9年精品作文
初一 议论文 459字 36人浏览 刘倩coco

Helping others makes me pleased

奉天学校 九年六班 周 桐

①best to help my classmates work out the problems which they have difficulty solving. In addition, when others forget to bring something to school, I’ll be the one who’s ready to lend a hand to them. By doing these things, I, as well as my classmates, always feel on top of world.

②教师点评:①小作者开门见山地阐明了帮助他人使自己快乐的观点

②小作者在文章收尾时再次重申观点并号召其他人帮助彼此,这点扣题很好 ③文中形容词用的比较漂亮,如:happy ,glad, delighted, pleased等

指导教师:徐 昊