepreneur and philanthropist , has made headlines in China for handing out money on the street. Hot discussion has arisen about his high-profile manners . Some say that his unusual manner of doing charity appears kind of backward while the others think it ensures the charity industry to go further and fly higher by self-innovation .

As far as I am concerned, I highly appreciate Mr. Chen‟s generosity and kind heart. It is quite natural that various presentations emerge in the development of charity as there is no definite way of doing good to others . No matter what the way is, if the outcome appears beneficial and can really help the needy, we should support it. What‟s more, we should applaud his public example of charity as his actions can inspire more people to follow suit. The futher development of charity cause requires understanding and support of the public.

Campus Open Day on Internet

1. 目前有部分高校打造网上校园开放日,各院系入驻微博,为全国高考(微博) 学生、家长和社会各界朋友提供全方位、立体化、跨时空的在线咨询服务;

2. 针对这一现象,有人认为此举甚好,节省资源;但有人认为网络交流效果会不尽如人意;

3. 谈谈你的看法。

Campus Open Day on Internet 【范文】

With the development of computers, some universities hold Campus Open Day on Internet. All faculties of these universities have microblog accounts which aim for offering comprehensive online consulting service for students and parents.

People hold different opinions to this phenomenon. Those who in favor of it think it can save both human resources and material resources. On the contrary, others dissatisfy with the results of online communication.

As to me, I think it is a convenient way for students to get useful and updated infomation about their interested universities. Students can obtain information more quickly and correctly, raise any questions they have casually and get answers more timely . But every coin has two sides. Meanwhile, related colleges and departments are called upon to actively involve themselves in strengthening the supervision regarding the authenticity of information shared and released.

Foreigners’ Learning Chinese

1. 目前汉语越来越受到全世界重视,学习汉语的外国人也越来越多;

2. 出现这种现象的原因;

3. 我的看法。

【范文】

Foreigners’ Learning Chinese

Learning Chinese is becoming more and more popular among foreigners. The number of people learning Chinese is still growing now and quite beyond our expectations.

People ‟s opinions about why so many people are crazy about learning Chinese vary on. Some say they just show interests in it. Some explain it is the will of their parents. Still others mean to gaining a well-paid job and promising career.

It is true that a language may serve as a job skill or a stepping stone to a better career. But I still believe that most foreigners are simply motivated by an interest in China‟s 5,000-year-old culture. Only by knowing its mother tongue can they find the key to unlocking its philosophy. Most importantly , as China is playing a larger role in the world, many foreigners have seen China's potential and realized that they can benefit from learning Chinese.

2013年12月作文解析之“网络对教育的影响”

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分类: 四六级写作

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on learning and then explain why education does not simply mean learning to obtain information.

(图片来源:网络;图片中文字信息:“Once I learn how to use Google, isn‟t that all the education I really need?”)

简析:

今年试题英文部分的内容比较诡异,细看题目确实未要求描述图片信息,而是要求“作文基于图片信息,且以解释„网络对教育的影响开篇,阐述为什么教育不仅仅意味着学会如何获取信息。” 功能段落解析范文:

This picture can be naturally associated with the impact of Internet

on learning: the young guy expresses his understanding/ conception / perception of education, “Once I learn how to use Google, isn‟t that all the education I really need?” Obviously, in the youngster‟s eyes, education equals getting information.

In contemporary society, it has become a trend for a host of people to surf the Internet for diverse information. Meanwhile, an increasing number of youngsters find it rather convenient, comfortable and efficient to gain knowledge or information they need. Taking a look around, we can notice a great many students and their favorite websites: Google, Baidu and Yahoo. However, it is Internet that does not enable some learners to build up their correct perception of education. A case in point is the boy in the picture.

As a college student, I am convinced that education means not only obtaining information, but also acquiring other important qualities, like scientific methods, optimistic attitudes for life, a strong will and so on. Accordingly, teachers should educate, advocate and encourage their students to cultivate comprehensive quality. (181words )

译文:

这幅图能自然而然的联想到网络对学习的影响:年轻人表达了自己对于教育的理解“一旦我学会了如何使用谷歌,难道不意味着我就得到我要的教育吗?”显然,在这位年轻人看来,教育就等于获取信息。

当今社会,很多人上网获取各种信息已成为一种普遍趋势。同时,越来越多人感受到通过网络获取所需知识信息的方便、舒适和高效。生活中,我们能够注意到很多这样的学生和他们喜爱的网站:。。。。然而,正是网络使得很多学习者未能建立起对教学的正确理解。图片中的小男孩就是一个例子。

作为大学生,我坚信教育不仅意味着获取知识,还意味着学习其他素质,比如科学的方法,乐观的态度和坚强意志力等等。因此,教师应教育、倡导和鼓励学生去培养综合素质。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture above. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people‟s life and then explain the consequence of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

(图片来源:网络;题目中英文内容:People are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see) 解析:

传统的作文归类方式,如观点对比、问题解决或按图画、图表或名言警句类划分的方式正逐渐退出历史舞台。

相反,按照题目要求写相应的“功能段落”和表达是答题的永恒方式,永远不会因为出题方式的改变而失效。

显然,试题未要求考生给作文命题,更没有要求考生抄写题目,所以不写题目丝毫不影响成绩。题目写对了当然也不会加分,但题目写错了得分必受影响。

本篇作文体裁明确,话题清晰,内容要求具体,即:简要解释手机的过度使用并分析其可能产生的后果。

可以看出,题目明确要求写的“现象”、“危害”,此外可写的是“建议”。

首段:图画解释描述(改写)

Given is satirical but thought-provoking cartoon: a host of people are crossing the street; to our great shock, they focus all their eyesight on cell phones rather than the road, and in order to see, they rely on their walking sticks.

Such a picture can be naturally associated with people‟s overuse of mobile phones: if we intend to enjoy a harmonious and safe life, it is advisable for us to reject negative impacts of cell phones. In contemporary society, it has become a trend for people to purchase, own and use cell phones in daily life. Meanwhile, an increasing of individuals find that mobiles phones are overused. Taking a look around, we can notice a great many examples like scene in the picture: students concentrate on cell phones in class; youngsters concentrate on cell phones in family. It is overuse of cell phones that enables us to ignore people around us and even to put us in danger. As a matter fact, intelligent people in large numbers have come to realize the negative impacts of cell phones.

As a youngster, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for us to refuse to be the slave of cell phones. Thus, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to spend more

time communicating with others face to face. Do bear in mind: cell phones are just our tool. (总字数:232词,可以将中间段砍掉开头两句或尾段砍掉最后两句)

思路简析:

首段图画描述,改写图片提示信息即可。

二段首句点明主题并对主题简评,二句概述图片所指现象,三句相关人感受,四句排法举例,五句万能表达(强调句式)指出其危害,六句总结。

尾段首句表述自己观点,二句提出号召建议,尾句展望未来。

Part I Writing ( 30 minutes )

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the impacts of electronic products on interpersonal relationship. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

(图片来源:网络)

首段:图画描述

This is a thought-provoking and enlightening picture: all members of a family sit at a table, enjoying a family reunion; however, all kids and their young parents focus their attention on phones or laptops. The aged grandma and grandpa seem lonely. 二段:

(图画联系主题)Such a cartoon can be naturally associated with the impacts of electronic products on our daily life. (简单评论)If we intend to enjoy/ gain/ get a harmonious relationship in life, it is not advisable for us to ignore people around ourselves. (现象概述)In

contemporary society, it has become a trend for a host of youngsters

to have/ possess/ buy/ various high-tech products for fun. (相关人+感受)Meanwhile, an increasing number of young people find it rather colorful to live a life with these products. (强调句式) However, it is these products that do not enable young people to care more about people around. (万能举例)Taking a look around, we can notice a great many examples like the scene in picture above. (万能总结)As a matter of fact, intelligent people in large numbers have not come to realize the negative impacts of electronic products on our life.

(观点)As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for youngsters to refuse/ reject / resist the bad influences of electronic products on life. (建议)Thus/Accordingly/ Hence, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to cultivate this awareness.

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on food safety problem. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

(图片来源:网络)

Given is a simple but thought-provoking cartoon: a young guy opens a tin and tries to enjoy the delicious food; to his great surprise/ shock, a horrible “ghost” suddenly comes out of the tin.

Such a picture can be naturally associated with the importance of food safety in real life: if we intend to enjoy safe and healthy food, it is advisable for the whole society to combat (应对) this problem. In contemporary China, it has become a trend for our media to be filled with various reports about food safety. Meanwhile, an increasing number of individuals find it rather difficult to know whether their food is safe or not. However, it is safe food that enables the public to enjoy happiness, health and promising life. As a matter of fact, intelligent people in large numbers have come to realize the significance of food safety in our daily life.

As a customer, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for food manufacturers to refuse making poisonous food/ adding anything harmful to food. (Thus, it is essential that regulations should be worked our and enforced to punish dishonest food makers.) Lastly, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to choose natural and green food.