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2013-4-16 1. As the development of computer and Internet, e-education…

2. Following the internet progresses day after day, e-education becomes more and more popular.

3. Following the society’s progress, more and more people will accept it.

4. As knows to everyone, … /As it is known to us, …

5. In my opinion, It is only a good supplement that it can lead to a better education.

6. As it is coming, many new things come out.

7. But others say that it is bad to our society, students learn by E-mail don’t have the chance to

cooperate with each other.

8. As the streets are becoming more and more crowd, study at home is quite a good way to …

9. Others argue that e-education has not been understood easier than the old education.

10. It is only when people don’t want to study that e-education lead to helpless of study.

11. They think it you don’t change, you will get left behind. As the same of now university can

afford not to be on the Internet.

12. I’m agree of the former view.

13. Students don’t need to go around to study as the rise of this new kind of teaching.

14. It is not sure that education is instead by e-education.

15. E-education is necessary as the development of society.

16. They are of the opinion that any college won’t be on the Internet can’t carry on.

17. Others argue that e-education make people can’t communicate with the other people.

18. Other argue that how do we make certain that …

19. But too many laid off teacher have nothing to do may lead to society problems.

20. As the world developing, education of the internet is becoming more and more widespread.

21. As is know to all, …

22. It is known to everybody, Internet is changing our lives.

23. As known to everyone, e-education is becoming more and more popular.

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