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对立类 (就一个事物判断是与否agree or disagree)

In daily life, so many problems are worth considering carefully.

With the development/introduction…, xxx are more and more +adj/ become adj increasingly.

Xxx often face the dilemma of whether to…… As what has been come up with, when you face/when it comes to /there is a public debate today that/recently the problem has been brought into focus that… …… What is your choice and what is your opinion? Some hold the view that…... while the others have a negative attitude. However, with all aspects carefully considered, I believe that……would be a better choice.

好开头

Have you ever been to ……/have you ever + 过去分词/received/faced/experienced……? Have you ever been to ……/have you ever + 过去分词/received/faced/experienced……? Have you ever been to ……/have you ever + 过去分词/received/faced/experienced……? If you had never had these experiences, you would never know/ feel/ learn/ realize/ understand……+how much fun/interesting/significant……xxx could bring you.

中间

举例:

1. To illustrate this point clearly, there is an appropriate example that is very persuasive.

1. This can be clearly illustrated in the case of sb. Who…

2. Two striking examples that aptly illustrate this point involve the area of astronomy and space exploration.

3. Common sense indicates that…

3. what is more, a study of …..will make this point clearer.

Why……?.The answer to this problem involves many factors.

1. The chief reason for my propensity for A is that...

2. Just imagine what it would be like if……

2. Another reason why I choose A is that I believe that/ can be seen by every person that

3. Finally, and perhaps most importantly, there is another essential factor that deserves some words here.

3. Finally, and perhaps most importantly, I do not deny that xxx has its own merits such as … but…

结尾(A 类=让步+结论 B类=结论)

A 类中的让步同样可以这样:

I concede that xxx, certainly, has its own merits/advantages. 后面 + 一大堆“一句话例子”。However, if all these aspects contemplated, the advantages of A carry weight than those of

B. I therefore reinforce my standpoint to choose xxx as my final choice (for the ……to ….)

B 类中只有结论:一定是转折开头but ,as xxx, we had better……记住不一定用什么to sum up/in conclusion……有时候一个转折词更能体现鲜明的逻辑关系,用别的反而模糊了。这样我们的B 类的最后两段就分别完成了让步和结论的功能。

However, if all these aspects contemplated, the advantages of A carry weight than those of

B. I therefore reinforce my standpoint to choose xxx as my final choice (for the ……to ….)

当然,如果你没有时间了,我这里同样有紧急方案,而且效果同样很好。

这样地结尾只有两个部分:

In conclusion, from what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that…/it is wiser / sagacious … xxx has more/better (比较级) , I therefore reinforce my standpoint to choose xxx as the final choice for…我测了一下时间,应该可以在一分钟之内搞定结尾。(旁白:不就是背么?!唉唉唉。)

比较类 (两种事物或一个事物的两种情况比较advantage and disadvantage)

结尾和其他的不一样了,要注意始终两边说,并可以有也可以没有自己的偏向。

In conclusion, from what has been discussed above, both ……and …….. are………and both are……….. However, if all these aspects contemplated, the advantages of A carry weight than those of B. I therefore reinforce my standpoint to choose xxx as my final choice (for the ……to ….)

如果没提点对立面或其他选择(包括让步) ,是不可能上4分的。 (from redrock )