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中考满分作文 My Classmate

请以“My Classmate”为标题写一篇记叙文

要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。 2、字数在100字

以内。

思路点拨:

写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代

清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。

这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。本文以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实

感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。

满分作文:

My Classmate

Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.

One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road.

A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived , and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was

late. He was then praised for what he had done.

Going abroad for studies

Directions : You are allowed 40 minutes to write an essay no less than 150 words on the following topic.

1.Going abroad for studies costs a large sum of money.

2. But even so it attracts many young people.

3.Do you like to join them if you have an opportunity?why ?Give your reasons.

范文:

Going abroad for Studies

The other day I announced that I would go abroad for further studies right after my college education. My decision evoked the immediate objection of my family: Why ? Why should I borrow a huge sum of money for overseas studies while I might receive the same education at home at relatively low cost? My answer is: in addition to knowledge, I can gain experience that those who stay at home will never have.

First , experience is the opportunity for the real-life use of foreign languages. While a person can study a foreign language at home, the effect can never be compared with constant use of the language in academic and everyday life. There is no better opportunity to improve

second-language skills than living in the country in which it is spoken. Living in English-speaking countries such as America and Australia for several years , for example , my English will be as perfect as native speakers.

Second , living and studying abroad offers me a different perspective of the world. On a university campus , foreign students are likely to encounter their counterparts from different countries and areas and are exposed to different ideas and values. This helps me to have a meaningful understanding of different societies and inevitably sees my own country in a new light.

Third , overseas experience, frustrating and painful as it may be, is helpful. A person going abroad for study often experiences much more difficulty ——difficulty in adapting to a new culture and in dealing with all problems alone. Yet , the difficulty , coupled with the frustration brought on by culture shock, is a rewarding experience for one's future life and development of personality.

Although going abroad is expensive and perhaps painful, the payoff is worthwhile. For the benefit is not merely knowledge gained, but the experience desirable in one's personal life.

中考满分作文 My Views on Examinations

Secondly, tests will bring the examinees great pressure , which can affect their lives. A typical example of this is that most young students have worn glasses even though some of them are still children. For preparing for tests , they must spend a lot of time on doing their homework so that their eyesight becomes worse and worse. And the more time they spend on those , the less time they have for playing and relaxing. Consequently, there is a bad influence on their health.

Since school comes into being , the test standard has been used to appraise performance of students. So far it is still being used, which may suggest that actually there are some advantages in it. However, it is also highly possible that the test standard is a not ideal way to find out what students have learned and what they haven't. Most school is still using it just because there is no better method to replace it.

In my opinion, the following three points are the critical flaws in the test standard.

One of the most harmful effects on the test method is that it will force us to study just for passing tests, not for acquiring knowledge especially in China. Obviously the final object of education is making us intellective by learning more knowledge. While the test is only a way to examine the level of students' studies, it has been deteriorated to a sifter deciding the

fate of students. Why can it be called a terrible sifter? Now in the tests, which decide who can enter a higher school , thousands of poor students , who want a splendid future, must prepare for the tests by finishing a great deal of practices. Those practice tests are heavy-laden to them. So in this case , how can they be expected to study to obtain knowledge ? To them that are enough if they can reach the level which tests need. In the end what our nation will get , genuine persons with ability or just test robots?