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English writing

重点表示法:

1, 好:positive far-reaching favorable beneficial good 2, 坏:harmful adverse negative bad

3, 很,非常:most extremely undoubtedly undeniably 不可

否认的

4, 重要: important fundamental irreplaceable

5, 我认为: in my opinions ; from my perspective ; based what I

know.

6, 导致: attribute to ; contribute to ; give rise to ; bring about;

result in.

7, 越来越: more and more

Students in ever expanding numbers are aware that English is increasing irreplaceable.

8, I am convinced that ----

I believe = I cling to a belief that ------我相信。

Prevalence 热点,流行 fascinate 喜欢,迷住 be –d by /with Sufficient 充足的,足够的 cultivate 培养 temporarily 暂时地 Double-edged sword 双刃剑

P1:(三到五句话为最好)

第一部分:一般为一句话即可, 写问题的重要性。

1, 坏:a. The prevalence of ----- is a severe issue in our society.

b. ----- is a delicate/ controversial /grave problem with which

our country is confronted.

2, 好/中性:a. In contemporary society , there is a sharp increase of

-----phenomenon.

b. In contemporary society ,an overwhelming majority

of people /people in ever expanding number are

beginning to be aware that ------

c. Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that

--------is a prevalent and pervasive problem.

d. There is no denying the fact that----------

e. It is undeniable that--------

第二部分:一般为两句话,简写细节。

在第一部分和第二部分之间长用的关联词有:Taking a

look around; Particularly; For instance; Besides.

第三部分:一般为一句话,总结第一段。

Undoubtedly, these phenomena have already aroused

growing public concern.

Undoubtedly, these behaviors have been in the

spotlight/the focus of the public concern.

P2:

第一部分。TS(关键句) 原因,危害,方法,途径。

原因:1,A multitude of factors ,both individual and social ,/from my

perspective ,could account for /contribute to the

phenomenon of--------

2, The reason for the phenomenon , which are obvious to all

/from my perspective ,can be listed as follows.

3 Considering every aspect of the issue , we may attribute the

fact / phenomenon to the following factors.

方法、途径:In view of the seriousness of the situation ,effective

measures must be taken before things get worse.

危害;Such -----things are bound to generate severe consequence if we

keep a blind eye to them.

------have /exert negative consequence on our credit名誉。 ------adversely affect ------

第二部分。层次感,关联词。

1, 两点:On the one hand ; On the other hand /For one

thing ;for another thing .

2, 三点:First and foremost /To begin with ; In addition

/Additionally/Besides/Furthermore ; Last but not least.

Initially ; Additionally ; Finally.

第三部分,如果字数不够,凑句子的方法。

1, 因果,for the reason that

2, In other words

3, 举例

4, 定语从句

5, 正反论证,on the contrary ; besides.

总结句:1,It is self-evident that ------不言而喻的是

2,There is on denying the fact that-----不可否认的是

3, It comes no surprise that ------好不令人惊讶的是

4, No body had failed to know the fact that

5, It is no exaggeration to say that --------毫不夸张的

P3:比较灵活,以提纲为中心。

包装句:It is imperative for sb to do ----

重视:attach great importance to this issue.

Place great emphasis upon this issue.

第一句总写:1,It is urgent / imperative for us to place great

emphasis upon the issue .

Or take sth into account .

2,On no account can we turn a blind eye to the

issue .

第二句开始分写:1, It is our obligation to -------

2, We should spare no effort to -------

3, We should be educated and enlightened to

arouse / cultivate people’s awareness (of ----)

4, We should appeal (呼吁)to our government

/the public / the mass media to -----

5,The mass media should play irreplaceable

/crucial role in this issue.

最后一部分写总结:All in all , I am convinced(确信) that----- Only by doing sth can we -------

Survive and thrive .

Become prosperous ,harmonious and vigorous(精力充沛的,有活力的).

Address the problem.

Reverse the disturbing trend.

Only by realizing the urgency(紧迫) /priority(优先,重要)of this issue

can our society become prosperous and

harmonious.

两种特别的写作题:图表题和书信题。

一, 图表题。

三图一表:1,表 table

2,线形图 line graph / chart

3, 柱状图 bar graph / chart

4, 比例图 pie chart

变化:1,上升:rise(rose) increase ascend soar

2, 占据: account for take up

3, 倍数: double triple 三倍

4, 时间: 1991年到1995年:

Over the past five-year period from 91 to 95 具体写法:

P1:总写 如图所示(横坐标为时间)

As is illustrated in the 图 ,the past five-year time span(间隔,跨越) from 91 to 95 witness / experienced a dramatic(令人瞩目的,戏剧性的)increase / decrease / changes in ----------

只注重表的头尾即可,besides ; on the contrary.

Accelerate 加速

Change from about ----- to almost----

In terms of -------按照,根据,用---的话, 在---方面

P2 and P2 按照一般文章的写即可。

二, 书信题。

June 17th ,2009 Dear Sir or Madam:

(段顶格写,且段与段之间空一行。)

P1:开门见山说意图。 我是谁,我要干什么。

(hope everything is fine / hello ).I am a student at your college enrolled in Economic Department.

I am writing this letter to do -----

For the purpose of doing-----

Become I intend to inform you that ----- P2:解释写信的原因。

I would be grateful if you take the following contents into account. 致谢:I de eply appreciate your help and I hope to reciprocate(回报) your favor when the opportunity arises.

抱怨:I am writing to complain about the poor service at your

dining-room.

询问:I would like to obtain /seek about some information about---- P3:

1, 发出请求。

I would express my gratitude for your attention.

Please give this letter immediate attention.

2, 留下联系方式。

I hope these ------would be helpful, and please do not hesitate to contact me for information.

3, 期盼回信。

I shall feel obliged by a reply at your earliest convenience.

4, 诸多不便,打扰了。

In addition , let me apologize for any inconveniences I may have caused.

My best wishes.

Yours (sincerely ),(也可写在右下角)

Liming

中文思路:第一段3到5句话 :流行、严重+简单细节+总结句

第二段:关键句(原因、途径、方法、危害)+层次感(细

写)+总结句(模型)

第三段:总写+我们应该怎样做 建议+总写句

∙ FC :本文写的还有点意义,大家可以凑合看看

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∙ 我分三部分写:开头、中间、结尾 首先是文章的开头,作文开头我认为

是最好写的,只要把作文标题写上去就可以了,也最容易提高分值。 It goes without saying that the issue of piracy has caus ...

我分三部分写:开头、中间、结尾

首先是文章的开头,作文开头我认为是最好写的,只要把作文标题写上去就可以了,也最容易提高分值。

It goes without saying that the issue of piracy has caused wide public concern at present. According to a recent survey made by some experts, as many as 60%-80% of the college students have such experiences using piracy produce. In addition,the survey also shows that an

increasing number of people are interested in piracy produce, and will join the army in the future.

这个是我依据六级作文“反盗版”写的,比如今年的六级作文,只要替换成“西方节日”的关键词就可以了。

比如“压力”讨论:

It goes without saying that the issue of stress has caused wide public concern at present. According to a recent survey made by some experts, as many as 60%-80% of the people have felt under stress. In addition, the survey also shows that an increasing number of people will join the army in the future.

我写了什么,我好像什么都没有写?!

中间段落有的要求是分析原因,有的要求是正反观点

对于分析原因,我总结了三个万能原因:经济发展、政策推动、法律制定,以不变应万变

What caused this remarkable phenomenon? Personally, there are at least three premier factors contributing to it. To begin with, the government has been forwarding the policy to support private houses programs. Furthermore, the increased income resulting from economic

growth plays a cardinal part in the changes. Finally, the authorities concerned have made proper regulations to protect private houses. 这个是我依据六级作文“私有房产”改写的,这三个原因可以说在任何方面都是可以用的,再说了改卷的老师都是看你的句型和词汇用的如何,根本就不会注意你写的是什么内容,这个大家都应该是知道的。

比如今年的六级作文,你说“经济发展了所以大家才有钱去过西方节日”难道不可以么?我就是这么写的。

另一个是正反观点

When asked about their opinion of stress, people always response differently. The overwhelming majority of people deem that stress is not the bad thing it is often supposed to be. They are of the attitude that a certain amount of stress is vital to provide motivation and to give purpose in life. On the contrary, there are other people who hold stress contributes to one's mental decline and hence endangers his health. In conformity to them, relaxation, the opposite of stress, is essential for a healthy mind and body.

这个我是依据朱泰祺老师的作文“压力”改写的,大家参考。 结尾有的要求是提出对策,有的要求是趋势分析

提出对策,原因找出来了要提出解决方案,我这里总结了三个万能措施:政府立法、提高意识、认识价值

In conclusion, it is imperative for us to take effective measures to reverse the disturbing phenomenon. To begin with, we should appeal to our authorities to make strict laws to control commercial fishing. Furthermore, we should enhance the awareness of people that the ocean resources are very vital to us. Finally, we should bring home to people the value of protecting ocean resources. Only in this way can we protect our ocean resources. Also I believe that we humans can overcome this difficulty, and we will have a brighter future.

这一部分我是依据考研作文的那篇“鱼”改写的,大家可以参考。 大家想一想,有什么问题这三个措施不能解决的呢?还考虑什么,背吧!

结尾的另一个写法是趋势分析。

From the analyses made above, we may come to the conclusion that the qualities of people's living have been constantly improved between 1995 and 1999. With the further growth in economy and more changes in life style, the tendency indicated in the table will continue in the better direction.

这个是我依据胡敏老师那篇“生活水平提高”改写的,大家参考。 这个写法同样可以适用于今年的六级写作,“以后过西方节日的人会越来越多,是一个趋势”。

以上就是我的作文总结,我写了什么,我好像什么都没有写?!但是对于一篇新的文章我确实能写好多,不是么,大家自己看吧。

这些基本上对于一般的议论文都是可以应付的,大家参考,祝所有的考生早日过关四六级!

内容简单化

一般六级写作的分析问题段,可以从个人和社会两大层面来构思,both individual and social 。 思路是最不重要的,外语考试的作文,除了GRE 和GMAT 以外,考察的目标都不是思维或者分析能力,而是语言能力。所以我们的建议是:简化你的思维。一般来说,思维越复杂,语言就越难表达。大家不用为难自己。别人都想的到的观点你更要写,为什么?因为语言上来区分你们。一般来说,高手2点,一般人3点,

理由一:经济,有钱了 社会

理由二:国外教育发达 社会

理由三:可以扩大视野,增加知识面 个人

理由四:之前回国的人成功,吸引了我们 个人

而至于有人的不同意见更容易想到

1. 出国费用高,一般人承受不起

2. 国外有的大学可能质量不好

3. 不适应外国生活,而且有危险,可能obscene

4. 学生自己没有自制能力,可能会在国外堕落,如我一同学去了新西兰,夜总会。。FC 个人推荐:去美国才是王道,杀G 烤T 才是正道,而出国的前提是背单词,大家大学什么都不要搞,背单词吧

结构模式化

一般的六级写作,都是严格遵循 提出问题-分析-解决的三段论

从近几年的文章来看,行文大多可以套用中心句+123的模式,也就是说,每段第一句改写相应的提纲,后面的1,2,3是连接词,每个连接词后面接自己的分论点。中心突出,层次分明,同时节省了考生构思的麻烦。

其中分析问题段是得分的关键段落,大多是分析原因,方法,危害,

这篇文章比较特殊,大家一定要注意,历史上没有出过这样的文章:为什么

1. 有图表,却没有要求我们写图表

2. 本身是一个对比观点选择题,一二两点提纲都是主体分析问题段,我的看法属于解

决问题段,而考生最好写一段描写图表段,点出“出国人数越来越多”的这个社会现象

也就是说,这篇文章写四段,1 提出现象-描述图表 2,3 正反两方面分析原因 ,各自分两三点4. 我的看法。 在真实考试中,一般不可能出现这样的现象。这是为了全面锻炼大家对各种段落的熟悉程度

语言要包装

主要有两层意思,一是扬长,二是避短

考生再考试中是真正拥有信息最多的人,考官只能被动接受你给的信息。考生出招,考官接招,他永远不知道哪些你会哪些你不会。所以

第一层:如果有自己的经典句,再这么绕也要用上自己的经典句,注意这是你最拿得出手的而且是绝对正确的句子

第二层:如果是临场发挥的话,如果你的语言基础不是太好的话,请保持宁简勿烂的原则,在中国,无论你玩多么高超的语法现象,错了就扣分,所以宁可弱智也别错,这样虽然找不到加分的理由,但是绝对找不到扣分的理由

范文赏析

Part I Writing

Studying Abroad

As is illustrated in the line chart (graph), the number of people studying abroad has increased considerably during the past 4 years from 2004 to 2007. 或者the past four-year time span from 2004 to 2007 witnessed a dramatic increase in the number of people who study abroad . There was a steady rise from about 110,000 in 2004 to 120,000 in 2005. And the number continues to soar in the following 2 years, reaching more than 150,000.

A multitude of factors, both individual and social, could account for the phenomenon. Initially, with the development of economy, more and more people(people in increasing numbers) become better off. And their ability to finance their children’s studying abroad is growing. (因果)Secondly, the education quality of foreign developed countries, like the United States, British, and Australia, is thought to be better than(superior to) that in China. (举例细节)Last but not least, students today are expected and encouraged to go outside to widen their horizon and to face the real world of globalization, which will undoubtedly lay a solid foundation for their future life.

There are, however, also people who think differently. Besides (除开。。以外) the pains in adapting to a unfamiliar environment, there is also the uncertainty about the reliability and

advantages about foreign education, which may depend mainly on the students themselves. (定语从句)

或者:Others, however, think differently. On the one hand, they hold the view that the strange environment may pose a potential and probable threat on students’ personality. On the other hand, it is difficult for them to afford the expensive fees in foreign universities.

From my perspective, on no account can we ignore the trend/phenomenon. For one thing, we must have a good command of both written and oral English in order to adapt to the foreign environment. For another thing, it is our unshirkable obligation to maintain Chinese culture if we study abroad. All in all, I am convinced that only in this way can we develop in a prosperous and harmonious way.

大学生自由选择老师

第一段

In contemporary society, an overwhelming majority of college students are beginning to be aware that there are some dramatic changes on campus. Particularly, some of them are allowed to select the teachers themselves. Undoubtedly, this change has been in the spotlight and arouses the public concern.

版本二:

In contemporary society, students in some universities have the chance to pick their own teachers and professors. This is a prevalent and pervasive issue with which a great number of college students are confronted. Undeniably, such issue has been in the focus of the public and deserves the following analysis.

批注:This is a prevalent and pervasive issue with which a great number of college students are confronted. 这是最新开发出来的套话,如果不知道第一段如何发挥的话(社会热点),此话可以当作绝佳凑字数高级句式表达。不同情况只需改变with which后的主语就可以了。比方with which our society is confronted/with which millions of families are confronted.

A multitude of factors, both individual and social, could account for the phenomenon. Initially, a qualified and popular teacher in university should be able to provide students with profound knowledge, which will undoubtedly exert a far-reaching influence on students’ development. Additionally, students tend to welcome the kind of professor who has honest and moral personality. On the contrary, an obscene teacher will no doubt bring about some adverse consequence on the s tudents. Finally, a lecturer’s character plays an irreplaceable role in students’ choices, which means humorous and easy-going teachers are more likely to be popular among students.

第一句主题句写法有很多。也可以写为

We may attribute the factors of selecting a teacher to the following factors.

The reason for selecting teachers can be listed as follows.

三点理由分别是

1. 知识渊博 2. 诚实道德 3. 性格(举例:幽默随和)

用了无数课堂套路

希望大家好好体会

Directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic college students ’ pressure in finding jobs. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese blow:

1. 目前中国的老年人所占比例不断上升

2. 老龄化社会的到来对整个社会提出了要求

3. 我认为社会应该要做的努力

结构模式化

一般的六级写作,都是严格遵循 提出问题-分析-解决的三段论

考生请牢记:四级考试要求120字,写10句话,六级写作要求150字,写12句就可以了。如果是提出-分析-解决问题的经典套路的话,第一段提出问题3-4句,第三段解决问题或者你的看法4句,中间5句就可以了。你只有首先知道写几句话才能让心里明白考场上的时间花在什么地方。

从近几年的文章来看,行文大多可以套用中心句+123的模式,也就是说,每段第一句改写相应的提纲,后面的1,2,3是连接词,每个连接词后面接自己的分论点。中心突出,层次分明,同时节省了考生构思的麻烦。

内容简单化

一般六级写作的分析问题段,可以从个人和社会两大层面来构思,both individual and social 。 思路是最不重要的,外语考试的作文,除了GRE 和GMAT 以外,考察的目标都不是思维或者分析能力,而是语言能力。所以我们的建议是:简化你的思维。一般来说,思维越复杂,语言就越难表达。大家不用为难自己。别人都想的到的观点你更要写,为什么?因为语言上来区分你们。一般来说,高手2点,一般人3点,

就这次考试而言,话题比较偏,很多考生无从下笔。还有很多人觉得自己的满肚子的高深思想无法表达。其实我建议,请一定要简化你的思路,考官在改卷的30秒到45秒内,无法看出来你的高深思想。只要切题就可以了。

语言要包装

主要有两层意思,一是扬长,二是避短

考生再考试中是真正拥有信息最多的人,考官只能被动接受你给的信息。考生出招,考官接招,他永远不知道哪些你会哪些你不会。所以

第一层:如果有自己的经典句,再这么绕也要用上自己的经典句,注意这是你最拿得出手的而且是绝对正确的句子

第二层:如果是临场发挥的话,如果你的语言基础不是太好的话,请保持宁简勿烂的原则,在中国,无论你玩多么高超的语法现象,错了就扣分,所以宁可弱智也别错,这样虽然找不到加分的理由,但是绝对找不到扣分的理由

卷面要整洁

下面就本次考试做出简要分析,具体范文大家可以去我上课提供的公共邮箱里去查看

第一段是提出社会现象,3-4句就可以了,最好采取总分总的模式。第一句话从总体趋势描述老龄化这个社会现象已经在上升了。上升怎么写?increase, on the rise, popular, prevalent; hotly debated issue都可以选择。第二句话最好具体阐述一下你所看到的现象,写身边的老龄化的现象很多。第三句话承上启下,说明这个问题已经引起了社会的关注,对国家提出了要求。

In contemporary society, an overwhelming majority of people are beginning to be aware that the number of old people is on the rise. This is a prevalent and pervasive issue with which our society is confronted. Particularly, we can see the aging phenomenon in all walks of life. Undeniably, such issue has been in the focus of the public and deserves the following analysis.

A multitude of requirements,both individual and social, are brought about by this phenomenon. This phenomenon, undoubtedly, will bring about the following influences both on individual and on society.

Initially, 社会服务和保险医疗

Additionally, 为经济发展带来压力

Finally, 也要求我们自身提出了要求

1.It exerts an unfavorable consequence on our social services such as medical insurance, for the reason that we do not have enough preparation. 2. It also poses a potential and probable threat to/on the economic development, which means that more older people will bring about more pressure. 3. this is a big/huge/tremendous challenge for ourselves. In other words, we have to spend more time in taking care of them.

From my perspective, on no account can we turn a blind eye to this phenomenon.

或者it is imperative for us to take effective and efficient measures to reverse the disturbing trend. On the one hand, it is our obligation to take care of our aging parents. On the other hand, we should appeal to the public to build more hospitals and community services to meet the increasing needs of the aged. I am convinced that only in this way can our society become harmonious and prosperous. (养老足球赛,精神家园)

范文:

Coping with An Aging Society

3 decades of reform and opening-up saw the solid and rapid growth of Chinese economy, and also an increasing number of elder population and its high rate compared to the whole population since the adoption of family-planning policy. To some extent, china has moved into a aging society, how to coping with this issue and make all the elder people live a happy and healthy later life is the central issue for our government and the whole society.

With the emergence of much elder population, our society must take some measures to meet the needs and requirements of the aged. Firstly, their healthcare is the main issue. For this part, I think we must build some elder-oriented hospital and community clinic, where elder caring is the priority and all the physicians will focus on how to treat and take care common diseases of elder people. Further more, recreational activities should also be put into agenda. After their retirement, the elder also need to participate in the community activities. In my opinion, a variety of clubs and group, such as dancing, boxing exercise, can be organized to enrich the life of elder people.

假冒商品的危害 P2

Fake goods are bound to bring about severe consequences if we fail to attach great importance to the phenomenon. Initially, they adversely affect the health condition of numerous consumers, for the reason that consumers can not easily recognize them. Additionally, fake goods pose a probable and potential threat on our national economy, because/as consumers do not believe the market system. In other words, this phenomenon will undermine the whole business. Finally, we have business with foreign countries. If fake goods are discovered in the overseas trade, it will undoubtedly exert a negative influence on our reputation.

Accordingly/From my perspective, it is imperative for us to take effective and efficient measures to reverse the disturbing trend. On the one hand, we each individual should start from here and now and attach great importance and value to the urgency of the issue. On the other hand, it is our obligation to appeal to our government to control the situation. All in all, I am convinced that only in this way can we make our society and market harmonious and prosperous.

主要句式练习

1. Only by reading the Chinese traditional books can we understand our glorious civilization and

cultivate our personality.

只有看了中国的传统书籍之后我们才能了解中国的光荣的文明并且培养我们的人格

句型结构:Only by doing sth can SB V1+V2, 一个动词也可以,两个动词更加能够拉长句子,写出层次感。

或者:We can understand our glorious civilization and cultivate our personality so/as long as we attach great importance to(重视) our traditional culture.

Only by using computers properly and reasonably can we make the best use of them and study more effectively and efficiently.

只有合理的使用电脑我们才能够最好的利用他们(电脑)并且更有效率的学习。

2. 学生们更喜欢看科幻小说,因为科幻小说很有意思,也在孩子们的想象力方面发挥了重

要作用。然而,历史书太难太复杂了,学生看不懂。因此,我认为兴趣在学习过程中无疑产生了深远的影响。

Students are more fascinated with fictions, for the reason that they are interesting and play a crucial/irreplaceable role in children ’s imagination. On the contrary, history books are too difficult and complex for students to understand. Therefore, I am convinced that interest undoubtedly exerts a far-reaching influence on learning process.

也可以说

Students are more fascinated with fictions, because /as/since/in that they are interesting and lay a solid foundation for children ’s imagination.

Students are more fascinated with fictions, because /as/since/in that they are interesting and exert a beneficial/positive/favorable/far-reaching influence/impact on children ’s imagination.