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跟着这个系列走,走完了,你就会写作文了|考研英语图画作文系列分享一(聚沙成塔129) 考研英语一大作文考图画作文已经有历史了。从这一期开始,考研写作部分就进行一个系列分享,从第一段到最后一段,怎么写作文说的清清楚楚。跟着这个系列走,走完了,你就会写作文了。

第一段图画描述往往是阅卷人重点评阅的地方,而且这里常常是同学们容易出问题的地方。图画中常有的内容有:人物(包括动作表情)或者事物以及文字。今天先教大家如何描述人物以及表

情。

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经典例证

在描述图画之前,一般先有这么一个说法:

As is shown/illustrated/depicted/described/revealed in the

picture/cartoon/drawing/portrayal,

大多数人都会在shown/illustrated/depicted/described/revealed前面加一些修饰词,大家自己决定。相反,我觉得加上有点俗,因为是个人都这么写。

当然,上面的内容,你还可以写:

The picture/cartoon/drawing/portrayal presents a scene of +短语/ that +句子 接下来就可以描述人物了,如果这个人有一个动作,直接用现在进行时态表达动作。如果有两个动作,可以选择一个动作作为谓语,另个动作用非谓语动词doing 的形式来表示: sb is doing sth, doing sth

如果,人物还有表情,就在后面加上表情;其实,及时没有特别的表情,大家也可以根据图画的总体内容,描述一个表情,这样显得图画描述更加生动形象,具体可以这样来表达: sb is doing sth, doing sth, +表示“表情的形容词”

或者

sb is doing sth, doing sth, looking +表示“表情的形容词”

跟“政&府”举措有关的的词汇,考研写作中可能会用到的有:government=authorities concerned, issue related laws and regulations, enhance supervision, punishthose who are against laws\lawbreaking people, encourage sb to do sth, set upsound

social security system\sound legal system, remedy policy bug, ensure theinterests of citizens, increase financial input

考研英语图画作文系列分享二|第一段的第二句和第三句写法(聚沙成塔130) 【写作素材积累】

第一段第二三句写作方法

what impresses me most is that+简单句(主语从句)

这里的impress 意思是“让人印象深刻的”,可以用一些次回来替换,比如:

attracts/shocks/surprises/amuses,这里的简单句就是用来描述主体外事物的位置。 或者还可以这样写:

what is extremelyinteresting is that …(主语表语从句)

这是2011年英语一大作文,描述了两个人在坐着船游玩,并且在往湖里面扔垃圾。同时湖面上飘着各种各样的东西。

结合上一期给大家教的第一句写法,这两句写出来之后就是这样的:

As is vividly depicted in the drawing, two turists on the boat, pleased and satisfied, are enjoying their sight-seeing time, throwing trash into the lake. What impresses most is that there are countless packages on the river.

图画中往往会出现文字,对于文字的处理方法是:如没有把握写正确,最好别写了,扣分不严重。但是如果有把握写,可以有下面两种方式:

第一,如果很清楚文字怎么翻译成英文,这样写:The caption in this picture reads,“... ”双引号中的省略号部分就是对文字的直接翻译。

第二,如果不会直接翻译文字,或者直接翻译文字太复杂,可以写出文字的大意或者文字给我们暗示出的信息就可以了,不用原模原样的写出来,这是可以这样写:The caption

indicates/suggests/informs us that"..."

比如:刚才上面这幅图的配文“旅程之余”就可以写成这样:

The caption under the picure goes reads: "along with the sight seeing"

跟“企业”举措有关的的词汇,考研写作中可能会用到的有:

beself-disciplined, foster sense of social responsibility, think from

consumers’perspective, possess conscience and morality, make profits by hook or crook, be profit-oriented, produce copycat products\fake and inferior

products,spoil\ensure the interest of consumers, be devoid of innovation

andoriginality, pursue long-term profits instead of temporary one, bolster theimage of corporations\enterprises, enhance its core competitiveness

考研英语图画作文系列分享三|第一段图中文字的处理方法(送大彩蛋-聚沙成塔130)

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第一段第二三句写作方法

第一段基本上写三到四句话就可以了,第一句总体描述图画,或者进行图画主体进行描述,第二句和第三句进行细节描述或者描述非主体内容。最后一句进行点题。

图中文字的写法:

图画中的文字起到图画说明以及表明寓意的作用,大家写作的时候,如果说有把握把图中文字完全转化成英语,那么建议大家可以这样写:

The caption in this picture reads,"..."

The picture captions"..."

The caption says"..." 把文字的内容翻译成英语,直接放在省略号的地方就可以了。

但是,如果图中文字特别多,或者翻译不了,那么大家可以用下列的表达方式把文字的内容进行总结,只写出寓意就可以了: We are informed by the caption in the picture that...

The caption indicates that...

总结文字寓意或者内容,放在省略号之后就可以了。 图画底下配文:你一条腿,我一条腿;你我一起,走南闯北。结合图片的内容,我们清楚,图画想表达一个主体,即:合作。因此,我们就可以把配文表达成:合作很重要就可以了。不用一句一句话去翻译了。所以,写出来可以是这样的:

We are informed by the caption in the picture that we should put high value on cooperation.

明天给大家讲如何写首段的最后一句话,即点题。

跟“社会”热点有关的的词汇,考研写作中可能会用到的有:job-hopping 跳槽;worship of money 拜金;NEET group啃老族;cellphone obsession沉迷手机;fake products假冒产品;private cars私家车;electronic book电子书;empty nester空巢老人;Chinese fever汉语热

考研英语图画作文系列分享四|第一段点题:妈妈再也不用担心你跑题(聚沙成塔135)

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【写作素材积累】

第一段第二三句写作方法

今天给大家讲解第一段最后一句话,如何点题。你不用再担心跑题

文章的第一段一般写三到四句话,前面几句描述图画;最后一句点题,也就是表明文章的主题。一些同学的作文因为跑题而得不上分数,很可惜。其实,历年考研英语一大作文的主题是有规律的,具体做法是:

根据普世价值观,观察图画,分析总结出图画需要表达的主题词。然后,文章的中心就可以定为下列情况之一:主题词重要;主题词有害;主题词有争议。

先写主题句引导句部分:

The drawer aims to reveal that+主题句(图画想揭示:)

或者

The picture informs us that+主题句(图画表明:)

或者

The symbolic meaning/profound implication is as deep as ocean.(图画的象征意义/含义很深奥。)注:这个说法像一贴狗皮膏药,什么主题都可以用,直接抄上去就可以了。

接下来,我们看主题句怎么表述:

第一,主题词重要。

The symbolic implication of this picture is apparent that _主题词_plays an

irreplaceable role in our life.(图画的寓意很明显,主题词在我们生活中扮演者不可替代的作用。)

或者

We should put high value on/attach importance to+主题词(我们应该重视主题词) 第二,主题词有害。

sb_are devoid of+主题词(某人缺失了+主题词)

或者

主题词 is detrimental for both individual and social purpose.(主题词对于个人和社会都是有害的。)

第三,主题词有争议。

The implication of the picture, as far as I’m concerned/as far as Iknow/to my point of view/I guess/to my way of thinking, is that 主题词 is actually both blessed and cursed/good andbad/beneficial and detrimental.(我认为,图画的寓意是:主题词既有好处,也有坏处)

举例:

我们可以看出,这幅图表达了一个意思就是:不同的人对同一事物的看法不一样,我们应该乐观面对生活。

这样一来,最后一句点题的话就可以这样写了:

The symbolic implication of this picture is apparent that optimism plays an

irreplaceable role in our life.(图画的寓意很明显,乐观净胜在我们生活中扮演者不可替代的作用。)

跟“运气&生活”有关的的名言,考研写作中可能会用到的有:

Time and tide wait for no man.时光如梭,岁月如流,时不我待。

Fortune never helps the man whose courage fails.运气不会青睐没有勇气的人。 Fortune knocks at least once at every man's gate.人一生总总有机会降临。

Failure is the foundation of success; success is the lurking place of failure.祸兮福所倚,福兮祸所伏。

考研英语图画作文系列分享五||第一段写作方法总结(干货文-聚沙成塔137) 1 【写作素材积累】 第一段写作方法总结

第一段的很重要,因为这是阅卷人拿到试卷之后要重点看的地方,因为阅卷人明白,这可能是唯一能看到考生自己写的句子的地方。今天我们带大家总结前面四天给大家讲解的第一段写作方法,并且给出描述图画的升级版。 第一句写法:

在描述图画之前,一般先有这么一个说法:

As is shown/illustrated/depicted/described/revealed in the

picture/cartoon/drawing/portrayal,

大多数人都会在shown/illustrated/depicted/described/revealed前面加一些修饰词,大家自己决定。相反,我觉得加上有点俗,因为是个人都这么写。

当然,上面的内容,你还可以写:

The picture/cartoon/drawing/portrayal presents a scene of +短语/ that +句子 接下来就可以描述人物了,如果这个人有一个动作,直接用现在进行时态表达动作。如果有两个动作,可以选择一个动作作为谓语,另个动作用非谓语动词doing 的形式来表示: sb is doing sth, doing sth

如果,人物还有表情,就在后面加上表情;其实,及时没有特别的表情,大家也可以根据图画的总体内容,描述一个表情,这样显得图画描述更加生动形象,具体可以这样来表达: sb is doing sth, doing sth, +表示“表情的形容词”

或者

sb is doing sth, doing sth, looking +表示“表情的形容词” what impresses me most is that+简单句(主语从句)

这里的impress 意思是“让人印象深刻的”,可以用一些次回来替换,比如:

attracts/shocks/surprises/amuses,这里的简单句就是用来描述主体外事物的位置。 或者还可以这样写:

what is extremelyinteresting is that …(主语表语从句)

举个例子:

这是2011年英语一大作文,描述了两个人在坐着船游玩,并且在往湖里面扔垃圾。同时湖面上飘着各种各样的东西。 结合上一期给大家教的第一句写法,这两句写出来之后就是这样的:

As is vividly depicted in the drawing, two turists on the boat, pleased and satisfied, are enjoying their sight-seeing time, throwing trash into the lake. What impresses most is that there are countless packages on the river.

图画中往往会出现文字,对于文字的处理方法是:如没有把握写正确,最好别写了,扣分不严重。但是如果有把握写,可以有下面两种方式:

第一,如果很清楚文字怎么翻译成英文,这样写:The caption in this picture reads,“... ”双引号中的省略号部分就是对文字的直接翻译。

第二,如果不会直接翻译文字,或者直接翻译文字太复杂,可以写出文字的大意或者文字给我们暗示出的信息就可以了,不用原模原样的写出来,这是可以这样写:The caption

indicates/suggests/informs us that"..."

比如:刚才上面这幅图的配文“旅程之余”就可以写成这样: The caption under the picure goes reads: "along with the sight seeing"

注意,第一和第二句话还可以合在一起,用一句话来表述,具体的做法是:

表位置的介词短语+副词+动作+动作主体,+非谓语动词短语修饰动作主体或者前面的倒装句,+非限定性定语从句修饰非谓语动词部分的内容。

我们可以这样来描述:

On the boat happily sits two young man, enjoying their sight-seeing and discarding garbage into the lake, where many packages float on the surface. 第三句话写法:(图中文字的写法)

图画中的文字起到图画说明以及表明寓意的作用,大家写作的时候,如果说有把握把图中文字完全转化成英语,那么建议大家可以这样写:

The caption in this picture reads,"..."

The picture captions"..."

The caption says"..."

把文字的内容翻译成英语,直接放在省略号的地方就可以了。

但是,如果图中文字特别多,或者翻译不了,那么大家可以用下列的表达方式把文字的内容进行总结,只写出寓意就可以了:

We are informed by the caption in the picture that...

The caption indicates that...

总结文字寓意或者内容,放在省略号之后就可以了。

举个例子:

图画底下配文:你一条腿,我一条腿;你我一起,走南闯北。结合图片的内容,我们清楚,图画想表达一个主体,即:合作。因此,我们就可以把配文表达成:合作很重要就可以了。不用一句一句话去翻译了。所以,写出来可以是这样的:

We are informed by the caption in the picture that we should put high value on cooperation.

第四句话写法:

文章的第一段一般写三到四句话,前面几句描述图画;最后一句点题,也就是表明文章的主题。一些同学的作文因为跑题而得不上分数,很可惜。其实,历年考研英语一大作文的主题是有规律的,具体做法是:

根据普世价值观,观察图画,分析总结出图画需要表达的主题词。然后,文章的中心就可以定为下列情况之一:主题词重要;主题词有害;主题词有争议。

先写主题句引导句部分:

The drawer aims to reveal that+主题句(图画想揭示:)

或者

The picture informs us that+主题句(图画表明:)

或者

The symbolic meaning/profound implication is as deep as ocean.(图画的象征意义/含义很深奥。)注:这个说法像一贴狗皮膏药,什么主题都可以用,直接抄上去就可以了。 接下来,我们看主题句怎么表述:

第一,主题词重要。

The symbolic implication of this picture is apparent that _主题词_plays an

irreplaceable role in our life.(图画的寓意很明显,主题词在我们生活中扮演者不可替代的作用。)

或者

We should put high value on/attach importance to+主题词(我们应该重视主题词)

第二,主题词有害。

sb_are devoid of+主题词(某人缺失了+主题词)

或者

主题词 is detrimental for both individual and social purpose.(主题词对于个人和社会都是有害的。)

第三,主题词有争议。

The implication of the picture, as far as I’m concerned/as far as Iknow/to my point of view/I guess/to my way of thinking, is that 主题词 is actually both blessed and cursed/good andbad/beneficial and detrimental.(我认为,图画的寓意是:主题词既有好处,也有坏处)

举例:

图画底下配文:你一条腿,我一条腿;你我一起,走南闯北。结合图片的内容,我们清楚,图画想表达一个主体,即:合作。因此,我们就可以把配文表达成:合作很重要就可以了。不用一句一句话去翻译了。所以,写出来可以是这样的:

We are informed by the caption in the picture that we should put high value on cooperation.

第四句话写法:

文章的第一段一般写三到四句话,前面几句描述图画;最后一句点题,也就是表明文章的主题。一些同学的作文因为跑题而得不上分数,很可惜。其实,历年考研英语一大作文的主题是有规律的,具体做法是:

根据普世价值观,观察图画,分析总结出图画需要表达的主题词。然后,文章的中心就可以定为下列情况之一:主题词重要;主题词有害;主题词有争议。

先写主题句引导句部分:

The drawer aims to reveal that+主题句(图画想揭示:)

或者

The picture informs us that+主题句(图画表明:)

或者

The symbolic meaning/profound implication is as deep as ocean.(图画的象征意义/含义很深奥。)注:这个说法像一贴狗皮膏药,什么主题都可以用,直接抄上去就可以了。

接下来,我们看主题句怎么表述:

第一,主题词重要。

The symbolic implication of this picture is apparent that _主题词_plays an

irreplaceable role in our life.(图画的寓意很明显,主题词在我们生活中扮演者不可替代的作用。)

或者

We should put high value on/attach importance to+主题词(我们应该重视主题词)

第二,主题词有害。

sb_are devoid of+主题词(某人缺失了+主题词)

或者

主题词 is detrimental for both individual and social purpose.(主题词对于个人和社会都是有害的。)

第三,主题词有争议。

The implication of the picture, as far as I’m concerned/as far as Iknow/to my point of view/I guess/to my way of thinking, is that 主题词 is actually both blessed and cursed/good andbad/beneficial and detrimental.(我认为,图画的寓意是:主题词既有好处,也有坏处)

举例:

我们可以看出,这幅图表达了一个意思就是:不同的人对同一事物的看法不一样,我们应该乐观面对生活。

这样一来,最后一句点题的话就可以这样写了:

The symbolic implication of this picture is apparent that optimism plays an

irreplaceable role in our life.(图画的寓意很明显,乐观净胜在我们生活中扮演者不可替代的作用。)

第一段就这么多内容,大家一定要多多联系。也可以自己总结一些功能性句型,总之多积累。 跟“困难&挫折”有关的的名言,考研写作中可能会用到的有:

The first step is the hardest. 万事开头难。

Every cloud has a silver linging. 黑暗中总有一丝光明。

Misfortunes tell us what fortune is.不幸教我们什么叫幸运。

Mistakes are an essential part of education.犯错是一种受教育的重要形式

考研英语图画作文系列分享六||第二段写作方法(聚沙成塔139) 1

【写作素材积累】

第二段写作方法

第二段写作只要不出大错,其中有一些比较高级的句子,第二段就OK 了。千万不要为了使用高级句子而出现了得不偿失的错误。

第二段第一句需要写主题句,这个主题句其实就决定了整篇作文主题部分的基调和方向,很重要。来看第二段的第一句话怎么写:

还记得第一段最后点题的时候给大家讲的内容吗?主题分为三类:主题词重要;主题词有害;主题词有争议。也就是是说,主题内容分别是正面、负面和有争议三类。

如果主题是“正面的”,第二段第一句可以这样写:

Not until I see this caricature/picture, do Irealize the magnitude(gravity) of主题(n./句子: the fact that…)(正面负面均可)

如果主题是“负面的”,第二段第一句可以这样写:

Common as it at first glance, this picture isbrimming with illumination after your serious pondering :_sb_are devoid of_sth_.(负面现象);

如果主题是“有争议的”,第二段第一句可以这样写:

Sb hold/maintain

opposite/different/incompatible/inconsistentopinions/ideas/perspectives about/on sth/doing sth(争议现象)

切记,第二段需要根据主题的不同,有相应的变化,不可以一刀切,这样容易别认定为模板作文。

关于“勇气、坚持和努力”,可以用于作文的锦句:

Rome wasn't built in a day.伟业非一日之功。

Constant dropping wears the stone.水滴石穿。

God helps those who help themselves.天助自助者。

Nothing is impossible to a willing mind.世上无难事只怕有心人。

A thousand-mile trip begains with one step.千里之行始于足下。

考研英语图画作文系列分享七||第二段架构方法(聚沙

成塔141)

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【写作素材积累】 第二段写作方法

体构架方法也就不同,如果写成相同的(我看到有老师在第二段给大家的架构内容是一样的),容易跑题且被定位模板作文。这一期就讲不同的主题,第二段架构方法:

作文主题历年虽然具体内容有变化,但是十几年下来,向来是循环往复的。上面说分为三类,例如08年的“合作”就是一个正面主题;09年的“网络”就可以写成有争议的;11年的“旅游之余”就可以写成负面的。

不一样的主题,第二段的架构理应有所区别吧,这样才显得更加贴切,更不像模板作文。如果说无论是什么主题,写法都一样,难免有时候会显得牵强而影响分数。

具体来说:

如果是负面现象类的作文,第二段应该这样来写--现状,成因和后果。首先,这个负面现象现在是什么情况,有多糟糕;其次再分析造成这种现状的原因;最后再写如果这种现状得不到遏制,会造成什么样的后果。

如果是正面观点的表达,第二段写--现状,利以及弊。首先,分析这种正面观点的现状和情况,其次说明这种现象的好处是什么,最后写如果没有这种正面现象,会造成什么后果。

最后如果是有争议的主题,第二段写--目前这个争议事态的现状,其次分析从两方面分析:争议正方观点和争议反方观点。

有了这个架构,大家写作的时候就可以开始积累相关的功能句了,从下一期的作文开始,我们将会分别给大家讲解三类主题第二段的具体展开方法。

关于“勇气、坚持和努力”,可以用于作文的锦句:

There is no end to learning.学无止境。

A man is never too old to learn.活到老,学到老。

The more a man learns, the more he sees his ignorance.学而知耻。

Knowledge is power.知识就是力量。

Cultivation to mind is as necessary as food for body.学习之于头脑,如同实物之于身体。

考研英语图画作文系列分享八||第二段主体写法:现状(聚沙成塔143) 关于主题的现状,写法基本上是:在什么时候,做某件事情的人增加了或者减少了;或者随着什么的发展,某种现象变的非常普遍。具体引导句给大家下面三个:

时间/事实,the number of sb. who are inclined to do sth/suffer from…has increased at an alarming rate.

翻译:时间/事实,倾向于做某件事的人或者遭受... 的人快速增加。

With the rapid development / advance of the society / the economy / the media / our era / the modern science and technology, you may frequently hear of the term /see the phenomenon of +主题 /that+句子.

翻译:随着社会/经济/媒体/时代/科技 的发展,你会常常听到/看到某个现象。 The current days /recent years / modern society / recent world has witnessed the phenomenon /development / looming threat / issue / tendency / problem of 主题 / that 句子.

翻译:最近几天/几年/现代社会/世界 见证了某个现象/某种发展/某种威胁/某种倾向/某种问题。

然后,运用数据对上面的内容进行支持,具体可以这样写:

Accordingto a survey made by 组织名称, there are __% sb(not) doing sth. 或者

The number\price \rate of ____ has increased\ decreased by了\ to到 ___ 组织名称有这么一些名字:

China Daily中国日报 the National Bureau of Statistics国家数据统计局 World Health Organization(WHO)世界卫生组织

UnitedNation Educational Scientific and Culture Organizaiton(UNESCO)联合国教科文组织

例如:

这幅图的现状就可以这样写:

With the rapid development of our country's economy,the number of people who suffer from the loss of sense of environment protection has increased at an alarming rate. Accordingto a survey made by the National Bureau of Statistics, there are 27% people having no awareness to protect environment.

翻译:随着我国经济的发展,缺乏环保意识的人大量增加。根据国家数据统计局的统计,有27%的人没有意识保护环境。

关于“品格或者品德”,可以用于作文的锦句:

The greater wealth is contentment with a little.最大的财富是知足。

The empty vessles make the greatest sound.满瓶子不响,半瓶子咣当。

Do as you would be done by.己所不欲勿施于人。

Personality is to man what perfume is to a flower.品格之于人如芳香之于花。

Love has no meaning if it isn't shared. Love has to be put into action.爱分享出去才有意义,爱必须付诸行动。

第二段写法:成因||考研英语图画作文系列分享九(大彩蛋-聚沙成塔145) 1

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我在这里给同学们总结了九大“万能成因”,这九个“万能原因”大家可以灵活运用,已经够用了:

第一:

政策漏洞:There are policy bug/no effective/strict regulations on sth/doingsth 第二:

监管不到:Authorities concerned/The local administration bureau exercise weak/inadequate supervision/fails to carry outadequate/effective/proper/close supervision/invigilation on sth/doing sth.

第三:

不良社会风气:Undesirable general mood of society should shoulder theblame, such as gradual loss of mutual trust/sense of social responsibility/ basicethics/morality and conscience, egoism, credibility problem, distortedvalue towards life, and itslike. (such as 之后的内容可选择)

第四:

激烈的竞争:sb wish to escape from heavy economic pressure/fiercecompetition/ pressure of school learning/pressure of job hunting/.(或者…areunder heavy economic pressure /fiercecompetition.)

第五:

沉溺于经济利益/名誉/短期增长或发展/个人的舒适和利益:sbare obsessed/preoccupied with economic benefits/fame/short-term growth anddevelopment/one’s own comfort and benefits.

第六:

过于关注经济效益而忽视社会效益:We tend to beobsessed with economicbenefits but neglect socialinterests.(黄底字可以替换)

第七 :

不恰当的教育理念:People haven’t realized disastrous consequences of inappropriate notion of education, individuals/people/youngadults/students/university

graduates(人)failing to form a right view of life/moral value/life value.

第八:

求同思维:Owingto convergent thinking,

individuals/people/youngadults/students/university graduates(人) easilyneglect their own opinion and are always/commonly impelled by the tendency tofollow the crowd and drift with the current.

第九:

缺乏自我约束:lack of/lacking self-discipline constitutes oneof the primary reason for this issue/thisphenomenon/this problem.

上面的原因需要配合下面的引导句进行使用:

Careful deliberation of thistrend has illuminated me on why this should be so. +万能成因

There are several drivingforces behind this trend. +万能成因

A possible/convincing reason for this issue/this phenomenon/this problem is that+万能成因。

One plausible/ convincing explanation for this issue/this phenomenon/this problem is that+万能成因

例如:

关于这幅图的成因,我们可以这样来写:

One convincing explanation for this phenomenon is that there are policy bug and authorities concerned fails to carry out adequate supervision onenvironment pollution.

关于“实践”,可以用于作文的锦句:

Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it.知识是宝库,时间是这宝库的钥匙。 Progress is the activity of today and the assurance ot tomorrow.进步是今天的活动,是明天的保证。

The best preparation for good work tomorrow is to do good work today.今天做好工作是明天的最好保证。

One thorn of experience is worth a whole wilderness of warning.一次痛苦的经验抵得上千百次告诫。

第二段写法:后果||考研英语图画作文系列分享十(聚沙成塔147) 1 【写作素材积累】

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今天的内容给大家讲大作文第二段,“后果”的写法。今天的内容分享完之后,负面现象类的作文,第二段大家就可以写完整了:现状、原因、后果。 If there is no compelling(强制) interference to reverse this trend, 人、企业、社会、国家is/are bound to be influenced adversely. To be specific,+ 终极万能后果

翻译:如果没有强制性的干扰措施来扭转这个趋势,人、企业、社会、国家定会受到负面影响。具体来说,+ 终极万能后果

The unfavorable has begun, if no effective remedy were introduced, and the fallout may not be far behind. + 终极万能后果

翻译:不好的情况已经发生,如果没有有效的措施,不好的结构就为之不远了。+ 终极万能后果。

终极万能后果:

环境损失: Huge economic/environmental/cultural losses may occur.

生命或社会繁荣面临危险:People ’slives and social property will be put at risk. 社会稳定/安全将会受到危害:Socialstability/safety may be endangered/jeopardized. 社会风气将会被污染:Social atmosphere/climate will be poisoned.或者It may lead to degradation of social atmosphere/climate.

举例:

If there is no compelling interference to reverse this trend, oursociety is bound to

be influenced adversely. To be specific, it may pose a potentialand looming potential menace to ecological balance and the environmental lossesmay occur.

关于“坚持、机遇、勤奋”,可以用于作文的例子:

Sir Alexander Fleming had experimented with antibacterial substances for nine years before he finally noticed the mold(霉) on啊piece of cheese and consequently discovered penicillin.

亚历山大 弗莱明爵士对抗菌物质进行了长达九年的试验才最终发现奶酪上的霉,从而发现了青霉素。

第二段写法:利||考研英语图画作文系列分享十一(聚沙成塔149) 1

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我们在作文分享第六期中给大家提到过:主题分为三类:主题词重要;主题词有害;主题词有争议。也就是是说,主题内容分别是正面、负面和有争议三类--考研英语图画作文系列分享六||第二段写作方法(聚沙成塔139)。

大家切记,第二段不能不分文章主题类型,上来就写一样的,因为这样写出来的作文多少都会有违和感。比如,

题目中文字是:网络的远与近。也就是说,这个题目表达了一个意思:网络既拉近了人们的距离,又让人们疏远。因此,在第二段这个文章的主体段,不能简单的写成:网络很重要,网络非常重要,网络真的非常重要...... 。这样写等着哭吧。

因此,我们在前面第七期,给大家讲解了第二段的构架方法考研英语图画作文系列分享七||

第二段架构方法(聚沙成塔141):

如果是负面现象类的作文,第二段应该这样来写--现状,成因和后果。首先,这个负面现象现在是什么情况,有多糟糕;其次再分析造成这种现状的原因;最后再写如果这种现状得不到遏制,会造成什么样的后果。

以及

如果是正面观点的表达,第二段写--现状,利以及弊。首先,分析这种正面观点的现状和情况,其次说明这种现象的好处是什么,最后写如果没有这种正面现象,会造成什么后果。 以及

最后如果是有争议的主题,第二段写--目前这个争议事态的现状,其次分析从两方面分析:争议正方观点和争议反方观点。

所以,我们分别在第八期考研英语图画作文系列分享八||第二段主体写法:现状(聚沙成塔143);第九期第二段写法:成因||考研英语图画作文系列分享九(大彩蛋-聚沙成塔145);以及第十期第二段写法:后果||考研英语图画作文系列分享十(聚沙成塔147)中分别给大家讲解了“现状”“原因”“后果”的写法。

要表达“利”,我们首先需要有句子引导,具体的引导句可以这样来写:

Possessing this virtue/quality/value/notion, one can notonly+动词词组but also +动词词组(这里的动词词组,指的就是下面“利”的万能素材一)

或者

With+主题词,the possibility of+“利”的万能素材一(注意素材中的第一个单词要用doing 形式) becomes real.

“利”的万能素材一

容易成功

achievesuccess more easily

加强沟通

enhanceand increase communication

减少遭受到失败和挫折的几率

reducingthe rate of suffering from failure and adversity.

获得成就感/满足感/幸福感

acquiresense of achievement/contentment/happiness

得到他人的尊敬

obtainrespect from others

享受良好的人际关系

如果需要写多个“利”,那么还可以用下面的内容进行补充:

what ’s more/moreover ,this virtue/quality/value/notion/主题词+lays a solid foundation for+“利”的万能素材二

或者

what ’s more/moreover ,this virtue/quality/value/notion/主题词exerts a far-reaching impact on+“利”的万能素材二

“利”的万能素材二

社会风气:general mood ofsociety

可持续性发展:sustainable development 个人成长:personal growth

身心健康:our personal mentaland physical health

和谐稳定:social harmony and stability

需要注意的是,万能素材一种的内容都是动词短语;而万能素材二中的内容都是名词短语。大家可以模仿素材一和素材二的内容,多积累一些这样的表达。此处就不再一 一列举了。 举例:

Cultural communication is an indispensable factor to enhance andincrease communication to learnfrom other’s strong points and offset our weakness.

Apart from this, the notion lays a solid foundation for economic development as well astechnology advances.

关于“人生哲理”类的词汇,可以用于作文的有:敬业dedication ;节俭thrift ;不屈不饶perseverance ;奉行孝道practice filial piety;精益求精strive for excellence;与时俱进keep pace with the time;齐心协力make joint efforts;自我修养self —cultivation ;释放压力release pressure;尊老爱幼respect the elderly and care for the young。

第二段写法:弊||考研英语图画作文系列分享十二(聚沙成塔151) 1

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价值观的坏处。 要表达“弊”,我们首先需要有句子引导,具体的引导句可以这样来写:

If the significance of this virtue/quality/value/notion/主题 cannot be realized properly and promptly, individuals/our whole society/ “利”的万能素材二will suffer a great deal.

或者

Lack of this virtue/quality/value/notion/主题 may pose a potential and looming menace to“利”的万能素材一/“利”的万能素材二.

注意:这里加“利”的万能素材一时,素材中第一个单词应该用doing 的形式;并且要小心,写“弊端”的时候,最多写一个就可以了。

“利”的万能素材一

容易成功

achievesuccess more easily

加强沟通

enhanceand increase communication

减少遭受到失败和挫折的几率

reducingthe rate of suffering from failure and adversity. 获得成就感/满足感/幸福感

acquiresense of achievement/contentment/happiness

得到他人的尊敬

obtainrespect from others 享受良好的人际关系

“利”的万能素材二

社会风气:general mood ofsociety

可持续性发展:sustainable development 个人成长:personal growth

身心健康:our personal mentaland physical health 和谐稳定:social harmony and stability

举例:

If the significance of cultural communication cannot be realized properly and promptly, our whole society will suffer a great deal.

关于“饮用水”类的词汇,可以用于作文的有:drinking water 饮用水;ecosystem 生态系统;energy conservation 能源节约;garbage classification 垃圾分类;endangered species 濒危物种;desertification 沙漠化;greenhouse effect温室效应;low carbon life低碳生活;renewable resources可再生资源;clean energy清洁能源

第二段写法:||考研英语图画作文系列分享十三(聚沙成塔153) 1

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对于争议类作文,第二段需要写支持者的观点和反对者的观点。我们先来看看引导句: This phenomenon is both a blessing and a curse.

或者

Divergent views are often voiced by advocates and opposers with regard to 主题词. 这两个引导句任选其一,放在支持者观点和保护着观点前面。

接下来写支持者观点:

People in increasing numbers are beginning to realize that+Possessing this virtue/quality/value/notion, one can not only+动词词组butalso +动词词组 或者

Positive view have some reasons in varied forms:+Possessing this virtue/quality/value/notion, one can not only+动词词组butalso +动词词组

动词词组可以有下列选择:

容易成功

achieve success more easily

加强沟通

enhance and increase communication

减少遭受到失败和挫折的几率

reducing the rate of suffering from failure and adversity.

获得成就感/满足感/幸福感

acquire sense of achievement/contentment/happiness

得到他人的尊敬

obtain respect from others

享受良好的人际关系

enjoy harmonious interpersonalrelationship.

建立成就、创造财富、为社会做贡献 constitutes achievement, create wealth andmake contribution to our society 取长 learn from other’s strong points

补短

offsetone ’s weakness

举例:

Divergent views are often voiced by advocates and opposers with regard to internet. With internet popularizingin our life,the number of peoplewho are inclined to surf the internet has increased at an alarming rate. According to a survey made by Sina, there are 89%people having the access

关于“环境保护”类的词汇,可以用于作文的有:

太阳能solar energy;自然保护区nature reserve;旅游景点scenic spot;尾气motor vehicle exhaust;白色污染white pollution;提高环保意识enhance environmental awareness ;节约能源energy conservation;减排emission reduction;过度开发overexploitation

第二段写法:反对者观点

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述“反对者观点”怎么写。 先来看看“反对者观点”的引导句:

On the contrary, some other people think that it pose a potential threat\menace to +“利”的万能素材一/“利”的万能素材二.

或者

Meanwhile, many people still live under the traditional/outdated/strange/old ideas that it pose a potential threat\menace to+“利”的万能素材一/“利”的万能素材二.

下面来看素材:

“利”的万能素材一

容易成功

achieve success more easily

加强沟通

enhance and increase communication

减少遭受到失败和挫折的几率

reducing the rate of suffering from failure and adversity.

获得成就感/满足感/幸福感

acquire sense of achievement/contentment/happiness

得到他人的尊敬

obtain respect from others

享受良好的人际关系

enjoy harmonious interpersonalrelationship.

建立成就、创造财富、为社会做贡献

constitutes achievement, create wealth andmake contribution to our society 取长

learn from other’s strong points

补短

offsetone ’s weakness

“利”的万能素材二

社会风气:general mood ofsociety

可持续性发展:sustainabledevelopment

个人成长:personal growth

身心健康:our personal mentaland physical health

和谐稳定:social harmonyand stability

生态平衡:ecologicalbalance

经济发展:economicdevelopment

科技进步:technologydevelopment/advances 文化交流:cultural exchanges 举例:

On the contrary, some other people think that the internet poses a potential threat to enjoy harmonious interpersonal relationship. And it may be harmful to our personal mental and physical health. 关于“热点话题”类的词汇,可以用于作文的有:

housing problem住房问题;urban expansion城市扩张;population aging人口老龄化;copycat product山寨产品;left-behind children留守儿童;ant tribe蚁族;plastic surgery 整形手术;drunk driving酒驾

第二段写法:总结||考研英语图画作文系列分享十五(聚沙成塔157) 这一期,我们一起复习第二段的写法,我们用讲过的写法,一起来写一篇作文的第二段。 1

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例一:

Common as it at first glance, this picture is brimming with illuminationafter your serious pondering :some people are devoid of the sense of environment protection.Withthe rapid development of economy, you may frequently hear of the

phenomenon of environment pollution. According to a survey made by the NationalBureau of Statistics, people whoare lack of the sense of environment protection account for 20%.Careful deliberation of this trend has illuminated me on why this shouldbe so. There are policy bug on environment pollution. Besides, undesirablegeneral mood of society should shoulder the blame, such as gradual loss of thesense of social responsibility.If there is no compellinginterference to reverse this trend, our society is bound to be influencedadversely. To be specific, it may pose a potential and looming menace toecological balance and the environmental losses may occur.

例二:

Peoplemaintain incompatible perspectives about internet. With internet popularizing in our life,the number of people who are inclined tosurf the internet has increased at an alarming rate. According to a survey made by Sina, there are 89%people having the access to internet. Nothing has received more praise and abuse than internet in the modern world.With internet, the possibility ofenhancing and increasing communication becomes real. And it is, undoubtedly,conducive to economic development coupled with cultural exchanges.Although the internet is beneficial is firmly held by someindividuals, others don’t find their agreement to it, holding that itpose a potential threat to enjoy harmonious interpersonal relationship. And it may be harmful to our personal mental and physical health.

关于“热点话题”类的词汇,可以用于作文的有:

civil servant craze/fever公务员热;traffic jam交通拥堵;the rich second generation富二代;polariztion of the rich and poor贫富分化;privacy of celebrities名人隐私;social network 社交网站;Internet slang网络语言;information explosion信息爆照;public transportation 公共交通;stimulate consumption刺激消费;expand domestic demand扩大内需

第三段写法:第一句||考研英语图画作文系列分享十六(聚沙成塔160)

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●∙第一句:我认为

Taking the above mentioned into consideration,I reckon+第一或第二或第三 考虑到上面的讨论,我认为:

In terms of my personal experience, I deem+第一或第二或第三

从我个人观点来看,我认为:

Weighing up the above two(several )aspects, I suppose+第一或第二或第三 权衡上面的两个方面,我认为:

第一:that not untilwe realize the importance of 主题词///thefact that+主题句andput it into practice,canwe foster/cultivate/nurture it deliberately and (可以省略)makea better progress.(正面类)直到我认识到主题词的重要性/某个事实的重要性,并且把它付诸实践,我们才可以进一步取得进步。

第二,that not until we realize the significanceof主题词///the fact that+主题句and take active counter measures, can we foster a complete stop to thisproblem and make a better progress. (负面类)直到我们认识到主题词的重要性或者某个事实,我们才能够完全阻止这个问题并且做出更好的进步。

第三:that, although it is hard to reach a consensus amongthe public on this issue, the advantages of 主题词outweigh its disadvantages.(争议类) 虽然很难关于这个事情在公众当中达成一致,但是我认为主题词的好处大于坏处。

以上三点分别针对三类不同的文章主题:主题重要;主题有害;主题有争议。

例一:

Taking the above mentioned into consideration, I reckon that, althoughit is hard to reach a consensus among the public on this issue, the advantagesof internet outweigh its disadvantages.

例二:

Taking the above mentioned into consideration, I deem that not until we realize the significanceof natural protection and take active counter measures, can we foster acomplete stop to this problem and make a better progress.

关于“人生哲理或者青少年成长”类的词汇,可以用于作文的有:

delication 奉献;duty-bound 义不容辞的;thrift 节俭;perseverance 不屈不挠;filial piety孝道;personal gains and losses个人得失;strive for excellence精益求精;keep pace with times与时俱进;make joint effort齐心协力;self-cultivation 自我修养;release pressure 释放压力

第三段写法:第二句||考研英语图画作文系列分享十七(聚沙成塔162) 1 【写作素材积累】

第三段写作方法

今天我们来学习作文第三段第二句的写法。 最后一段的第二句主要内容是:建议。建议由四个方向,即建议政府做某事,建议媒体做某事、建议学校或者个人做某事。

先来看看建议政府或者媒体怎么写:

In light of/In terms of the gravity/significance of+主题词/the problem discussed above, 政府/媒体should shoulder the responsibility of doing sth/to do sth, through which our society/homeland/world/hometown can be brimming with vitality=legality/stability/harmony/happiness/credibility,and hope. doing sth/to do sth的写法:

1)政府

issue related laws and regulations 颁布相应的法规

enhancesupervision

punishthose who are against laws\lawbreaking people

set upsound social security system\sound legal system,

remedypolicy bug,

ensurethe interests of citizens,

increasefinancial input to do sth/for sth

2)媒体

advocateand publicize the notion/virtue/ awareness/ desirable value\ virtue of+主题词倡导宣传(价值观/理念/美德)

cannot shun theobligation to initiate a campaign against\for sth

再来看看建议学校或者个人怎么写:

I reckon it is prime time for 学校/个人 to do sth,+which 从句

which is a vital/is well considered as/is well regarded as an fundamental, urgent and practical necessity/requirement for youngsters’/young adults’/teenagers’/adolescents’sound growth/development/psychological and mental health. 或者

which is a vital/ is well considered as/is well regarded as a fundamental, urgent and practical necessity/requirement for youngsters/young

adults/teenagers/adolescents to establish career, accumulate wealth and fit into society.

to do sth的写法:

3)学校

Strengthenmoral education,

helpstudents to cultivate a more acceptable value,

guidestudents to be more innovative\optimistic\contributive,

guidestudents in the right direction

shoulderthe responsibility to educate the students,

carefor needy students,

cultivate\guide\encourage\spurstudents to do sth

4)个人

fosterthe notion/virtue deliberately 有意识地培养理念/美德

enhance/consolidateself-discipline on this issue.加强自我约束

releasepressure 减压

knowthe reason that one reaps what one sows

bebrave to confront twists and turns,

beoptimistic\independent\ self-confident\ persistent

lay asolid foundation for future career,

possessgenuine ability and learning,

makewise\sensible decision\option,

be taught to be innovative

举例:

第一句:Taking the above mentioned intoconsideration, I reckon that, although it is hard to reach a consensus amongthe public on this issue, the advantages of

internet outweigh itsdisadvantages.参考第三段写法:第一句||考研英语图画作文系列分享十六(聚沙成塔160)

第二句:The school shouldguide the students in the right direction. In addition, it is critical for the students to enhance and consolidate self-discipline on this issue. 关于“人生哲理或者青少年成长”类的词汇(二),可以用于作文的有:

traditional virtue传统美德;social skill社交技能;respect the elderly and care for the young 尊老爱幼;lack of confidence缺乏自信;down-to-earth attitude务实态度;

self-restraint 自我约束;versatile 多才多艺;sense of inferiority自卑感;adaptability 适应能力;stand on one's own feet独立自主

第三段写法:第三句||考研英语图画作文系列分享十八(聚沙成塔164) 1

【写作素材积累】

第三段写作方法

还记得之前给大家说过:文章主题可以分为三来,即正面、负面和争议。最后一段的最后一句话,也需要根据这几个方面,来给出相应的结尾:

最后一句的开头需要写一个短语“总结”,选择如下:

In a word/to sum up/all in all/Taking the above discussion to aconclusion,+

如果是正面观点结尾:

Although it`s easier said than done, wecan make it with

perseverance/our longstanding effort and stamina.(正面观点表达) 或者

Only in this way can we achieve successand only in this way can our society become more harmonious to live in. (正面观点表达)

如果是负面观点结尾:

If we can do/take immediate action asthe above mentioned, this

undesirable phenomenon can surely be eliminated\curbed\rectified(纠正/修正) sooneror later. (负面现象类)

或者 Only in this way can we curb the currentevil phenomenon revealed in the picture(负面现象类)

争议类主题结尾:

As long as we cancapitalize its strength and dodge its adverse aspects, we can definitelybenefit remarkably from it.(有争议的现象)

正面观点举例

To sum up, although it`s easier said than done, we can make it with

perseveranceand our longstanding effort.

负面观点举例:

All in all, if we can do/take immediate action as the above mentioned,

thisundesirable phenomenon can surely be eliminated sooner or later.

争议类主题举例:

In a word, as long as we can capitalize its strength and dodge itsadverse aspects, we can definitely benefit remarkably from it.

关于“理想与现实”类的锦句,可以用于作文的有:

It is the first step that costs troublesome.万事开头难。

Take the essence and discard the dregs.取其精华,去其糟粕。

A young idler, an old begger.少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。

作文大串讲第一期(聚沙成塔235)

上面的这18期内容其实就是我给大家讲的英语一的写作方法,跟完了,你就能写出自己的作文了。建议大家可以将这18期的内容整理成自己的写作框架,但是担心大家在总结的时候出问题,因此我给大家给一个“照猫画虎”的“模子”,让大家知道自己总结的写作框架应该是什么样子的。

要想写出“合适的”,“不被发现是模板的”,能得高分的作文,作文是要分类型的。在这18期的内容中,我给大家把作文分成了3个类型:正面、负面和争议。下面我就给大家一个例子,让大家知道如何按照上面18期的内容写出的高分作文模板是什么样子的。上过我面授课的同学应该很清楚是怎么回事。今天先分享根据上面18期内容写出的“正面”主题的作文框架:

第一段:

Lookingat this though-provoking picture subtly depicted by the drawer, I do realize thesignificance of _主题_/how significant it is to be+adj./dosth. Let`s have a closer look at the drawing .__细节描述__.寓意:The symbolic

implication of this pictureis apparent that _主题词_plays an irreplaceable role in ourlife.

词义替换:单词词性/同义/上义词 例如

创新:innovation →originality →be innovative→innovativespirit →notion →awareness

诚信:credibility 、integrity 、crediblespirit 、beingcredible 、virtue 、quality

第二段:现状+利+危害

现状: In contemporary society, individuals in growing number areconscious that _主题_is indispensable for both personal andsocial purposes. As is universally acknowledged, life without___is like asailing without wind. 利:Possessing thisvirtue/quality/value/notion, one can not only_动词词组_,but also _动词词组_ 危害(只写一个) If the significance of 主题cannot be realized properly and promply,[(危害一) :individuals( as well as the

wholesociety ) will suffer a great deal.支撑句(危害二)What`s worse, lack of _it_may pose a potential and looming menace to____.

万能利弊模板素材:

1、容易成功 achieve success more easily

2、遭受到失败和挫折 suffer form failure and adversity.

3、获得成就感/满足感/幸福感Acquire sense

ofachievement/contentment/happiness

4、得到他人的尊敬obtain respectfrom others

5、享受良好的人际关系Enjoy harmoniousinterpersonal relationship. (1—4 V.)

5、社会风气:generalmood of society

6、可持续性发展:sustainabledevelopment

7、个人成长:personalgrowth

8、身心健康:mentaland physical health

(5-8 n.)

第三段:

Taking the above mentioned into consideration, Ireckon that not until we realize theimportance of 主题 and put it into practice,can we foster it deliberately and make a betterprogress. Additionally, the public media(替换) is also responsible for advocating this理念、价值观、美德

/teaching/guiding+sb to do better in this respect. Although it`s easiersaid than done, we can make it with perseverance/our longstanding effort and stamina.

需要提醒大家的是:千万不能把这个模板直接背了上考场写作文,因为这样的话,你可能会写出雷同作文。大家需要根据上面18期内容,自己总结。上面的这个模板,只是给大家举一个例子,告诉大家应该总结出什么样的模板。加油吧,下一期给大家分享负面类型的模板框架。

作文大串讲第二期(聚沙成塔236)

今天先分享根据上面18期内容写出的“负面”主题的作文框架:

第一段:三种模板第一段通用

总描:Not until I see this caricature/picture,do I realize the magnitude(gravity) of 主题(n./句子: the fact that…).Let ’slook at the picture in detail 细描(人、物、话)

Common as it at first glance, this picture isbrimming with illumination after your serious pondering. The drawer aims toreveal that _sb_are devoid of_sth_.(寓意)

第二段:现状+成因+后果

1、 现状

1) In contemporary society, the number ofsb. who are inclined to do sth/suffer from…has increased at an alarming rate.

2) According to a survey made bySina/National Bureau of Statistics, there are __% sb(not) doing sth.(也可放原因做支撑句)

2、 成因

Careful deliberation(study/thinking)of this phenomenon has illuminated me on why this should be so. 原因1:Inthe first place, 名词+constitutes one of the primary reason,(+for支撑句:数据、图像或把前面的句子扩展) (原因2:Inaddition, 名词+aslo accounts for this phenomenon+支撑句)

3、后果:

If there is no compelling(强制)interference to reverse this trend, 人、企业、社会、国家is/are bound to be influenced adversely.To be specific, it may pose a potential menace to+名词.(What`s worse, it`s detrimental to +名词) 先写个人,再写社会国家 形成递进

成因终极万能素材

政策漏洞:policy bug

监管不到:weak supervision of/from authoritiesconcerned

不良社会风气:undesirable general mood of society(后果)

激烈的竞争:fiercecompetition

扭曲的价值观:distorted value towards life

不恰当的教育理念:inappropriate notion of education

自私自利:egoism

求同思维:convergent thinking

缺乏责任感、自我约束:lack of/lacking social responsibilityand self-discipline 缺乏基本的道德良心:lack of/lacking basic ethics/moralityand conscience ......

后果的终极万能素材

可持续性发展(个人、经济、社会):sustainable development of…… 社会风气:general mood of society, social harmonyand stability

身心健康:mental and physical health

个人成长:personal growth/sound growth

......

第三段:

From myperspective, it is important to take counter measures. For one thing, it is the+政府、媒体、国家、学校that should shoulder the due

responsibility (to do sth). For another, __shouldnotshun their obligation(to

do sth).Although the fight against it is longstanding and tremendous, ourefforts will eventually pay off.

作文大串讲第三期-争议类主题作文模板(聚沙成塔237) 今天先分享根据上面18期内容写出的“争议类”主题的作文框架:

第一段

Not until I see these pictures, do Irealize the proliferation of 主题(或the fact that 主+动+其它,衔接句).Let`s have a close look at these drawing. In the picture___.(In firstone,_____. In the second one,_____.)

说明:三类作文第一段基本是一样的。

第二段

现状(可用负面模板)With the ever-accelerating developmentof社会/经济/科技,individuals in mounting numbers are inclined to do sth. According to a survey made bySina/NBS, those who do sth. take up__%. 利弊 The

advantages of主题are apparent as follows. It Is, undoubtedly, conducive to sth. 支撑句(What`s more,____.)Despitethe above mentioned benefits, this trend/phenomenon dose possess a couple of disadvantages. To be specific, it is detrimental to___if___.

第三段

Although it is hard to reach a consensus among the public on 主题, I cling to the idea that the advantages of 主题 exceed/outweigh its

大作文可以短期提分!(聚沙成塔242) 分析:这是2012年的英语一大作文真题。通过对图画的分析,我们可以看到,图画体现的是一种生活态度,或者说对同一个事物的看法不同。具体来说就是一种乐观的生活态度或者生活理念,属于正面观点类作文。下面,我们一起来看看,这篇作文如何成文:

As is shown in this enlightening cartoon,the man on the right, joyfully and delightedly, is picking up a bottle, saying it is lucky to have a little.

However, what is extremely interesting is that the man on the left is sad and sorrowful, saying it’s over. The drawer aims to reveal that we should put high value on optimistic life attitude.

说明:第一段描述图画的句式是这样的,sb is doing sth, doing sth, with+人物周围非重点事物。或者如果描述物的话,可以用there be句型。注意最后一句话点题。

Not until I see this caricature, do I realize the magnitude of optimism. According to a survey made by Sina, there are 80% people having positive attitude of life. Possessing this notion, one can not only achieve success more easily, but also acquire the sense of contentment and happiness. Moreover ,optimism plays an irreplaceable role in our personal mental

and physical health. If the significance of this kind of attitude cannot be realized properly and promptly, individuals will suffer agreat deal. 说明:第二段在描述的时候,第一句给一个总述句,这个句子可以是第一段最后一句点题句子的改写句。接着说明具备这中正面理念的好处,和不具备的坏处。其中可以穿插一些举例说明。我建议大家把举例说明固定下来,就像这个自然段中的第二句话一样。

Weighing up the above several aspects, I suppose that not until we

realize the importance of optimistic attitude and put it into practice,can we foster it deliberately and make a better progress. I reckon it is prime time for school to help students to cultivate a more acceptable value. It is critical for young adult to release pressure, which is a vital, urgent and practical necessity for youngsters’ sound growth and psychological and mental health. In a word,although it`s easier said than done, we can make it with perseverance.

说明:最后一段第一句总结全文,再次从不同的角度来说明此正面理念的重要性。并且给出自己的建议,本文中最后一段的建议是从学校和个人两个方面来说明的。最后一句总结句,总结全文或者展望未来。

总之:大家需要尽可能的多背诵一些功能句或者功能段,这样可以根据需要进行组合。还有,就是加粗字体必须背诵。

写作中那些让你加分的多样性表达(聚沙成塔246)