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篇一:高中英语作文--建议信

建议

信(1)-----阐释原因;提出建议类

请你代表你班同学

给校长写一封信,反映一下你校食堂的几点问题,以引起学校重视,并针对问题提出两条合

理建议。问题包括:

1. 菜价昂贵,菜市

单一;2. 排队时间长,浪费午休时间;3. 味道不佳,浪费现象严重。

注意:1. 词数不少

于120; 2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参

考词汇: 食堂 canteen dear principal,

recently, many

students are discussing the problems of the canteen.

________________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________ i sincerely

hope you can adopt my suggestions. thank you!

yours, li hua

作文范文: dear

principal,

some students

think the prices of the dishes are too high and that the choices are too limited.

another concern is that the time spent in waiting is so long that we have less time

to have a rest. meanwhile, some students think that the taste of the food is awful,

which leads to a lot of waste. the prices be more reasonable and the choices of dishes

be more various.需注意的词汇、表达:

1. delicious

waiting taste(n.味道) tasty (adj.可口的) cook (n.厨师) cooker (n.炊具)

price 价格

2. lower /bring

down the price 降低价格 3. at a lower/reasonable price 以较低的价格 4. varieties of

dishes 种类多样的菜品 5. for one thing,„„. for another,„„

6. make sb

(not)do sth

7. wait /stand in

line / in a queue for a long time 8. the kinds of food are . 表达食堂出现的问题:

9. the prices of

dishes are so high that many of us can’t afford them.

10. there are so

few dishes to choose from, which is far from satisfactory. / which can’t satisfy

our

needs.

11. it takes us so

much time to stand in line, which decreases our time of rest at noon. 12. the food

in the canteen doesn’t taste .

the taste of food

in the canteen isn’t

13. the food in

the canteen tastes so bad that a lot of food is left and wasted 14. it’s a waste

of time to stand in line for a long time.

15. the food in

the canteen tastes so bad, which leads to a severe phenomenon of wasting food. 16.

in the long run, it’s bad for our health and study.

17. it goes

without saying that it will influence our sleep in the afternoon. 表达提出的建议:

18. improving the

taste of the food is also a good solution to the problems. 19. i think it ’s necessary

to provide more kinds of food. 20. it’s high time that we took measures to solve

the problems.

so it ’s high time

for us to take measures

21. to solve the

problems, i think the canteen should set up a new figure(形象) and improve the

present

condition to satisfy the students’ needs.

22. we hope the

canteen can provide us with dishes of a high quality at a reasonable price. 23. the

canteen should open more windows so that we needn’t wait so long.

24. as far as i’

m concerned, the canteen should attach importance to the quality. what’s more,

different kinds

of food should be provided.

25. measures are

supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen.

建议模板:

dear „.,

i’m glad to

receive your letter asking for my advice on how to„„.(引出话题). here are a few

suggestions. first of all, it is important to do sth. then, it also helps to do sth.

besides, it should be a good idea to do sth.

建议句型积累:

1. many ways can contribute to solving the problem, but i think the following may

be the most

effective ones.

2. i’d like to

make some suggestions on „„. 3. it’s of great importance for sb to do sth.

it’s necessary

for sb to do sth

4. it would be a

good idea for sb to do sth. / it would be a better idea if„„. 5. it contributes

/helps a lot if „„„ 6. i suggest that „../ my suggestion is that „

it’s better to do

sth

8. measures are

supposed to be taken to do sth

we are supposed

to take effective measures to do sth 9. it’s high time that sb sth. / it’s high

time for sb to do sth

建议信(2)-----阐释原因;提出建议类

假定你是中学生李

华。在一位名叫sad mother 的学生家长的博客上,你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写

作要点和要求,用英语给这位家长回复。

i’m the mother of

a fourteen-year-old. recently i have found that my daughter told lies to me. the other

day she told me that she did well in the final exam. however i found out she failed

in math and english. what should i do?

写作要点:

1.表明了解她的问

题; 2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因; 3.提出至少两条建议 要求:

1.短文须写在答题

卡的指定区域。 2.短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。 3.内容充实,结构完整,

语意连贯。 4.书写需清晰、工整。

hi,sad mother,

i have learned

that_____________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

作文范文: hi,sad mother,

she is afraid you

will punish her if she tells you the truth. besides, nowadays, parents put too much

pressure on their kids. in order not to let you down, she lie .

–heart talk with

her, making her know being honest is more important than scores. in addition, don’

t be too strict.微小的) mistakes.

需要注意积累的词汇、短语、和句子:

daughter 女儿 expectation 期望 be worried / concerned about 担心 calm down 冷

静下来 at a loss 迷惑不解 keep in touch with 保持联系 be strict with sb in sth 在

某方面对某人要求严格 heart-to-heart 推心置腹的

idea 注意想法

test 测试 text 文本 cheat 欺骗 want sb to do sth 想让某人做某事

1. it was because

she didn’t want to let you down that she pretended to achieve high scores. 2. she

isn ’t aware that the lies have hurt both you and herself.

3. being a

teenager, she needs to be encouraged. and it ’s you who can do this. 4. it is probably

your high expectations to her that makes her decide to lie.

5. you should

figure out the reason why she lied to you before solving the problem. 6. it goes without

saying that lying is bad behavior.

7. the reason why

she didn’t tell you the truth may be that she didn’t want to let you down.

8. it is

suggested that you should have a face-to-face talk with her so that she might open

her heart to you.

9. to avoid the

lies, you should encourage her rather than blame her when she fails in exams 10. the

reason that leads to the problem may be various.

11. confronted

with (面对) these problems, you should take a series of effective measures to help

you daughter.

13. it ’s

suggested that you should attach more importance to physical and mental health.

moreover, it’s better to encourage her to do what she wants. 改错:

1. there are some

advice.

2. don’t sad.

3. you should

give her more encourage.

4. she may afraid

that if she fails in the exam, you will punish her.

5. if she has

difficulty in learning, you should inspire she and help she out. 6. she doesn ’t want

you angry. 7. please not to be so worried.

8. one of the

reason is that she isn ’t dare to tell you the truth. 9. because she afraid parents.

10. so she don ’t

want to mention it. 11. you should apology to her.

12. you ’d better

to encourage her to be a honest people. 13. you’d better be care about her health

and study. 14. i’m very understand your condition. 15. she may doesn’t want you

to be angry.

建议信(3)

为了帮助中学生健

康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“heart-to-heart ”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑jamie ,收

到一封署名为worried 的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使

正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下:

1.表示理解并给予

安慰; 2.提出建议并说明理由。 注意:

1.词数120左右;

2.信中不能出现与

本人相关的信息;

3.信的开头与结尾

已为你拟好,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:temper n. 脾气,情绪 hi worried,

i’m sorry to know

that you’re having such a had time at the moment.

yours, jamie hi worried,

im sorry to know

that youre having such a bad time at the moment. the truth is that everyone will have

one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, i quite understand how you

are feeling now and there is no need to worry about it so much. the important thing

is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll

regret. here are three useful tips.

yours, jamie

highlights:

1. first, you are

supposed to figure out what makes you upset,and then keep away from it. 2. what’

s more, you are supposed to take an active part in outdoor activities to relax.

3. to solve the

problem as soon as possible, you can open your heart to a good friend, talking about

your trouble.

4. carried by two,

burdens are lighter.

5. it ’s high time

that you should relieve your pressure.

6. measures are

supposed to be taken to control your temper.

7. there is no

denying that everyone will lose his temper when something unexpected happens. 8.

instead of being angry, what is important for you is to learn to control your temper

from now on.

建议信(4)

高二下期已经过去

半学期,高三已经在向同学们招手。随着学习和心理压力日益加大,一些同学的正常生活受

到影响,如睡眠不好,身体也开始亮起了红灯。请你根据以下要点,给学校的英语刊物写一

篇稿子,向同学们提出建议,并简述理由或举例说明:

1、劳逸结合; 2、

健康饮食; 3、适当锻炼; 4、保持乐观心态。 注意:1、短文必须包括所列内容;2、词

数120左右;

3、文章开头已给出;

4、写成一篇完整的短文,不要逐条列举。

作文范文:

preventing them

sleeping well and causing problems with their health. in order to improve the

condition, i’d like to offer some advice.

i sincerely hope

that the suggestions above will be of great help to you. 句型及短语积累: 1. my advice

is as follows. 2. the following is my advice.

3. finally,

remain optimistic about your future. such a positive attitude towards life can be

helpful in lifting your spirits.

4. then it also

helps to take proper exercise. not only can it strengthen your health, but also it

can make you feel relaxed.

5. go outdoors

and play team games with your friends as it is an effective way to keep healthy. 6.

second, you may as well take some exercise, which is a good way to keep healthy.

7. third, go

outdoors and take exercise. not only can it help students keep healthy, but also it

is a good way to reduce pressure.

9. second, you are supposed to eat healthy food as it will offer students enough energy.

10. in addition, you must eat healthy food so as to keep fit, which is of great importance to your study. 11. as an old saying goes, “all work and no play makes jack a dull boy”.

12. gone are the days when we were at senior 2 and the senior 3 is saying hello to us.

13. go out to breathe fresh air and relax your brain.

14. keeping a healthy diet is essential to you, which helps you keep fit.

15. the most important thing i think is to seek for the balance between study and pleasure.

16. keep a balance between study and relaxation 17. keep fit/healthy keep( in) good health keep in good condition/shape keep in a good state of health 18. with time going by /as time goes by 19. take exercise 纠错:

1.exercise

everyday so that you will be much stronger. 2.remain a optimistic attitude towards life

3.eat more vegetables, which can strength your health. 4.in addition, have a balanced diet can keep your health. 5.only if you believe in yourself you can carry on as normal. 6.take good rest

7.under pressure of study, not only do our lives affected, but also we are in poor condition.(两处错)

8.last but not least, remain optimistic is a good way to lift your spirits. 9.taking exercise properly contributes to make you full of energy. 10.you should eat something which agrees with you .

11.at the same time, we are faced with much stress that results in many students can ’t sleep well.

12.here are some advice on how to solve it.

13.only you ensure enough nutrition can you study better.

14.finally, keep an optimistic attitude to life, it will be helpful in lifting your spirits.

15.write---_________---___________---____________(写出过去式, 过去分词, 现在分词) occur---______________---______________---__________

篇二:高中英语建议信作文

dear

peter, here are a few suggestions. first, it is important to take a chinese course,

as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students.

then, it also helps to watch tv and read books, newspapers, and magazines in chinese

whenever possible. besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing chinese songs,

because by doing so youll learn and remember chinese words more easily. in addition,

you can also make more chinese friends. they will tell you a lot about china and help

you learn chinese.

try writing to me

in chinese next time.

写作注意问题

? 一是单词拼写要

正确,大小写等。开头结尾部分的语法要正确。 ? 二是选择多种表达方式,例如给出的不同

的提建议的句式。 ? 三是结构要清晰,三段式,有过渡词。

? 四是卷面要整洁。

? 五是字数要够,

答题卡上划得横线部分尽量写满,最多剩一行

篇三:建议信英语作文

英语

写作练习:a letter for advice

dear miss wang,

i’m a student

from guizhou experimental high school. i have a problem. i argued with my best friend

lisa for some very tiny things and said some bad words to her a few days ago. then,

we never talk to each other any more.now, i feel quite lonely sometimes and don’

t want to lose my best friend. i know she must be hurt by my words, and i am not sure

that she still want to be my friend or not? i do want to change this situation, but

i don’t know how. i would be grateful if you could give me some advice.

yours, jim what is jim ’s problem? if you were miss wang, what would you say? dear jim, (写作模板) im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how

to (引出主题). here are a few suggestions. first, it is important

to . then, it also helps

to . besides,

it should be a good idea to .

you can also . (此三句不同的句式

提出建议) as to , i suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面). in addition, (其他建议). im sure (预测可能的结果,给对方以行动的信心和决心). im looking forward to (表达愿望).

sincerely yours,

miss wang

英语建议信格式提出建议常用句型i suggest that „ why not do „? why don ’t you

do „? you would better do/ not do „ if i were you ,i would „„ it seems

to me that you could„„ i think it would be more beneficial if you could„„

i feel that it would be beneficial if „ you may consider doing „ as you may

agree that i would like to suggest that„

英语建议信格式-

结尾常用句式

i hope that my

suggestions are helpful for your decision-making anyway.

i would be more

than happy to see improvement in this regard.

i believe that

you will take my suggestions into serious account.

i would be ready

to discuss about this matter with you to further details.

whatever you

decide to do, good luck with your studies/work! 写作中常用连接词:

(1)表选择关系或

对等关系的连接词:either „or „,neither „nor, or, as well as„, and, both„and „

(2)表因果关系或

对等关系的连接词:therefore, so, as a result, as the result of „,because of, due

to „,owing to, thanks to等。

(3)表时间顺序的

连接词:the moment, as soon as, at first, then, later, meanwhile, at the beginning,

in the end, before long, for the first(second „)time, the minute等。

(4)表转折关系的

连接词:yet, and yet, but , while, on the contrary, on the other hand, however, at

the same time(然而)等。

(5)表解释说明的

连接词:that is, that is to say, in other words, such as, for instance, and so on,

etc. and the like等。

(6)表递进关系的

连接词:not only „but (also), what ’s more, whats worse, besides, in addition, worse

still, moreover, above all等。

(7)表示总结的连

接词:in a word, on the whole, in short, briefly, in brief, to sum up, in all 练

习:假定你是李华,你的英国朋友peter 来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要

点写回信。 要点:⑴ 参加中文学习班;⑵ 看中文书刊、电视; ⑶ 学唱中文歌曲; ⑷ 交

中国朋友。

注意:可适当增加

细节,以使行文连贯;开头语已给出。

dear peter,

best wishes,

li hua

篇四:高中英语作文 建议信(如何学英语)

写作

假如你是李华,你

刚收到了你的朋友王梅的电子邮件,她在邮件里向你询问在高中如何学好英语。请你根据下

列的内容给她写封回信。

1. 上课认真听讲,

做好笔记,课后及时复习;

2. 词汇是基础,每

天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词,朗读课文;

3. 课外多与同学

用英语交流,提高听力和口语能力;

4. 每天坚持写日

记。

注意:1. 词数120

—150词左右,短文的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总数;

2.内容可适当发挥,

注意行文连贯。

dear wang mei,

i’m very glad to

have received your e-mail.

best wishes!

yours,

li hua

dear wang mei,

i’m very glad to

have received your e-mail.now i’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn

english well in high school. first of all,you should listen to the teacher carefully

and take notes in class so that 众所周知),vocabulary is of great importance /

essential.you should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading

texts aloud.what ’s more,try to your classmates in english out of class.in this way

you can improve your listening and spoken english quickly.last but not least,you

should keeping a diary,which helps improve your written english and helps you go

over/review the words and expressions that you have learnt.

i hope these

suggestions will be of use to you.remember:where there is a will,there is a way. 有

志者事竟成 /the man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible ”.

一个决心要成功的人是从来不会说“不可能的”。

best wishes!

yours, li hua

篇五:高中英语建议信和倡议书作文精心整理

建议

how to write a

letter for advice

⑴ 说明建议的内

容;

⑵ 提出具体建议

的原因;

⑶ 指出采纳建议

的益处。

注意事项:语言要

委婉、礼貌,顾及对方感受。

directions: for

this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter. suppose you are zhang

ying. write a letter to xiao wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you

during the summer holiday for a week. you should write at least 100 words according

to the suggestions given below in chinese.

1、表示欢迎。 2、

提出对度假安排的建议。 3、祝愿

dear xiao wang,

the palace museum,

the summer place, the great then使文章结构紧凑

will make you

have enough time to appreciate (欣赏) 使自己的安排具有说服力 what you really

want to see.

them with your

own eyes. with more knowledge

about these

places, you will have a better

understanding of

chinese history and culture.

i am eager to meet

you soon in beijing. 表达良好的祝愿,符合文体要求

假如你叫孙军,是恩施高中的学生,要给市长写一封信,反映学校门前交通拥挤现象,包括

以下要点:

参考词汇: 穿行 thread one’s way 天桥 overpass

范文1

dear mayor,

i’m a student of

no.1 middle school. here i have something to tell you.

i’m looking

forward to your reply.

yours,

sun jun

范文2

dear mayor,

i’m a student of

no.1 middle school. here i have something to tell you.

①bordering a

primary school,/②located next to a primary school, my school faces the main road

directly, which always has a traffic jam at the peak time of the whole day. ①

additionally/②in addition, many parents send their young children to school and

fetch them home,① thus making the traffic heavier./②thus causing more serious

traffic jams./③thus resulting in more serious traffic jams. there is no denying that

we students, threading our way through masses of cars, are exposed to great danger.

①seeing these matters, never will i stop urging our government to take some measures.

for the sake of improving the quality of traffic, it is significant to build an

overpass./②in order to release the stress of traffic problems, i strongly suggest

that relevant authorities should take active/effective measures like building an

overpass./③from my point of view,/as far as i’m concerned,/in my opinion, some

measures are supposed to be taken by government as soon as possible such as building

an overpass to improve the conditions of the traffic./④aimed at solving these

problems, the government should take some measures immediately, such as building an

overpass ahead of our school.

i’m looking

forward to your reply.

yours,

sun jun

例1广州某电视台打算开办一个面向中学生观众的英语节目, 新聘任了来自英国的john 作为

节目编辑助理。现在, john 就节目内容向广大中学生征求意见。假如你是学生李华, 建议开

办“广州全接触” (all-round guangzhou)节目。请根据以下节目设想给john 写信:

dear john,

i know you ’re

going to set up an english program for middle school students. so i’m writing to

suggest a program — “all-round guangzhou”. this program will cover topics like

the history, education, famous scenic spots, food and famous people of guangzhou.

it would be better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance

to watch it.

besides, you can

also invite some middle school students to get involved in the program, which will

surely arouse other students ’ interest in it. not only will this program help students

improve their english, but also get them to know more about the culture of guangzhou

so as to introduce guangzhou to foreign visitors. i am sure it will be well-received

by the middle school students. i hope you can take my suggestion into consideration.

sincerely yours, li hua

例2 假设你是小

明的好朋友李华,小明参加了一个英语演讲比赛,他对比赛非常担心,向你求助,请你根据

以下内容给他写一封建议信。

[精华点评]

建议信的写作关键

在于作者给出建议的语气委婉而中肯, 使对方容易接受。很多考生习惯使用祈使句或者you

should 的句型表示建议, 这样比较生硬,因此考生转换不同的句型使语言丰富, 如范文中使

用了you should..., you had better..., remember to do等句型。在最后祝愿对方成功的

时候, 可以用简明扼要的句型, 如wish you good luck / wish you success / may you succeed,

使文章长短句结合得当。

dear xiaoming,

li hua

例3假如你是李华,你刚收到了你的朋友王梅的电子邮件,她在邮件里向你询问在高中如何

学好英语。请你根据下列的内容给她写封回信。

1. 上课认真听讲,

做好笔记,课后及时复习;

2. 词汇是基础,每

天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词,朗读课文;

3. 课外多与同学

用英语交流,提高听力和口语能力;

4. 每天坚持写日

记。

注意:1. 词数120

—150词左右,短文的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总数;

2.内容可适当发挥,

注意行文连贯。

dear wang mei,

i’m very glad to

have received your e-mail. now i’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn

english well in high school.

i hope these

suggestions will be of use to you. remember: where there is a will, there is a way.

/the man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible ”.

best wishes!

yours,

li hua

例4你是我们学校一名很热心的学生,得知我们校要建设娱乐休闲中心,正在征求同学们的

意见,请你根据以下几个方面的提示给校长写一封120词左右的建议信。

1. 娱乐休闲中心

应该包括乒乓球室和羽毛球室。

2. 最好在学生的

课余时间开放。

3. 尽量不要收费。

4. „„

dear mr.

president,

firstly, i ’d like

to suggest that there should be a table-tennis room as well as a badminton court.

i think it would do great good if you could build the center with an eye to those

students who are interested in playing table-tennis or badminton. secondly, could

the center open in our spare time? if so, we will have enough time to make full use

of it. thirdly, we will be more than happy if the center is free. as we all know,

not every student can afford the extra expense.

thank you for

reading my letter. i hope you will consider my suggestions. if the center is built,

it will greatly enhance student life here on campus.

yours sincerely,

li hua

倡议书

写倡议书时,尽量

使用具有鼓动性和感召力的语言,如名人名言、格言、警句、以及对偶、排比等句式,以提

高语言的表达效果。例如,在倡议书的结尾使用下列句子就可起到很好的效果。

“please start

from now on! you never know what you can do until you try!”

structure:

1. introduction

发出倡议的根据、原因和目的。

statement of the

problem

how serious is

the problem

summary of the

proposed solution----in brief, what solution do you propose?

2. body 所倡议的

具体内容和要求。

what do you want

done?

how should it be

done?

what things or

people are needed?

when? how much

will it cost?

3. conclusion 要表示倡议者的决心和希望

benefits—how will the proposal help the person reading the letter

a call to action—what do you want the reader to do

范文欣赏

(introduction of the topic and himself/ threats / proposal)

since we water, we should finding this problem. we may take a decade or more to improve the water quality, even though it may cost a lot of money to clean the polluted rivers.|| secondly,

(measures / difficulties ) ’s act now to make our world a better place.

(foreseeable results/ a call)

例1由于废气、污水、白色垃圾等环境污染已危及到人类的健康与生存, 为鼓励大家节能环保, 你们学校将举办一次“低碳行动”的环保活动, 假设你是高三(6)班的一名学生, 将要在这个活动中向全体师生发起“低碳生活”的倡议, 以下是倡议的内容:

1. 尽量绿色出行:采取步行或自行车方式; 2. 少喝一次瓶装水;3. 尽量不用一次性制品, 如一次性木筷子和塑料袋;4. 每周至少手洗衣服一次; 5. 每周少开手机、电视一天。