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作业:

Nowadays, nurseries and kindergartens take care of children from an early age, so women can return to their work and children can get used to the society early. Is this a good thing? What's your opinion?

Child care centres and kindergartens seem like the savior of parents who can settle their children there and head to the office directly without being disturbed by the noise and need of young kids. However, these institutions may save troubles from parents and force children to socialize together earlier, but they also cut down the precious company time of family members, which is e ssential for the children’s psychological wellbeing.

It is admitted that childcare institutions benefit the children and their parents in some aspects. They free mothers’ hands from feeding their children and protecting them from injury in the play yard. In a verified institution, there are professional cooks who can guarantee the balance of nutrition of each meal, expert mentors who can teach children drawing, reading and writing. There are also fully trained nurse who are always well prepared for any emergency. Everything is to guarantee a healthy and safe environment for our beloved kids.

However, even the best kindergarten cannot replace the significance of parents because the love of parents is far more valuable for children than anything else. The best evidence is that children raising in a harmonious family by their parents, comparing with those in lack of attention, usually have higher moral value and greater social responsibility. No matter how experienced the teacher is, parents are always the best guide of their children.

In my opinion, although in this highly competitive world where sending children to kindergarten maybe unavoidable, parents still need to assume their responsibility to spend as much time as possible to nurse and instil their children. Only in this way can our children grow up to adults with responsibility and our society become one with happiness and wellbeing.

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