飞跃2011考研英语肖克作文
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飞跃2011考研英语——肖克老师写作模板 2011年考研英语冲刺阶段

1.历年考试主要涉及一些general topics, 如爱心(2001)、成长(2003)、代沟(1992)、友谊(1994)、家庭(2005)、承诺(1998)、崇拜(2006)、健康(1996)、资源利用(2000)、文化交流(2002)等话题。考生要以小见大,从图片细节中提炼升华出大型宏观主题加以议论,分析原因、利弊并得出建议。命题中的图片和图表往往是单个或局部情况,但只追逐个别现象,分析就没有了深度,往往要追溯到总体情况。即使2006年考题图画中有英国球星Beckham 的发型,也要升华到对普遍的偶像崇拜(idol worship )现象的评价,而非仅仅针对Beckham 个人。命题从来不在个别事件、具体环节或细枝末节上做文章,决不会细到介绍北京经济适用房建设情况或点评《满城尽带黄金价》。 2. 命题中的“和谐社会”倾向:

在以上分析的基础上,我们重新审视历年考题的命题,发现以中老年教授组成的命题团队普遍趋向常规主流观点。那么考题围绕着时代背景和主流思想,已经逐渐形成了以“和谐社会”为核心的命题思路。只不过总体以和谐作为公式的话题可以分成和谐的三个不同层次:

图画作文构思的考生,建议近期可上网查寻一下中国新闻漫画网,寻找一些幽默讽刺图画,练习快速推理,查找问题所在,同时进行相关词联想,熟能生巧。稍加练习,便会发现一些惯性推理技巧,考试时就会大大减轻紧张感,从容不迫地进行构思和创作。

评分标准:本题以总体评分法, 通篇分档计分,计分标准如下:

20一17分 内容切题,包括题中所列的各项要求:清楚表达其内涵,文字连贯;句式有变化,句子结构和用词正确。文章长度符合要求。

16—13分 内容切题,包括题中所列的各项要求;比较清楚地表达其内涵,

文字基本连贯;句式有一定变化,句子结构和用词错误较少。文章长

度符合要求。

12—9分 内容切题,基本包括题中所列的各项要求;基本清楚地表达其内

涵:句子结构和用词有一些错误。文章长度符合要求。

8—5分 内容基本切题,基本包含题中所列的各项要求,语句可以理解,但

有较多的句子结构和用词错误。文章长度基本符合要求。

4—1分 基本按要求写作,但只有少数句子可理解。

0分 文不切题,语句混乱,无法理解。

一. 说明现象

1. Recently the phenomenon of„„„.has aroused great concern and

should be given enough consideration.

2. Recently the problem of has been brought in to focus/brought to

public attention.

3. A virtual epidemic of the„.is now under in the society

4. „„.is another of the new and bitter truths we have to face now.

5. Man is now facing with a big problem„., which is becoming more

and more serious .

6. With the development of modern industry, more and more people are

concerned about the problem of

7. In the past few years , a tend of „..has been becoming more and

more clear.

二. 发表现点与看法

1. I fully agree with the statement that„„„The reasons are chiefly as follows.

2. Although many people believe that„„I doubt whether the argument bears much analysis.

3. Although the popular belief is„„.a study indicates„„.. 4. some people suggest„„But what these people fail to understand is „„..

5. from a personal perspective, I prefer to

6. It is true that„„„„„„„..but a point is being left out of our consideration.

7. In order to answer the question of„„„„„a person must weigh two sides.

三.. 对立观点

1.Different people have (hold) different views (opinions/ points of view) on this issue (problem/matter / question)

2.Some believe ... Others think, Still others claim(assume, have, hold, claim, believe, maintain, take a stand on)

3.They are quite different from each other in interpreting the issue.

4.As far as I am concerned (As far as I know)

5.I have to take other factors into consideration if I am confronted with such a difficult choice.

四. 主题句常用句型

1.It is important (necessary, urgent, difficult, easy, convenient, comfortable, expensive, desirable, advisable) for sb. to do sth. (that) Eg.

It is inevitable that the natural resources throughout the world are diminishing as the demand for them is on the increase

It is obvious that the strength of a country's economy is directly bound up with the efficiency of its industry and agriculture.

It is urgent for the government to take measures to control the birth rate in our country.

It is desirable to build more hospitals, shopping centers, recreation centers, cinemas, and other public facilities to meet the increasing needs of the people.

2.Nothing in the world can delight me so much as„„„..

3.In the age of information and communication, the computer plays a significant role.

4. Nothing is more important than„..

5. one cannot emphasize the importance of„„.so much

6.. It goes without saying that...

It goes without saying that exercises are a good way to keep healthy.

五. 原因解释

1. It may be attributed to the following three points.

2. The deterioration of ecological system may be attributed to the following leading factors. First of all,...

Secondly, ...... Last but not least ...

3. A careful analysis of the charts above may explain why the number of species of wildlife is on the decline and the rate of wildlife extinction is accelerating.

4. It is no easy job to find the reason for this tendency which involves several complicated factors.

5. There are many reasons responsible for this instance, and the following are the typical ones. For one thing,„„„In addition,„„.The main reason is that„„

6. One of the reasons that is given for „..is that„„

7. A further reason why I advocate an attitude of„..is that„.

8..An increase in demand causes (results in / leads to/produces) higher prices, which aggravates people's financial burden.

六. 列举、举例表达方式

1.For example, women are holding higher positions in political and economic power.

2.For instance, the economic status of the people has been greatly improved.

3.Take... for example,...

4.A case in point is ....

5.The following example may well illustrate the point. (show, demonstrate)

6.... is a good case in point.

7. This chart shows (diagram, table, graph, form, picture, cartoon, bars)

七. 结论性

1. From what have been discussed above, we may safely arrive at the conclusion „„„..

2. Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that

3. To sum up the above argument, I think a proper attitude towards „„„is that„„„„

4. As far as I am concerned, I will choose to „„„„because the choice fits my personality and my life-long belief.

5. judging from all the evidence available, we may safely come to the conclusion that„„.

6. Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects outweigh the negative ones.

Therefore, I would like„„„„.

八. 后果性

1 No doubt, if we ignore the problem, there is every chance that „„„„„will be put in danger.

2. we must search for a quick action, because the present situation

of „„..,if allowed to proceed, will certainly lead to„„„„.. 3. If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and

some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is„„„„

4. In order to crack the nuts, you need confidence, perseverance and also

courage. What is more important, careful consideration should be given before you carry out measures.

九. 建议性

1. It is high time that„„„Here are some of the measures that might be taken immediately.

2. Although it is affected by many factors, still there are certain ways that can make the situation better. The most important is„„„„„Another way is„„„„„still another way is„„„„.

3. No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of„„„But the common recognition of the importance of „„„..might be the first step on the right way.

4. Many solutions are offered here, all of them make some sense, but non is adequate enough. The problems should be studied in depth. 5. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you hold it sooner or later.

6. But this problem is very complicated. Perhaps people can hardly rely on only one way to solve the problem completely.

第一段

(1)What sets me pondering exceedingly in the first picture is that ,which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but illuminating on second thoughts.

(2)Frankly speaking,the most unforgettable image arising in my eyes in the second picture is that .

(3)Apparently, this silly but thought-provoking picture mirrors a phenomenon that nothing is more destructive to our social harmony and development than A

第二段

(1) As for the issue of ( A ), its situation has been becoming increasingly unsatisfactory in spite of the fact that most people are still ignorant of the problems it brings about.

(2) It is no difficult job to come up with some possible harmful effects resulting from the existence of A.

(3)To begin with, with its seemingly destructive power, A can not only hamper individuals’development, but also serve as an evil instrument to hurt sb’s physical and mental health.

(5) Those equipped with A are always looked down upon by others, because A may endow them with more selfishness and hypocrisy.

(6) In addition, A in our life should be regarded as social malignant tumor and the grim status contradicts with our efforts to build up a harmonious society..

(7)And most often, the people who are frequently mistreated with

A will develop deep hatred for our society because it hinders the progress of our society and interrupts our personal life.

(8) Accidents of various kinds resulting from A happen more frequently than ever before.

(9) B and C are the cases in point ,which are definitely convincing to make us gain a better insight about what has happened.

第三段

(1)From what have been discussed above, what really accounts is not the danger of A , but how we can prevent it from getting worse.

(2) On the one hand, it is urgent for us to strengthen the enforcement of laws and regulations to eliminate A.

(3) On the other hand, a publicizing educational campaign should be carried out to enhance people ’s awareness about the harmfulness of A.

(4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)In one word, the A must be removed because it hinders the progress of our society.

一. 公德的问题, 比如说脏话, 乱扔垃圾, 乱脱鞋问题

第一段

(1)What sets me pondering exceedingly in the first picture is that ,which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but illuminating on second thoughts.

(2)Frankly speaking,the most unforgettable image arising in my eyes in the second picture is that .

(3)Apparently, this silly but thought-provoking picture mirrors a phenomenon that nothing is more destructive to our social harmony and development than bad manners

第二段 (1) As for the issue of ( bad manners ), its situation has been becoming increasingly unsatisfactory in spite of the fact that most people are still ignorant of the problems it brings about.

(2) It is no difficult job to come up with some possible harmful effects resulting from the existence of uncivilized behaviors.

(3)To begin with, with its seemingly destructive power, A can not only hamper individuals’development, but also serve as an evil instrument to hurt our physical and mental health.

(5) Those equipped with A are always looked down upon by others, because A may endow them with more selfishness and hypocrisy. (6) In addition, A in our life should be regarded as social malignant tumor and the grim status contradicts with our efforts to build up a harmonious society..

(7)And most often, the people who are frequently mistreated with

A will develop deep hatred for our society because it hinders the progress of our society and interrupts our personal life.

(8) Accidents of various kinds resulting from A happen more frequently than ever before.

(9) B and C are the cases in point ,which are definitely convincing to make us gain a better insight about what has happened.

第三段

(1)From what have been discussed above, what really accounts is not the danger of A , but how we can prevent it from getting worse.

(2) On the one hand, it is urgent for us to strengthen the enforcement of laws and regulations to eliminate A.

(3) On the other hand, a publicizing educational campaign should be carried out to enhance people ’s awareness about the harmfulness of A.

(4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)In one word, the A must be removed because it hinders the progress of our society.

第一段

(1)What sets me pondering exceedingly in the first picture is that ,which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but illuminating on second thoughts.

(2)Frankly speaking,the most unforgettable image arising in my eyes in the second picture is that .

(3)Apparently, this silly but thought-provoking picture mirrors a phenomenon that nothing is more destructive to our social harmony and development than deception

第二段

(1) As for the issue of ( credibility crisis ), its situation has been becoming increasingly unsatisfactory in spite of the fact that most people are still ignorant of the problems it brings about.

(2) It is no difficult job to come up with some possible harmful effects resulting from the existence of A.

(3)To begin with, with its seemingly destructive power, A can not only hamper individuals’development, but also serve as an evil instrument to hurt our physical and mental health.

(5) Those equipped with A are always looked down upon by others, because A may endow them with more selfishness and hypocrisy.

(6) In addition, A in our life should be regarded as social malignant tumor and the grim status contradicts with our efforts to build up a harmonious society..

(7)And most often, the people who are frequently mistreated with

A will develop deep hatred for our society because it hinders the progress of our society and interrupts our personal life.

(8) Accidents of various kinds resulting from A happen more frequently than ever before.

(9) B and C are the cases in point ,which are definitely convincing to make us gain a better insight about what has happened.

第三段

(1)From what have been discussed above, what really accounts is not the danger of A , but how we can prevent it from getting worse.

(2) On the one hand, it is urgent for us to strengthen the enforcement of laws and regulations to eliminate A.

(3) On the other hand, a publicizing educational campaign should be carried out to enhance people ’s awareness about the harmfulness of A.

(4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)In one word, the A must be removed because it hinders the progress of our society.

第一段

(1)What sets me pondering exceedingly in the first picture is that ,which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but illuminating on second thoughts.

(2)Frankly speaking,the most unforgettable image arising in my eyes in the second picture is that .

(3)Apparently, this silly but thought-provoking picture mirrors a phenomenon that nothing is more destructive to our social harmony and development than A

第二段

(1) As for the issue of ( A ), its situation has been becoming increasingly unsatisfactory in spite of the fact that most people are still ignorant of the problems it brings about.

(2) It is no difficult job to come up with some possible harmful effects resulting from the existence of A.

(3)To begin with, with its seemingly destructive power, A can not only hamper individuals’development, but also serve as an evil instrument to hurt sb’s physical and mental health.

(5) Those equipped with A are always looked down upon by others, because A may endow them with more selfishness and hypocrisy.

(6) In addition, A in our life should be regarded as social malignant tumor and the grim status contradicts with our efforts to build up a harmonious society..

(7)And most often, the people who are frequently mistreated with

A will develop deep hatred for our society because it hinders the progress of our society and interrupts our personal life.

(8) Accidents of various kinds resulting from A happen more frequently than ever before.

(9) B and C are the cases in point ,which are definitely convincing to make us gain a better insight about what has happened.

第三段

(1)From what have been discussed above, what really accounts is not the danger of A , but how we can prevent it from getting worse.

(2) On the one hand, it is urgent for us to strengthen the enforcement of laws and regulations to eliminate A.

(3) On the other hand, a publicizing educational campaign should be carried out to enhance people ’s awareness about the harmfulness of A.

(4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)In one word, the A must be removed because it hinders the progress of our society.

第一段

(1)What sets me pondering exceedingly in the first picture is that ,which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but illuminating on second thoughts.

(2)Frankly speaking,the most unforgettable image arising in my eyes in the second picture is that .

(3)Apparently, this silly but thought-provoking picture mirrors a phenomenon that nothing is more destructive to our social harmony and development than A

第二段

(1) As for the issue of ( A ), its situation has been becoming increasingly unsatisfactory in spite of the fact that most people are still ignorant of the problems it brings about.

(2) It is no difficult job to come up with some possible harmful effects resulting from the existence of A.

(3)To begin with, with its seemingly destructive power, A can not only hamper individuals’development, but also serve as an evil instrument to hurt our physical and mental health.

(5) Those equipped with A are always looked down upon by others, because A may endow them with more selfishness and hypocrisy.

(6) In addition, A in our life should be regarded as social malignant tumor and the grim status contradicts with our efforts to build up a harmonious society..

(7)And most often, the people who are frequently mistreated with A will develop deep hatred for our society because it hinders the progress of our society and interrupts our personal life.

(8) Accidents of various kinds resulting from A happen more frequently than ever before.

(9) B and C are the cases in point ,which are definitely convincing to make us gain a better insight about what has happened.

第三段

(1)From what have been discussed above, what really accounts is not the danger of A , but how we can prevent it from getting worse.

(2) On the one hand, it is urgent for us to strengthen the enforcement of laws and regulations to eliminate A.

(3) On the other hand, a publicizing educational campaign should be carried out to enhance people ’s awareness about the harmfulness of A.

(4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)In one word, the A must be removed because it hinders the progress of our society.

第一段

(1)What sets me pondering exceedingly in the first picture is that ,which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but illuminating on second thoughts.

(2)Frankly speaking,the most unforgettable image arising in my eyes in the second picture is that . (3)Apparently, this silly but thought-provoking picture mirrors a phenomenon that nothing is more destructive to our social harmony and development than A

第二段

(1) As for the issue of ( A ), its situation has been becoming increasingly unsatisfactory in spite of the fact that most people are still ignorant of the problems it brings about.

(2) It is no difficult job to come up with some possible harmful effects resulting from the existence of A.

(3)To begin with, with its seemingly destructive power, A can not only hamper individuals’development, but also serve as an evil instrument to hurt our physical and mental health.

(5) Those equipped with A are always looked down upon by others, because A may endow them with more selfishness and hypocrisy.

(6) In addition, A in our life should be regarded as social malignant tumor and the grim status contradicts with our efforts to build up a harmonious society..

(7)And most often, the people who are frequently mistreated with A will develop deep hatred for our society because it hinders the progress of our society and interrupts our personal life.

(8) Accidents of various kinds resulting from A happen more frequently than ever before.

(9) B and C are the cases in point ,which are definitely convincing to make us gain a better insight about what has happened.

第三段

(1)From what have been discussed above, what really accounts is not the danger of A , but how we can prevent it from getting worse.

(2) On the one hand, it is urgent for us to strengthen the enforcement of laws and regulations to eliminate A.

(3) On the other hand, a publicizing educational campaign should be carried out to enhance people ’s awareness about the harmfulness of A.

(4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)In one word, the A must be removed because it hinders the progress of our society

第一段

(1)What sets me pondering exceedingly in the first picture is that ,which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but illuminating on second thoughts.

(2)Frankly speaking,the most unforgettable image arising in my eyes in the second picture is that .

(3)Apparently, this silly but thought-provoking picture mirrors a phenomenon that nothing is more destructive to our social harmony and development than A

第二段

(1) As for the issue of ( A ), its situation has been becoming increasingly unsatisfactory in spite of the fact that most people are still ignorant of the problems it brings about.

(2) It is no difficult job to come up with some possible harmful effects resulting from the existence of A.

(3)To begin with, with its seemingly destructive power, A can not only hamper individuals’development, but also serve as an evil instrument to hurt our physical and mental health.

(5) Those equipped with A are always looked down upon by others, because A may endow them with more selfishness and hypocrisy.

(6) In addition, A in our life should be regarded as social malignant tumor and the grim status contradicts with our efforts to build up a harmonious society..

(7)And most often, the people who are frequently mistreated with

A will develop deep hatred for our society because it hinders the progress of our society and interrupts our personal life.

(8) Accidents of various kinds resulting from A happen more

frequently than ever before.

(9) B and C are the cases in point ,which are definitely convincing to make us gain a better insight about what has happened.

第三段

(1)From what have been discussed above, what really accounts is not the danger of A , but how we can prevent it from getting worse.

(2) On the one hand, it is urgent for us to strengthen the

enforcement of laws and regulations to eliminate A.

(3) On the other hand, a publicizing educational campaign should be carried out to enhance people ’s awareness about the harmfulness of A.

(4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)In one word, the A must be removed because it hinders the progress of our society.

第一段

(1)What captures my eyes in the first picture is

that , which seems to be common around us but quite disastrous.

(2)Apparently, the ridiculous second picture draws attention to the fact that

(3) To the popular mind, it is immediately assumed that when the strengh of sth is appreciated enthusiastically, it is its dark side that should not be ignored.

(4) Increasingly , more argumentations about A can be found in TV programs, newspapers, university classes and many aspects of our everyday life.

第二段

(1) The aim of the painter of the drawings can be briefed as follows.

(2) To begin with, A should be the uppermost in our thoughts. Otherwise, our society is bound to deteriorate.

(3) Living in our society, people will suffer instead of enjoying the civilization and happiness of modern society because the society is filled with A . (4) The fact that is a case in point. Thus it is not hard to spot cases of such kind in the field of education, medicine, accounting, entertainment, etc.

(5)In addition, situating under the shadow of A , its consequences not only do harm to our physical health but also undermine our moral values and world perspectives such as .

(6) No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the cases mentioned below . (7)According to a survey made by Daily, 83% of young people who have ever witnessed or experienced the situation of A will be wounded both physically and psychologically and even feel loss of hope about the society.

(8)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of .

第三段

(1) In order to crack the nuts, you need confidence, perseverance and also courage. .But the common recognition of the importance of eliminating

A might be the first step on the right way.

(2)On the one hand, it is urgent for us to strengthen the enforcement of laws and regulations and social supervisions to save sb out of the evil hands of A.

(3)On the other hand, a publicizing educational campaign should be carried out to enhance people’s awareness about the harmfulness of A.

(4)However, it is easier said than done.

(5)Although the fight against it is a long-standing and tremendous task, our efforts will eventually pay off if we take actions with our hands and brain.

预测范文一

第一副图一个学生在疯狂的抽烟, 不到半小时整个一包烟都抽没了, 而且一直在咳嗽

第二副图描述了这个学生骗父母要交学费, 结果把钱拿去买了很多盒烟

第一段

(1)What captures my eyes in the first picture is

that , which

seems to be common around us but quite disastrous.

(2)Apparently, the ridiculous second picture draws attention to the fact that

(3) To the popular mind, it is immediately assumed that when the strengh of sth is appreciated enthusiastically, it is its dark side that should not be ignored.

(4) Increasingly , more argumentations about A can be found in TV programs, newspapers, university classes and many aspects of our everyday life.

第二段

(1) The aim of the painter of the drawings can be briefed as follows.

(2) To begin with, A should be the uppermost in our thoughts. Otherwise, our society is bound to deteriorate.

(3) Living in our society, people will suffer instead of enjoying the civilization and happiness of modern society because the society is filled

with A . (4) The fact that is a case in point. Thus it is not hard to spot cases of such kind in the field of education, medicine, accounting, entertainment, etc.

(5)In addition, situating under the shadow of A , its consequences not only do harm to our physical health but also undermine our moral values and world perspectives such as .

(6) No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the cases mentioned below . (7)According to a survey made by Daily, 83% of young people who have ever witnessed or experienced the situation of A will be wounded both physically and psychologically and even feel loss of hope about the society.

(8)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of .

第三段

(1) In order to crack the nuts, you need confidence, perseverance and also courage. .But the common recognition of the importance of eliminating

A might be the first step on the right way.

(2)On the one hand, it is urgent for us to strengthen the enforcement of laws and regulations and social supervisions to save sb out of the evil hands of A.

(3)On the other hand, a publicizing educational campaign should be carried out to enhance people’s awareness about the harmfulness of A.

(4)However, it is easier said than done.

(5)Although the fight against it is a long-standing and tremendous task, our efforts will eventually pay off if we take actions with our hands and brain.

第一段

(1)What captures my eyes in the first picture is that , which

seems to be common around us but quite disastrous.

(2)Apparently, the ridiculous second picture draws attention to the fact that

(3) To the popular mind, it is immediately assumed that when the strengh of sth is appreciated enthusiastically, it is its dark side that should not be ignored.

(4) Increasingly , more argumentations about A can be found in TV programs, newspapers, university classes and many aspects of our everyday life.

第二段

(1) The aim of the painter of the drawings can be briefed as follows. (2) To begin with, A should be the uppermost in our thoughts. Otherwise, our society is bound to deteriorate.

(3) Living in our society, people will suffer instead of enjoying the civilization and happiness of modern society because the society is filled with A . (4) The fact that is a case in point. Thus it is not hard to spot cases of such kind in the field of education, medicine, accounting, entertainment, etc.

(5)In addition, situating under the shadow of A , its consequences not only do harm to our physical health but also undermine our moral values and world perspectives such as .

(6) No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the cases mentioned below . (7)According to a survey made by Daily, 83% of young people who have ever witnessed or experienced the situation of A will be wounded both physically and psychologically and even feel loss of hope about the society.

(8)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of .

第三段

(1) In order to crack the nuts, you need confidence, perseverance and also courage. .But the common recognition of the importance of eliminating

A might be the first step on the right way.

(2)On the one hand, it is urgent for us to strengthen the enforcement of laws and regulations and social supervisions to save sb out of the evil hands of A.

(3)On the other hand, a publicizing educational campaign should be carried out to enhance people’s awareness about the harmfulness of A.

(4)However, it is easier said than done.

(5)Although the fight against it is a long-standing and tremendous task, our efforts will eventually pay off if we take actions with our hands and brain.

第一段

(1)What captures my eyes in the first picture is

that , which

seems to be common around us but quite disastrous.

(2)Apparently, the ridiculous second picture draws attention to the fact that

(3) To the popular mind, it is immediately assumed that when the strengh of sth is appreciated enthusiastically, it is its dark side that should not be ignored.

(4) Increasingly , more argumentations about A can be found in TV programs, newspapers, university classes and many aspects of our everyday life.

第二段

(1) The aim of the painter of the drawings can be briefed as follows. (2) To begin with, A should be the uppermost in our thoughts. Otherwise, our society is bound to deteriorate.

(3) Living in our society, people will suffer instead of enjoying the civilization and happiness of modern society because the society is filled with A . (4) The fact that is a case in point. Thus it is not hard to spot cases of such kind in the field of education, medicine, accounting, entertainment, etc.

(5)In addition, situating under the shadow of A , its consequences not only do harm to our physical health but also undermine our moral values and world perspectives such as .

(6) No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the cases mentioned below . (7)According to a survey made by Daily, 83% of young people who have ever witnessed or experienced the situation of A will be wounded both physically and psychologically and even feel loss of hope about the society.

(8)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of .

第三段

(1) In order to crack the nuts, you need confidence, perseverance and also courage. .But the common recognition of the importance of eliminating

A might be the first step on the right way.

(2)On the one hand, it is urgent for us to strengthen the enforcement of laws and regulations and social supervisions to save sb out of the evil hands of A.

(3)On the other hand, a publicizing educational campaign should be carried out to enhance people’s awareness about the harmfulness of A.

(4)However, it is easier said than done.

(5)Although the fight against it is a long-standing and tremendous task, our efforts will eventually pay off if we take actions with our hands and brain.

第一段

(1)What captures my eyes in the first picture is that , which

seems to be common around us but quite disastrous.

(2)Apparently, the ridiculous second picture draws attention to the fact that

(3) To the popular mind, it is immediately assumed that when the strengh of sth is appreciated enthusiastically, it is its dark side that should not be ignored.

(4) Increasingly , more argumentations about A can be found in TV programs, newspapers, university classes and many aspects of our everyday life.

第二段

(1) The aim of the painter of the drawings can be briefed as follows. (2) To begin with, A should be the uppermost in our thoughts. Otherwise, our society is bound to deteriorate.

(3) Living in our society, people will suffer instead of enjoying the civilization and happiness of modern society because the society is filled with A . (4) The fact that is a case in point. Thus it is not hard to spot cases of such kind in the field of education, medicine, accounting, entertainment, etc.

(5)In addition, situating under the shadow of A , its consequences not only do harm to our physical health but also undermine our moral values and world perspectives such as .

(6) No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the cases mentioned below . (7)According to a survey made by Daily, 83% of young people who have ever witnessed or experienced the situation of A will be wounded both physically and psychologically and even feel loss of hope about the society.

(8)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of .

第三段

(1) In order to crack the nuts, you need confidence, perseverance and also courage. .But the common recognition of the importance of eliminating

A might be the first step on the right way.

(2)On the one hand, it is urgent for us to strengthen the enforcement of laws and regulations and social supervisions to save sb out of the evil hands of A.

(3)On the other hand, a publicizing educational campaign should be carried out to enhance people’s awareness about the harmfulness of A.

(4)However, it is easier said than done.

(5)Although the fight against it is a long-standing and tremendous task, our efforts will eventually pay off if we take actions with our hands and brain.

第一段

(1)What captures my eyes in the first picture is

that , which seems to be common around us but quite disastrous.

(2)Apparently, the ridiculous second picture draws attention to the fact that

(3) To the popular mind, it is immediately assumed that when the strengh of sth is appreciated enthusiastically, it is its dark side that should not be ignored.

(4) Increasingly , more argumentations about A can be found in TV programs, newspapers, university classes and many aspects of our everyday life.

第二段

(1) The aim of the painter of the drawings can be briefed as follows.

(2) To begin with, A should be the uppermost in our thoughts. Otherwise, our society is bound to deteriorate.

(3) Living in our society, people will suffer instead of enjoying the civilization and happiness of modern society because the society is filled with A . (4) The fact that is a case in point. Thus it is not hard to spot cases of such kind in the field of education, medicine, accounting, entertainment, etc.

(5)In addition, situating under the shadow of A , its consequences not only do harm to our physical health but also undermine our moral values and world perspectives such as .

(6) No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the cases mentioned below .

(7)According to a survey made by Daily, 83% of young people who have ever witnessed or experienced the situation of A will be wounded both physically and psychologically and even feel loss of hope about the society.

(8)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of .

第三段

(1) In order to crack the nuts, you need confidence, perseverance and also courage. .But the common recognition of the importance of eliminating

A might be the first step on the right way.

(2)On the one hand, it is urgent for us to strengthen the enforcement of laws and regulations and social supervisions to save sb out of the evil hands of A.

(3)On the other hand, a publicizing educational campaign should be carried out to enhance people’s awareness about the harmfulness of A.

(4)However, it is easier said than done.

(5)Although the fight against it is a long-standing and tremendous task, our efforts will eventually pay off if we take actions with our hands and brain.

第一段

(1)what impresses me deeply in the first picture is

that ,which seems to be humorous and

ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts.

(2)The most striking feature in the second picture is that

unbelievably, somebody does sth, doing sth , which seems to be a threatening situation we are unwilling to see.

(3)It goes without saying that no phenomenon has characterized the past few years and aroused our serious concerns more

than .

(4)A as the focus of public concern mainly results from its negligible but harmful influence on individuals, collective, and even the whole world.

第二段

(1) Why do we lay emphasis on this?

(2) To the popular mind, it is immediately assumed that when the enjoyment of A is argued, it is its dark side that should be brought into highlight.

(3) Several points analyzed below can help us gain a better insight into what has happened.

(4)To begin with, situating under the shadow of A , its

consequences not only do harm to our physical health but also undermines our moral values and world perspectives such

as .

(5) Undoubtedly, this phenomenon of A should be condemned severely or made illegal.

(6) In addition, we must keep highly alert of the problems evoked by A , because once the harmful influence accumulates to a certain degree and then spread, it will surely contradict with our efforts to build up a harmonious society and cause social disturbance and deterioration in terms of .

(6)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the cases mentioned below .

(7)According to a survey made by Daily, 83% of young people who have ever witnessed the situation of A , will severely accuse the phenomenon and call for immediate solutions .

(8)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of .

第三段

(1)From what have been discussed above, what really accounts is not the danger of 主题, but how we can prevent it from getting worse.

(2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect .

(3)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction. (4)However, it is easier said than done.

(5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one, our efforts will eventually pay off.

(6) Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.

预测范文一

第一幅图画描述了很多游人在游玩和照相,在天安门广场游玩时,在吐口香糖, 乱扔烟头, 废弃物,

第二图 广场上充满了污渍

第一段

(1)What impresses deeply in the fist picture is that while so many delightful tourists are taking photos and enjoying themselves in a relaxing way, they throw away the chewed gums and smoked

cigarettes and other rubbishes impolitely and selfishly ,which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts. (2)The most striking feature in the second picture is that the Tiananmen Square as the face-lift of China is severely polluted and full of dusts and dirty spots, causing the disguise of foreigners and harming the international images of Chinese people , which seems to be a threatening situation we are unwilling to see.

(3)It goes without saying that no phenomenon has characterized the past few years and aroused our serious concerns more than damaging the sanitary environment of cultural relics .

(4)the unreasonable behaviors as the focus of public concern mainly results from its negligible but harmful influence on individuals, collective, and even the whole world.

第二段

(1) why do we lay emphasis on this?

(2)To the popular mind, it is immediately assumed that when the enjoyment of the sightseeing is argued, it is its dark side that should be brought into highlight.

(3) Several points analyzed below can help us gain a better insight into what has happened.

(4)To begin with, situating under the shadow of immoral behaviors , its consequences not only do harm to our physical health but also undermines our moral values and world perspectives such as breathing in poisonous airs and being looked down upon by other people .

(5) Undoubtedly, this phenomenon of destroying the environment should be condemned severely or made illegal.

(6)In addition, we must keep highly alert of the problems evoked by the uncivilized behaviors, because once the harmful influence accumulates to a certain degree and then spread, it will surely contradict with our efforts to build up a harmonious society and cause social disturbance and deterioration in terms of undermining the national prestige and discouraging the enthusiasm of visiting our country.

(6)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the cases mentioned below .

(7)According to a survey made by Beijing Daily, 83% of young people who have ever witnessed the situation of uncivilized behaviors , will severely accuse the phenomenon and call for immediate solutions .

(8)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of our cultural relics .

第三段

最后一段要强调解决问题,谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识,加强执法

(1)From what have been discussed above, what really accounts is not the danger of undermining the environment, but how we can prevent it from getting worse.

(2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect our places of interests .

(3)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving our relics out of the evil hands of destruction. (4)However, it is easier said than done.

(5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one, our efforts will eventually pay off.

(6) Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.

Directions:

Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in no less than 160 words clearly on the ANSWER SHEET 2. Your essay should cover all the information provided and meet the requirements below:

1、Describe the picture and interpret its meaning.

2、According to the picture, make a comment and give your reasons.

3、Suggest your advice.

Directions:

Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in no less than 160 words clearly on the ANSWER SHEET 2. Your essay should cover all the information provided and meet the requirements below:

1、Describe the picture and interpret its meaning.

2、According to the picture, make a comment and give your reasons.

3、Suggest your advice.

第一段:

(1)There is no denying that recent few years has witnessed a deteriorating phenomenon of( aging populations )Which has induced heightened concerns and should call for immediate solutions

(2)It is common to hear on Television that many countries list ( the older generations )as their prior apprehensions in maintaining individual and national survival and prosperity.

(3) According to statistics profoundly betrayed in the chart, Chinese aging population is on the dramatic increase

with 132 million accounting for 10.6 of the total. (4) What captures my eyes in the chart is that there will be a (two )-time boost in the number of ( world’s aging populations

) from ( 300 million ) to ( 600 million ) in the range of ( 25 ) years.

第二段

(1) As for the issue of ( aging populations ), its situation has been becoming increasingly unsatisfactory in spite of the fact that most people are still ignorant of the problems it brings about.

(2) It is no difficult job to come up with some possible factors that underlie the nasty phenomenon

(3) To begin with, with the standard of living improved and living pace escalating, nothing is more essential to ( prolong the life span of old people ) than ( improved medical technology ), which seems to be a leading factor we have frequently witnessed.

(4) Moreover, the combination of ( better family care and more

scientific eating and living habits), to some extent, play contributing roles in ( promoting the life span ).

(5) However, when we enjoy the benefits of ( living longer )

enthusiastically and delightfully, its harmfulness should also be taken into adequate considerations. (6) Accidents of various kinds resulting from (aging populations ) happen more frequently than ever before such as ( labor shortage and lower productivity )

第三段:

(1) Judging from what have been mentioned above, the rapidity of ( aging populations ) has made it more urgent for the adoption of countermeasures.

(2)No doubt the key is to build a solid foundation of ( social security ).

(3) What ’s more, a publicizing educational campaign should be carried out to enhance social supervisions and regulations to encourage more equal distributions of medical resources

(4) No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of(aging populations).

(5) But the common recognition of the importance of the serious situations might be the first step on the right way.

第一段:

(1)What captures my eyes in the first picture is

that , which

seems to be common around us but quite meaningful.

(2)Apparently, the thought-provoking second picture draws attention

to the fact that

(3) Nowadays no phenomenon has characterized the recent few years more than A which could help us make wise decisions and solve any possible problems when facing competition and challenges.

第二段:

(1) The aim of the painter of the drawings can be briefed as follows.

(2) First of all, A is crucial for every individual. Those equipped with

A are always admired and respected, because A may endow them with more competence, chances, self-confidence to overcome difficulties and handle problems. (3) Those people appear to possess a special charm, bringing others hope, passion and surprise, and, winning others ’ favor and trust.

(4) Therefore, they can proceed more smoothly and achieve their dreams more rapidly and enjoy a vigorous and colorful life. For example,

(5) What is more, the whole society also thrives. Through continuously promoting the social productivity, increasingly improving the productive relationship, and gradually enriching human material and spiritual wealth,

A eventually brings economic prosperity and social harmony.

(6)Frankly speaking,it can directly promote the rapid progress of the society with its energy and bring advanced techniques,highly efficient management and adequate communication,and other unexpected resources.

(7) No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (8) are the cases in point.

第三段:

(1) In short, where there is better A , there are more hope, vitality

and development.

(2) As far as I am concerned, it is necessary that some effective

measures should be taken to make it more efficient.

(3) On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other

people ’s opinions and benefits.

(4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.

(5) To sum up when we are benefiting from A , we shall also do our utmost to maintain its vitality to ensure ourselves a brighter future.

第一副图描述了一个人在叫一帮希望小学的孩子说英文, 而且当地条件很艰苦.

第二副图描述了很多年后, 很多孩子回来看他, 看到孩子大学的录取通知书. 他流泪了.

第一段:

第一段:

(1)What captures my eyes in the first picture is

that , which

seems to be common around us but quite meaningful.

(2)Apparently, the thought-provoking second picture draws attention to the fact that

(3) Nowadays no phenomenon has characterized the recent few years more than A which could help us make wise decisions and solve any possible problems when facing competition and challenges.

第二段:

(1) The aim of the painter of the drawings can be briefed as follows.

(2) First of all, A is crucial for every individual. Those equipped with

A are always admired and respected, because A may endow them with more competence, chances, self-confidence to overcome difficulties and handle problems. (3) Those people appear to possess a special charm, bringing others hope, passion and surprise, and, winning others ’ favor and trust.

(4) Therefore, they can proceed more smoothly and achieve their dreams more rapidly and enjoy a vigorous and colorful life. For example,

(5) What is more, the whole society also thrives. Through continuously promoting the social productivity, increasingly improving the productive relationship, and gradually enriching human material and spiritual wealth,

A eventually brings economic prosperity and social harmony.

(6)Frankly speaking,it can directly promote the rapid progress of the society with its energy and bring advanced techniques,highly efficient management and adequate communication,and other unexpected resources.

(7) No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (8) are the cases in point.

第三段:

(4) In short, where there is better A , there are more hope, vitality

and development.

(5) As far as I am concerned, it is necessary that some effective

measures should be taken to make it more efficient.

(6) On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other

people ’s opinions and benefits.

(4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.

(5) To sum up when we are benefiting from A , we shall also do our utmost to maintain its vitality to ensure ourselves a brighter future.

二. 拼搏的精神 (1)What captures my eyes in the first picture is

that , which

seems to be common around us but quite meaningful.

(2)Apparently, the thought-provoking second picture draws attention to the fact that

(3) Nowadays no phenomenon has characterized the recent few years more than A which could help us make wise decisions and solve any possible problems when facing competition and challenges.

第二段:

(1) The aim of the painter of the drawings can be briefed as follows.

(2) First of all, A is crucial for every individual. Those equipped with

A are always admired and respected, because A may endow them with more competence, chances, self-confidence to overcome difficulties and handle problems. (3) Those people appear to possess a special charm, bringing others hope, passion and surprise, and, winning others ’ favor and trust.

(4) Therefore, they can proceed more smoothly and achieve their dreams more rapidly and enjoy a vigorous and colorful life. For example,

(5) What is more, the whole society also thrives. Through continuously promoting the social productivity, increasingly improving the productive relationship, and gradually enriching human material and spiritual wealth,

A eventually brings economic prosperity and social harmony.

(6)Frankly speaking,it can directly promote the rapid progress of the society with its energy and bring advanced techniques,highly efficient management and adequate communication,and other unexpected resources.

(7) No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (8) are the cases in point.

第三段:

(7) In short, where there is better A , there are more hope,

vitality and development.

(8) As far as I am concerned, it is necessary that some effective

measures should be taken to make it more efficient.

(9) On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other

people ’s opinions and benefits.

(4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.

(5) To sum up when we are benefiting from A , we shall also do our utmost to maintain its vitality to ensure ourselves a brighter future.

第一段:

(1)What captures my eyes in the first picture is

that , which

seems to be common around us but quite meaningful.

(2)Apparently, the thought-provoking second picture draws attention to the fact that

(3) Nowadays no phenomenon has characterized the recent few years more than A which could help us make wise decisions and solve any possible problems when facing competition and challenges.

第二段:

(1) The aim of the painter of the drawings can be briefed as follows.

(2) First of all, A is crucial for every individual. Those equipped with

A are always admired and respected, because A may endow them with more competence, chances, self-confidence to overcome difficulties and handle problems. (3) Those people appear to possess a special charm, bringing others hope, passion and surprise, and, winning others ’ favor and trust.

(4) Therefore, they can proceed more smoothly and achieve their dreams more rapidly and enjoy a vigorous and colorful life. For example,

(5) What is more, the whole society also thrives. Through continuously promoting the social productivity, increasingly improving the productive relationship, and gradually enriching human material and spiritual wealth,

A eventually brings economic prosperity and social harmony.

(6)Frankly speaking,it can directly promote the rapid progress of the society with its energy and bring advanced techniques,highly efficient management and adequate communication,and other unexpected resources.

(7) No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (8) are the cases in point.

第三段:

(10) In short, where there is better A , there are more hope,

vitality and development.

(11) As far as I am concerned, it is necessary that some effective

measures should be taken to make it more efficient.

(12) On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other

people ’s opinions and benefits.

(4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.

(5) To sum up when we are benefiting from A , we shall also do our utmost to maintain its vitality to ensure ourselves a brighter future.

第一段:

(1)What captures my eyes in the first picture is

that , which

seems to be common around us but quite meaningful.

(2)Apparently, the thought-provoking second picture draws attention to the fact that

(3) Nowadays no phenomenon has characterized the recent few years more than A which could help us make wise decisions and solve any possible problems when facing competition and challenges.

第二段:

(1) The aim of the painter of the drawings can be briefed as follows.

(2) First of all, A is crucial for every individual. Those equipped with

A are always admired and respected, because A may endow them with more competence, chances, self-confidence to overcome difficulties and handle problems. (3) Those people appear to possess a special charm, bringing others hope, passion and surprise, and, winning others ’ favor and trust.

(4) Therefore, they can proceed more smoothly and achieve their dreams more rapidly and enjoy a vigorous and colorful life. For example,

(5) What is more, the whole society also thrives. Through continuously promoting the social productivity, increasingly improving the productive relationship, and gradually enriching human material and spiritual wealth,

A eventually brings economic prosperity and social harmony.

(6)Frankly speaking,it can directly promote the rapid progress of the society with its energy and bring advanced techniques,highly efficient management and adequate communication,and other unexpected resources.

(7) No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (8) are the cases in point.

第三段:

(1) In short, where there is better A , there are more hope, vitality

and development.

(2) As far as I am concerned, it is necessary that some effective

measures should be taken to make it more efficient.

(3) On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other

people ’s opinions and benefits.

(4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.

(5) To sum up when we are benefiting from A , we shall also do our utmost to maintain its vitality to ensure ourselves a brighter future.

第一段:

(1)What captures my eyes in the first picture is

that , which

seems to be common around us but quite meaningful.

(2)Apparently, the thought-provoking second picture draws attention to the fact that

(3) Nowadays no phenomenon has characterized the recent few years more than A which could help us make wise decisions and solve any possible problems when facing competition and challenges.

第二段:

(1) The aim of the painter of the drawings can be briefed as follows.

(2) First of all, A is crucial for every individual. Those equipped with

A are always admired and respected, because A may endow them with more competence, chances, self-confidence to overcome difficulties and handle problems. (3) Those people appear to possess a special charm, bringing others hope, passion and surprise, and, winning others ’ favor and trust.

(4) Therefore, they can proceed more smoothly and achieve their dreams more rapidly and enjoy a vigorous and colorful life. For example,

(5) What is more, the whole society also thrives. Through continuously promoting the social productivity, increasingly improving the productive relationship, and gradually enriching human material and spiritual wealth,

A eventually brings economic prosperity and social harmony.

(6)Frankly speaking,it can directly promote the rapid progress of the society with its energy and bring advanced techniques,highly efficient management and adequate communication,and other unexpected resources.

(7) No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (8) are the cases in point.

第三段:

(4) In short, where there is better A , there are more hope, vitality

and development.

(5) As far as I am concerned, it is necessary that some effective

measures should be taken to make it more efficient.

(6) On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other

people ’s opinions and benefits.

(4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.

(5) To sum up when we are benefiting from A , we shall also do our utmost to maintain its vitality to ensure ourselves a brighter future.

第一段:

(1) Generally speaking, the illustration above is far from complicated

and the most unforgettable feature that arises in my eyes is that

(2) What sets me pondering in the second picture is that , which contributes tremendously to

our individual and national harmony.

(3) There is no denying that such an image draws attention to the fact

that people tend to be puzzled by various challenges and competition

and are more likely to be deterred by present difficulties.

(4) If one is to , one could make wise decisions, as well as have a clearer sense of how to solve any given problem.

第二段:

(1)As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact profoundly indicates that persistency is momentous (重要的) and

fundamental to our individual, family and social survival and prosperity.

(2) To begin with, with its unbelievable magic power, A can not only accelerate individuals ’ development such as overcoming our own defects and improving the efficiency of our life but also can help us earn other people ’s appreciations and respects.

(3) What’s more, through continuously promoting the social

productivity, gradually enriching human material and spiritual wealth,

A eventually brings economic prosperity and social harmony.

(4) No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below.

(5)A person who is will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. (6)Only by can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.

第三段:

(1)From what have been discussed above, it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work.

(2) When we are benefiting from A , we shall also do our utmost to maintain its vitality to ensure ourselves a brighter future.

(3)On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people ’s opinions and benefits.

(4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.

(5) However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor.

第一幅图中描述了一个年轻人主动为了孕妇让座,第二幅图描述了孕妇又给老人去让座

第一段:

(1) Generally speaking, the illustration above is far from complicated

and the most unforgettable feature that arises in my eyes is that

(2) What sets me pondering in the second picture is that , which contributes tremendously to

our individual and national harmony.

(3) There is no denying that such an image draws attention to the fact that people tend to be puzzled by various challenges and competition and are more likely to be deterred by present difficulties. (4) If one is to , one could make wise,

long-term decisions, as well as have a clearer sense of how to solve any given problem.

第二段:

(1)As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact profoundly indicates that politeness is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to our individual, familial and social survival and prosperity.

(2) To begin with, with its unbelievable magic power, humility can not only accelerate individuals’ development such as overcoming our own defects and improving the efficiency of our life but also can help us earn other people’s appreciations and respects.

(3) What’s more, through continuously promoting the social

productivity, gradually enriching human material and spiritual wealth,

A eventually brings economic prosperity and social harmony.

(4) No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below.

(5)A person who is will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. (6)Only by being modest can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.

第三段:

(1)From what have been discussed above, it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work.

(2) When we are benefiting from A , we shall also do our utmost to maintain its vitality to ensure ourselves a brighter future.

(3)On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people ’s opinions and benefits.

(4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.

(5) However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor.

文章以团队精神为例子

(1)The most unforgettable and interesting image that arises in my eyes is that .(2) what captures my eyes is

that .(3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

(1)As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact profoundly indicates that team work is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to our individual, family and social survival and prosperity.

(2)Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success.

(3)If we do not cooperate sincerely, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future.

4) As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than team work to overcome our defects and improve our efficiency.

(5)Secondly, no issue is as crucial and essential as team work to make our life more colorful and energetic.

(6)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below.

(7)A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines such as designing a model, assembling the accessories and promoting the sales will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things.

(8)Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.

(1)From what have been discussed above, it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work.

(2)It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient.

(3)On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people ’s opinions and benefits.

(4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.

(5) However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor.

(6)Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.

重点预测的文章:

对别人真诚,无私奉献

Genuineness and devotion are rewarding

(1) The most unforgettable and interesting image that arises in my eyes is that a young man with a suitcase under his arm is stretches his hand to greet himself reflected in the mirror. (2) what captures my eyes is that his image in the mirror is smiling at him sincerely. (3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

(1) As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact profoundly indicates that selfless devotion is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to our individual, family and social survival and prosperity. (2)Undoubtedly, it is sincerity that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success.

(3)If we do not devote sincerely, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future.

(4)As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than devotion to earn others’ respects.

(5)Secondly, no issue is as crucial and essential as devotion to make our life more colorful and energetic.

(6)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below.

(7) Many capable people who always care about his way of thinking will be living a selfish and lonely life.

(8) Only by being genuine to others can they win other people’s trust and can they reward the support, sympathy .

(1)From what have been discussed above, it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to cooperate with others with great zeal It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make it work.

(2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to imagine everyone to be our friends not enemies.

(3) On the other hand, it is demanding for us to examine our behaviors to make sure they will not hurt others.

(4) However, it is easier said than done.

(5)Practice is the most important factor.

(6)Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.

(1)The most unforgettable and interesting image that arises in my eyes is that .(2) what captures my eyes is

that . (3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

(1)As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact profoundly indicates that challenging ourselves is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. (2)Undoubtedly, it is challenging ourselves that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. (3)If we do not challenge ourselves sincerely, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future.

(4)As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than challenging ourselves to overcome our defects and improve our efficiency.

(5)Secondly, no issue is as crucial and essential as team work to make our life more colorful and energetic.

(6)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below.

(7)A person who is lazy will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things.

(8)Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.

(1)From what have been discussed above, it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to challenge ourselves.

(2)It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures should be taken to make your team work more efficient.

(3)On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people ’s opinions and benefits.

(4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.

(5) However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor.

(6)Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.

Directions:

Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you

should

1) describe the drawing,

2) interpret its meaning, and

3) point out its implications in our life.

You should write about 160—200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20

points)

A 就是主题词

第一段:

(1) Generally speaking, the illustration above is far from complicated

and the most unforgettable feature that arises in my eyes is that , which contributes tremendously to individual and national survival and prosperity.

(2) Increasingly , more argumentations about A can be found in TV

programs, newspapers, university classes and many aspects of our everyday life.

(3) There is no denying that such an image draws attention to the fact that people tend to be puzzled by various challenges and competition and are more likely to be deterred by present difficulties. If one was to , one could make wise, long-term decisions, as well as have a clearer sense of how to solve any given problem.

第二段:

(1) although there is no consensus among people as to the view about A, its status as the focus of public concern mainly results from its profound influence on individuals, collective and even the whole world.

(2) To begin with, with its seemingly magic power, A can not only accelerate individuals’ development, but serve as an efficient instrument for individuals to change the world.

(3) Those equipped with A are always admired and respected, because A may endow them with more competence, chances, self-confidence to overcome difficulties and handle problems.

(4) The importance of is of practical significance

to university students especially.

(5) When students face difficult decisions such as , they should consider in broad terms order to solve the problem as soon as possible.

(6) Last but not the least, the whole society also thrives. Through

continuously promoting the social productivity, increasingly improving the productive relationship, and gradually enriching human material and

spiritual wealth, A eventually brings economic prosperity and social

harmony.

第三段:

(1) In short, where there is better A , there are more hope, vitality and

development.

(2) In doing things whether great or small,there are more or less

difficulties ,it is much better for one to involve into A.

(3)On the one hand, we should be sensible to launch a publicizing educational campaign to make A more efficient by

(4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people and share the benefits of A with other people

(5)When we are benefiting from A , we shall also do our utmost to maintain its vitality to ensure ourselves a brighter future.

短文写作点题

Unit 1

. 写作题目与要求

Study the following set of drawings carefully and write an essay in which you should

1) describe the set of drawings,

2) analyze the purpose of the painter and

3) state your position.

You should write about 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20points )

参考范文:

As is vividly revealed in the series of drawings above, a man has to go to four hospitals to confirm his health condition due to the irresponsibility of medical units, which seems to be humorous and funny but is most thought-provoking on second thoughts.

The aim of the painter of the drawings can be briefed as follows. To begin with, the irresponsibility in some working units can no longer be ignored by us. Accidents of various kinds resulting from irresponsibility happen more frequently than ever before. Coal mine accidents and medical accidents reported by the media are the cases in point. In the international communication, our irresponsibility has spoiled the credibility and image of our country. Responsibility does means a lot to us. What’s more, the irresponsibility of some working units should be regarded as social malignant tumor. At present the grim status contradicts our efforts to build up a harmonious society. The irresponsibility spells

us heavy physical and psychological burden. And most often, the people who are frequently mistreated with irresponsibility will develop deep hatred for our society. In one word, the irresponsibility must be removed because it hinders the progress of our society.

In my view, concrete and effective measures must be taken to get rid of the phenomenon of irresponsibility. On the one hand, laws and

regulations must be established to stop the existing irresponsibility. On the other hand, the importance of responsibility should be widely spread to make every citizen honor the sense of responsibility. Only in this way can we live in a safe and harmonious society. (262 words)

Unit 2

Directions:

Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should

1. describe the drawing,

2. interpret its meaning, and

3. suggest counter-measures.

You should write about 160~200 words neatly ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

参考范文 (199 words)

As is vividly portrayed in the drawing above, a student is trying his best to reach the full score of important subjects including English, maths, physics, and Chinese while neglecting the more important aspects such as psychological quality and moral standards. This drawing mirrors a common social phenomenon, which has aroused our social concern and is in fact thought-provoking.

The implied meaning of the drawing above can be illustrated as follows. To begin with, academic achievements are not all that a student needs. In order to survive in our society, students must be first of all trained to possess fine psychological quality. Otherwise, we can not bravely face ups and downs in our life, work, and study. What’s more, high moral standards are also a must for every student. Without high moral standards, students will lose the orientation of learning. In sum, psychological quality and moral standards should be taken into account in terms of students ’ education.

Counter-measures must be taken to rectify the trend of

overemphasizing main academic subjects and neglecting psychological quality. We must take a right attitude toward students ’ development. Our government must intervene in students’ education to ensure a right and healthy environment of development.

参考译文

上面的漫画刻画了这样一个情景:一个学生在尽力学习英语,数学,物理,和语文,争取每门功课考满分,可是他忽视了更重要的方面如心理素质和品德。这反映了我们一个常见的社会现象,发人深省。

漫 画隐含了这样的道理。首先,学生需要的不仅仅是学业的进步。要想在社会上生存,学生们首先需要接受良好的心理素质训练。否则我们没有办法勇敢面对生活工作 和学习中的种种困难。良好的品德对每一个学生也很重要。没有它,学生们在学习的过程中就会迷失方向。总之,学生教育一定要包括心理素质和品德培养。

我们要采取应对措施来纠正这种只重视重要学科而忽视心理素质的潮流。对学生的发展要采取正确的态度。政府也要参与学生教育以确保健康的发展环境。 Unit 3

Directions:

Study the following drawing carefully and write essay to

1. describe the drawing,

2. interpret its meaning, and

3. suggest counter-measures.

You should write about 160~200 words neatly ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

参考范文 (199 words)

As is vividly portrayed in the drawing above, a huge and modern high-rise building is contesting with a small and ancient pavilion, which mirrors a common social phenomenon that our ancient and traditional architectures are gradually replaced with high-rise architectures made of steel and cement.

The implied meaning of the drawing above can be illustrated as follows. To begin with, the protection of ancient and traditional architectures should not be neglected in the development of our modern society. In the development of a society, the construction of high-rise buildings are necessary, but only rational construction of new buildings and rational protection of ancient and traditional architectures can make a city preserve its vitality. In one word, a city which is of both unique traditional characteristics and modern features can finally survive and be attractive in the world. What’s more, to protect the ancient and traditional architectures means that we show respect to our culture and history.

Counter-measures must be taken immediately to curb the destruction of valuable ancient and traditional architectures. Most importantly, relevant laws and regulations must be established to protect the valuable

architectures. Besides, we must make all efforts to popularize the importance of the protection work. 。

参考译文

漫画中现代化的高楼正在和底矮的古代建筑竞争。这反映了这样一个社会现象,古代的,传统的建筑正在被现代化的钢筋水泥大厦取代。

图 画的寓意如下。首先在现代化建设过程中,保护古建筑不可忽视。在社会发展的过程中建设高楼是必需的,但是合理的建设和合理的保护才可以使得我们的城市更加 具有活力。总之,只有结合了独特的传统特点和现代特征的城市才有吸引力。同时保护传统建筑也意味着我们对自己文化和历史的尊重。

我们应该采取措施阻止对传统建筑的破坏。也要通过相关法规来保护传统建筑。同时我们也要大力宣传这种保护工作的重要性。

Unit 4

Directions:

Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay to

1. describe the drawing,

2. deduce the purpose of the painter of the drawing, and

3. suggest counter-measures.

You should write about 160~200 words neatly ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

参考范文 (193 words)

As is vividly betrayed in the drawing above, a milk salesman is promoting a bottle of milk, which is marked with “next year” as its production date. The drawing mirrors a common social phenomenon and is really thought-provoking.

The aim of the painter of the drawing is to reveal the fact of credibility crisis which is getting increasingly serious in our modern society. Credibility crisis should be the uppermost in our thoughts. Otherwise, our society is bound to deteriorate. Living in our society, people will suffer instead of enjoying the civilization and happiness of modern society because the society is filled with dishonesty and deception. Fuyang milk powder is a case in point. The fake milk powder killed many innocent babies, which has cast doubt on the credibility of human beings. It is not hard to spot cases of such kind in the field of education, medicine, accounting, entertainment, etc.

Counter-measures to deal with credibility crisis should be taken so as to return people a safe place to live in and to ensure people a healthy

society. Most importantly, laws must be established to severely punish those who misbehave in terms of credibility.

参考译文

上面漫画生动刻画了这样一个情景,一个牛奶销售员在卖牛奶,可是牛奶的生产日期却是明年。漫画反映了一个发人深省的社会现象。

漫 画作者揭示了我们现代社会中日益严重的信用危机问题。信用应该在我们思维中占有重要位置,否则我们的社会将会倒退。如果我们的社会充满着虚伪和欺诈我们就 无法享受现代文明。富阳奶粉事件就是一个例子。这种加奶粉使得很多无辜婴儿失去生命,使人怀疑我们社会的诚信问题。在教育,医疗,财务,娱乐等方面也不乏 这样的例子。

我们一定要采取措施挽救诚信,使人们的生活安全,还我们一个健康的社会。更重要的是我们要通过法律严厉惩罚那些不守信用的人。

Unit 5

Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should

1. describe the picture,

2. interpret its meaning, and

3. state your plan to do so.

You should write about 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points)

参考范文 (199 words)

The picture shows that an adult hand holding a gold coin between his thumb and index finger is going to drop it into a piggy bank. On the piggy bank two academic caps are represented. The picture is simple and its meaning is clear: young adults should manage to finance themselves for their higher education.

The market economy and competitive society prompt most young people to drive themselves vigorously studying for higher academic degrees, and some of them are seeking opportunities to study abroad. However, great expense hampers their desire for higher studies. In overcoming the financial obstacle, self-reliance is most advisable while dependence on parents or relatives is shameful.

As an adult student, I am planning to pursue graduate studies by work-study strategy. First, I shall go through my first two year courses by both winning scholarships and taking part time jobs. Then, I will interrupt my regular course to work for a certain organization or company for one or two years. When I resume my graduate studies a year or two later, I shall finish my program with a both creative and practical thesis.

Furthermore, I intend to study for a Doctor’s degree in the same way. 应用文写作点题

推荐信

Directions :

You are a student of computer science at a university in China and a friend of yours, Ren Ren, is applying to study in an American university. Write a letter of reference that briefly states the following:

1. Your willingness to write the letter.

2. Your perception of the student’s personality and academic capability.

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)

参考范文 (108 words)

Dear Sir or Madam,

I take great pleasure in recommending Miss Ren Ren, one of my friends, for admission into your distinguished graduate program.

Miss Ren was admitted in 2002 into our program of computer science for her undergraduate studies. She was admitted with his nearly impeccable academic performance through the years of his elementary and secondary school.

I was very impressed by her self-study capability. She also exhibited a keenly whetted mind during class discussions. She also distinguished herself for her ambitions and persistence

I am sure that Miss Ren will be an outstanding student in your program. I am recommending her without any reservation.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

建议信

Directions :

You will graduate from university in the summer of 2006 and have

experienced ups and downs over the past four years. Write a letter to the freshmen to

1. state how to adapt oneself to campus life, and

2. stress the importance of English learning.

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)

参考范文 (119 words)

Dear Freshmen,

I am a senior in the Computer Science Department of Tsinghua

University. I’d like to say a few words to you, which I hope would be helpful to you.

To begin with, the change of ideas is important for freshmen to adapt themselves to campus life. In my view, we had better always bear in mind the idea of independence.

What’s more, English learning is a must. Without CET 4 certificate, we can not get our degree when we graduate from university. When we hunt for job, English level is a deciding factor. Therefore, I do hope that all of you will have a good understanding of the necessity of learning English well.

Sincerely Yours,

Li Ming

投诉信

范文:

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next term. I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.

The reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate's inconsiderate behavior. His friends constantly visit him and he regularly holds noisy parties. In addition, he sometimes borrows my things without asking me. Under these circumstances, I find it difficult to concentrate on my studies, and I am falling behind on my assignments.

I am sure you will agree that the solution is for me to move into a room of my own, where I will be free from such distractions. I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

求职信

Directions :

You will graduate from university and are hunting for a job. After reading a job ads, write a letter to the Personnel Resources Department to

1. state your reason to write the application,

2. describe your relevant education background,

3. introduce your English level, and

4. state your way of contact.

You should write about 100 words on ANSER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)

参考范文 (118 words)

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am responding to your ad in the June 20th, 2006, issue of the Sunday Talent Journal for the position of production coordinator. I feel that my background in electronics and manufacturing will fit in well.

I will graduate from the Beijing Science & Technology University in June with a Bachelor of Science degree in Manufacturing Engineering. I have had extensive training on computers while at school. In my Production and Inventory class, I have learned about computerized production and material scheduling in a job shop environment.

I am looking forward to hearing from you. I can be reached at my resume address or by phoning (010) 23577980 after 4 p. m.

Sincerely Yours, Li Ming

感谢信

Directions :

You have been ill and hospitalized for two weeks. Your teachers and classmates went to see you. Write a letter to them to

1. thank them for their coming to see you,

2. describe your feeling, and

3. state your present condition.

You should write about 100 words on ANSER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)

参考范文 (114 words)

Dear Teachers and Classmates,

First of all, please allow me to say ‘Thank you’ to all of you. It is very kind of you to spare your valuable time during the period of final examinations and come to see me.

Your visit has given me much confidence and power to overcome the illness. When I first came to the hospital, I really felt lonely and did not have enough courage and confidence to overcome the illness.

These days, my condition has

been obviously improved due to the careful treatment offered by doctors

and nurses. I hope that I can see you earlier.

Again, special thanks go to all of you.

Sincerely Yours,

Li Ming

祝贺信

Directions :

One of your middle school classmates failed in CET 4 several times, but

recently he has passed the exam. Write a letter to him to

1. congratulate him on his success, and

2. express your wish to exchange views on language learning.

You should write about 100 words on ANSER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own

name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need

to write the address. (10 points)

参考范文 (116 words)

Dear Huang Wei,

First of all, please allow me to express my sincere congratulation

on your passing CET 4. The success is of great importance to you since

without the Certificate you can not get degree when you graduate from

university. Of course, the success can be attributed to your painstaking

efforts and your spirit ‘Never say die’.

I would like to continue our exchanges on English learning. Because

of China’s entry to WTO and Opening-up and Reform English will become

more and more important to Chinese, especially to our modern university

students. I dream of being able to communicate effectively with foreigners

one day in the future.

Good Luck to you!

Sincerely Yours,

Li Ming

邀请信

Directions :

The Spring Festival is coming shortly. You intend to invite your foreign

friend to come to China and spend the traditional Chinese Festival

together. Write a letter to him/her to

1. express your warm invitation to him/her,

2. introduce the Spring Festival, and

3. mention the places you will accompany him/her to visit.

You should write about 100 words on ANSER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)

参考范文 (118 words)

Dear Beckham,

First of all, please allow me to express my heartfelt invitation to you. Since the Spring Festival is coming shortly, I sincerely invite you to come to China and spend the holiday with me.

Spring Festival is of much importance to Chinese people. It has a long history and Chinese have attached much importance to the holiday. To be exact, the Spring Festival has been the most significant holiday. The Spring Festival is to Chinese what Christmas is to the Westerners. If you come, I am going to accompany you to fairgrounds, where you can have a close look at some of the Chinese traditions.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely Yours, Li Ming

询问信

Directions :

You are applying for a MA/MS degree and are in need of some contact with your would-be tutor. Write a letter to your tutor to:

1. make a brief self-introduction

2. state the reasons for the application for your major

3. outline your plan after graduation

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)

参考范文 (119 words)

Dear Prof. Li,

I am a senior in the Computer Science Department of Tsinghua University. I am applying for an MS degree under your guidance so that I write to you today for a further contact.

The reason for my application for the major — utilization of computer in farming — can be illustrated as follows. I am from the West. I was born and brought up in the countryside so that I intend to learn what can be used in the countryside. After graduation, I want to make use of what I learn to make contribution to the development of my hometown, which is still one of the ten counties in poverty. Best wishes to you!

Sincerely Yours, Li Ming

申请信

Directions:

You are a student of Huabei University,. Write an application to get a scholarship for your graduate study in another university in America. You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address.

参考范文 (119 words)

Dear Sir,

I am writing to apply for admission to your university to pursue my M.S. degree. I have read the annual prospectus issued by your university and found that it has the best graduate program of chemistry.

I graduated from Huabei

University, majoring in Chemistry and holding a B. S. degree. At

university, I took many fundamental courses in Chemistry and my English is excellent as I had served as the head of English Association for two years. Since then I have been teaching Chemistry in Beijing Normal University.

Two of my former professors have written letters of recommendation for me, as enclosed with this letter.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

介绍信 Directions:

Suppose that your friend is going to stay at a big city. Write a letter in about 100 words to introduce her to a friend there. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.

参考范文 (104 words)

Dear Linda,

I want to introduce to you the bearer of this letter, Helen Herbert, who is a diligent and intelligent scholar just like you. She will attend

an international conference on economics from August 27 through August 30 at the Shangri-La Hotel of your city.

She will have no problem with her accommodation. I am sure a talk will benefit both of you a lot. I have given your mobile phone number to her, and I hope it will not cause any inconvenience for you.

Thank you for your kindness and consideration.

Best wishes to you and your family.

Sincerely

yours,

Li

Ming

李明

表扬信

Directions :

You were hospitalized on your business trip to Beijing last month. You recovered quickly after careful treatment. Write a letter of commendation to the hospital to show your appreciation of their help during that period. You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address.

参考范文 (120 words)

Dear Sir:

My name is Li Ming. Last month I was on a business trip from Washington to Beijing. Unfortunately I got a bad flu and a high fever. I was sent to your hospital. I was worried about my business and my health. However, with the doctor’s careful treatments, I recovered only in 4 days. I was able to finish my business on time finally. I was deeply impressed by the kind doctors and nurses, the pleasant and comfortable environment, and considerate services. I have no relatives and friends in Beijing, but I felt at home in your hospital. I will always remember all those warmhearted persons and your hospital.

Best wishes to you all!

Faithfully yours,

Li Ming

其他预测

1.请求信

请 求信对收信人提出请求,希望对方满足该请求。请求信和询问信有一点相似,就是两者都要向对方提出某种要求请对方给予答复。而两者的不同则在于询问信的核心 是要询问信息,重点要写清楚询问的内容,收信人要提供信息则大多是自身职责所在,应当为咨询者提供所需的信息;请求信的核心却是请求他人做某事的原因,重 点是要写清楚为什么要请求他人做某事,大多数情况下写信人是无中生有,为收信人制造一些麻烦。

写作策略:

首段:说明写作意图,要提出什么样的请求。请求信的首段既要礼貌,又要规范。

主体段落:说明请求的原因,应具体展开。请求信的主体段落应尽可能客观公允,合乎情理。

请求信首段常用句式和套语

I am writing to formally request to„

I would very much like to ask for your permissio9n with this letter so as to allow me„

I am writing to seek for your assistance in„

Would you be kind enough to„?

请求信结尾段常用句式和套话

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

I do appreciate the favorable consideration you have shown to me. I would like to thank you for your generous help in this matter. I shall remain grateful to you for the great help„

★例:

Directions:

You find that your study load is too heavy. Write a letter to your college teacher:

1) explaining why you need to withdraw from two courses

2) asking if it is possible to obtain a refund and

3) apologizing for any problems caused by your decision.

You should write with no less than 100 words on Answer Sheet 2. Do not sign your own

name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead. You do not need to write the address.

范文:

Dear Professor James,

I am writing to request to withdraw from two courses: Introduction to Elementary Education (EDU 602) and Teaching Methods (EDU 619).

The reason for reducing my course load is that I am finding it difficult to manage six courses. At the beginning of the term, I was optimistic about juggling my full-time studies and my part-time job (20 hours/week). I really must work part time, so I have no choice but to decrease my course load.

I would also like to request a tuition refund. I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused by this change in plans. This decision was not taken lightly.

Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me at 277-9144. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

2. 建议信

建议信开头段常用句式和套话

I am writing in reply to„

I would like to suggest that„

I am writing with my suggestion proposal about„

I am writing to express my views concerning„

You have asked me for my advice with regard to „and I will try to make some conducive suggestions.

表达建议常用句式和套话

I feel that it would be beneficial if„

I would like to suggest that„

I would recommend that„

If I were you, I would„

You may consider doing„

It would seem to me that you could„

As you may agree that„

建议信结尾常用句式和套话

I hope you will find these suggestions/proposals/recommendations helpful/practical/ useful.

I trust you will take my suggestion into account.

I would be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. I would be ready to discuss this matter to further details. ★例:

Directions :

You have a friend who is about to enter university, and he wants you to advise him on which subject to specialize in--history, in which he is very interested, or computer science, which offers better job prospects. Write a letter:

1) explaining what he could do,

2) why he could do this, and

3) wishing him luck with his studies.

You should write with no less than 100 words on Answer Sheet 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead. You do not need to write the address.

范文:

Dear John,