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第一篇,写,静态图

周六小作文练习。手把手剑10版上说遇到不同对比对象,以国家为主。in this chart, compare countries in terms of the use of different forms of transport, rather than compare transportation services for individual countries only. 上课不要忘记多阅读手把手

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The chart shows the proportion of foreign tourists who used different means of transport in new Zealand in 2004.

The chart compares four different country’ visitorswho traveled to new Zealand in terms of the transport they used in 2004.

The chart shows the differences between five countries’ travelers in different means of transport in New Zealand in 2004.

The Car was the most popular transport amongBritish, Germany, Japanese, as well as Australian,more than 60% of these people use car to travel around, while it was less popular among Korean. In contrast,most Korean people liked traveling by coach, with 60% ofthemchoosing this, and this means of transport was also the second favoritechoice for other countries’ people.

Ferry was the first choice for Japanese travelers and these was a half of them using this kind of transport, almost twice the figure for British, Koreanand Australian. The plane was the less important for all travelers and only 20% of Germany, JapaneseKorean visitors traveled by air.

The proportion of British visitors who used cars was highest at 70%, while the Korean car users

only accounted for the lowest percentage at around 45%. About 60~65% of Germany, Japanese and Australian chose to visit New Zealand by cars. There were also 60% of Korean and british who traveled by coach, approximately 10% higher than the figures for others.

Overall, the car and coach were the two main means of transport for all visitors, while these people were less favorite in the plane. Japanese travelers was more fond of ferry, compared with other countries’ people.Thefigure for british who went new Zealand by plane was highest, nearly 5% higher the proportion of Australian and almost two times the percentage of others. A Half of Japanese went there by ferry, while only 2% of British chose this kind of transport. Meanwhile, about 25% of Australian Korean went there by ferry and 40% of Germany did that.

Overall, tourists prefer to choose visit new Zealand by car and the plane was the most unpopular way to take.

The chart shows the proportion of foreign tourists who used different means of transport in new Zealand in 2004.

Step1动态/静态静态

Step2时态过去2004

Step3分段单图按对象分,多图单位相同按对象分,多图对象不同按图分。

Step 4 m 最高值 car 第二高coach o 刚说的东西,主要来讲

Step 5 对象词写的时候注意

分子car users 分母

昨天澳大利亚和中国考区都是考察分子分母法的应用,大陆是动态图,澳大利亚是静态。大家可以写一下这个图的结尾段。昨天有个学生说自己没时间了,没写结尾。我说:你肯定不是我网课的学生

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was ....

第二篇,写,静态图

今天的小作文是静态图,没有什么难点,注意时态是一般现在时,要使用分子分母法。澳大利亚的图是地图,这个我已经在微信上有提醒。 News media is more influential nowadays. Some people think it is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 大家写一下这个题目的观点。

The charts provide information about the world’s coffee consump tion, production and profit making.

Step1动态/静态静态

Step2时态现在

Step3分段单图按对象分,多图单位相同按对象分,多图对象不同按图分。 Step 4 m

1 最高值south America 第二高central America

2 最高值Europe 第二高usa

3 shippers and toasters 第二高retailers

o 刚说的东西,主要来讲

Step 5 对象词写的时候注意

分子car users 分母

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The charts shows information about the proportion of coffee produced and coffee consumed, and how the profit about coffee business is allocated.

The America is the main coffee place of production and the proportion of coffee produced insouth America is highest at 46%, more than twice the figure for the central America, Africaand Asia.

(Compared with other areas, South America is responsible for the largest proportion of coffee production. Around 48% of the world's coffee is from South America.)

The largest proportion of coffee is consumed in Europeat 44%, while coffee is less popular in japan and the percentage of coffee consumed in japan is only 7%.

The charts shows the differences in the world’s coffee consumption, production and profit making.

Shippers and toasters earn the highest percentage of coffee profit, with the figure making up 55%, while only 10% of coffee profit is made by retailers and producers respectively.

Over all, most coffee is produced in America and consumed in Europe, and most profit is earned by shippers and toasters.

The proportion of coffee produced by southAmerica is highest at 46%, almost three times the figure for asia. 37% of coffee was produce in Africa and central america, constituting 18% and 19% separately/respectively.

44% of coffee will be consumed by Europe people, two times that of usa. The coffee which is consumed by Japanese account for 7% and the rest of coffee will be consumed by other countries people.

55% of profit will be earned by shippers and toasters, 30% higher than the proportion of retailers. The figure for Exporters’ and producers’ profit is at the same level (10%).

Overall, almost half of coffee is produce in the south america and 44% of coffee is consumed by europe people. Meanwhile, shippers and toasters account for the highest proportion of coffee profit.

第三篇

今天的图表作文是动态图,两组对比对象,分子分母法。作文是预测的教育话题。In some countries, there has been an increase In the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school。优缺点。大家可以写一下观点。澳洲的同学请回忆今天的题目

Step1动态/ 静态

Step2时态过去

Step3分段单图按对象分,多图单位相同按对象分,多图对象不同按图分。

Step 4 m

1 最高值south America 第二高central America

2 最高值Europe 第二高usa

o 刚说的东西,主要来讲

Step 5 对象词写的时候注意

分子car users 分母

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第四篇, 写,动,两个对比组

The bar chatrs show the percentages of male and female employees aged 60 to 64 years in four countries in 1970 and 2000.

Step1动态/ 静态

Step2时态过去

Step3分段单图按对象分,多图单位相同按对象分,多图对象不同按图分。

Step 4 m

1 最高值japn 第二高central America

2 最高值Europe 第二高usa

o 刚说的东西,主要来讲

Step 5 对象词写的时候注意

分子car users 分母

The bar charts show the information about the figures for male and female employees aged 60 to 64 years in four countries between 1970 and 2000.

In Japan, there was a slight drop in the percentage of male employees aged between 60 and 64

from about 85% in 1997 to approximately 75%(第一句要写最大值,先写了变化不太好。In 2000, the proportion of male employees aged 60 to 64 was highest at 70%, more than three times the figure in belgium. 删掉了97的表达, 而且,要强调最大值并且强调后来的时间), but this figure was still highest compared with other countries in 2000. At the same time, these was a smaller decline of 5% in the proportion of japan female employees in that aged group.(Meanwhile,the figure for japan female workers age between 60 and 64 was also highest in 2000, down from 42%.) In USA, the figure for male employees at the same age group declined considerably from about 81% to 50%.(in usa, there was a remarkable drop in the percentage of male workers at the same aged group from 80% in 1997 to 50% in 2000, while there was a smaller decline of nearly 6% in the figure for woman workers ) More than 45% women aged between 60 and 64was

still working in 1997, after which this figure dropped to about 39%.

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The chars compare four countries in terms of the proportion of man and woman workers aged between 60 and 64 in two separate years.

In this age group, Japan had the biggest proportion of male and female workers at 70% and 40% in 2000, despite dropping from 85%and 43% in 1970 respectively. There were also similar trends in Usa. The proportion of male workers dropped from 80% to 50%, while there was a smaller decrease in the figure for women.

In contrast, Australia was the only country to see an increase in the proportion of female employees, slightlyrising to 17%. Belglum had the lowest percentage of male and female workers. Male workers accounted for 79% of men aged 64-49 in 1970, more than treble the figure in 1997, while only 7% of women of that age groupneeded to work.

Overall, most the countries saw a drop in the proportion of man or woman workers aged 60-64, while only the figure of female employees increased. Japan and USA had the a larger proportion 64-64-year-old workers, while the figure in Belgium was the lowest.

In Belgium, the proportion of man employees aged between 60 and 64 in 1997 was about 80%, 60% higher than the figure in 2000.(这里要讲出b 国家的巨大变化 in belgium, there was a dramatically drop of 60% in the percentage of male employees from1997 to 2000 compared with other countries.) The percentage of female employees was approximately constant in the same period(at the same period, the figure in Australia showed a similar trend, dropping to 42%.There was an opposite trend in the proportion of female workers in this aged group, increasing slightly.to 17%,再用there be 不好。改成the proportion of female workers in this aged group showed an opposite trend, increasing slightly to 17%这里,你不一定要一直国内男女或者国内男男对比,也可以与不同国家之间对比 ). In Australia, There was a noticeably decrease of 30% in the figure for man workers aged 60 and 64, while the proportion of female workers showed an opposite trend.(the belgium always had the lowest proportion of female employees aged 60 to

64. )

Overall, in 2000, japan had the largest proportion of man and woman workers aged 60 between

64. At the same time, there was a significant in the figure for Belgiummale workers

第一次改之后的感受,其实还可以写上比较,以及倍数

第二次改完:爽爆了,没有那么多数字

第五篇, 写, 动图,一个对比组

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The pie charts compare the the sources of pollutants in a particular area of ocean.

The pie charts show the proportion of the sources of pollutants in particular area of ocean in 1997 and 2000.

Step1动态/ 静态

Step2时态过去

Step3分段单图按对象分,多图单位相同按对象分,多图对象不同按图分。

Step 4 m

1 最高值japn 第二高central America

2 最高值Europe 第二高usa1

o 刚说的东西,主要来讲

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The chart shows the information about different sources of wastein a particular area of ocean.

In 2000, the most pollutants came from the air at 29%, although there is a slightly drop from 30% in1997.Domestic sewage was also the highest proportion of pollutants, rising from 18%. The proportion of offshore oil saw a similar upward trend, increasing around three-fold to 14%.

The proportionother sources of pollutants all reduce.The percentage of marine waste and industrial waste show a downward trend, dropping to 17% and 9% respectively. Litter and farm waste were minimal in the ocean, and there was no litter and only 2% of pollutants was farm waste.

Overall,the highest proportion of pollutants were domestic sewage and air pollutants, while there was no litter in the ocean and there was more offshore oil and air pollutants.

The percentages of pollutants from air and domestic sewage wer e highes t at 29%, more than three times the figure for industrial waste in 2007. In 1997 the pollutants from air

also accounted

for the highest proportion of pollutants at 30%, 12% higher than that of domestic sewage.

There was a considerable drop in the proportion of pollutants from marine from 22% in 1997 to 17% in 2007. Meanwhile, the percentage of pollutants from offshore oil also showed the similar trend of 9% and almost tripled between 1997 and 2007. In 1997, the proportion of farm waste was 4%, two times the figure in 2007. At the same time, there was also another remarkably drop in the percentage of pollutants from litter, declining to 0 in 2007.

Overall, the proportion of pollutants from domestic sewage and air were higher than other sources of pollutants in 2000. There were significant increases in the figure for offshore oil and domestic sewage, while the proportion of pollutants from industrial waste, farm waste and litter showed an opposite trend.

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第六篇,流程图

第七篇

Step1动静:静态

Step2时态:过去

Step3分段单图按对象分,多图单位相同按对象分,多图对象不同按图分。

Step 4 m

1 最高值japn 第二高central America

2 最高值Europe 第二高usa

o 刚说的东西,主要来讲

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Watching TV was the most popular activity for children, with more than 98%of children participating in this activity.Boys preferred to play computers than girls,and there was 80% of boys playing computers. 75% of Boys were favorite in cycling, while the figure for girls was lower

In contrast, shopping was more popular among girls than boys, the proportion of girls took part in shopping was 50%, 20% higher than that of boys. Skateboarding was the less favorite activity for children. Only 30% of boys and 25% of girls ever played this sport.

The percentages of boys and girls who participated in watching tvwere highest, at 99% and 98 respectively. Nearly 82% of boys played computer games, 17 % higher than the figure for girls. Meanwhile, boy preferred to cycle, with the figure about 75%, more than two times the figure for participation in skateboarding. The figure for girls’ par ticipation in cycling was 60%, also more than two times that of skateboarding. Girls